Reviews of As a father, I just want to quietly watch you live a long life by Li Hongtian - Webnovel

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Discarded

the book missing a tag. system tag 🔖🔖🔖🔖🔖🔖

15d
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Transhumanist

Inconsistent and weak world building. At chapter 100 our MC is suddenly turned into a bull demon, when prior to that he was only named by the city folk, Bull Demon because he wore a bull mask to do vigilante murders. Why the hell did the author made such an asinine change I don't know.

15d
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Annette_Johner

Thanks for sharing your talent for storytelling 🫶🏻 I enjoyed curling up with a coffee ☕️ and enjoying your novel as the characters developed and the plot thickened. I am loving your novel and can hardly wait to see what will happen … I look forward to it being offered again 🥰🫶🏻⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️🫶🏻

16d
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Parthiban_G

The story development is very slow. But it's got a very good world background and new elements. The MC is a family man but takes too much risk and is always greedy for small powerups. He is also smart and does lots of planning. But the Plot armour is also very thick in this one.

21d
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AllhailTrump

Fake synopsis Mc doesn't become OP but learns skills through using doa fruits but has to master them .The story is quite boring at the start focusing on Mc becoming wood sculptor . The world background is messed up the author should have just kept a simple world background.

1mth
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Luchee_321

good story development and fresh twist. hope that author keep up the good work. maintain the quality

1mth
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Soma_PGR

If possible please someone comment all the realm .....................................................................................................

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Asc_EIf
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Honestly I like how down to earth this novel is and even though the MC has a golden finger system it doesn't automatically give him OP powers and he has to work for it. There are 2 Paths in this novel, The Martial Path and The Divine Cultivation Path, The Martial Path as you all know delves into refining the body to be powerful and there are stages in it. The Divine Cultivation Path delves with mythological Chinese gods, from my understanding, You must first build a Divine Foundation with a Divine Foundation Manual which can be acquired through noble families,sects,imperial families, or God temples. And there are different qualities to Divine Foundations I believe, I've read so fa there are seven emotions foundations like Joy, Sad, Furious, Happy, (can't remember the rest lol), and Four Imperial Levels, and there's more which is kind of confusing, because of all these different names lol, but the higher the quality of your divine foundation acquired from Cultivation Manuals the farther you can go in the Divine Cultivation Path. I wish the translation was kind of better but this is fine as well, not perfect for 5 stars but 4 stars for superb grammar and storytelling. [img=update] Occasionally names for cultivation stages will change back and forth but it's fine. I love this novel either way!

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Pefayl

I have only read the free chapter so about thirty and here is my conclusion. A pretty basic start but the daughter father thing, does add some flavour to it. Now I am not a fan of these types, since almost always the mc has an insane enemy almost right from the start, which makes him always under constant threat. I don’t think this is that bad, but it’s incredibly overused. Like can it be a bit chiller? I understand that the massive darkness and corruption portrayed is part of the story and world building, but it’s so overused and not in a good way. I am too lazy to check my grammar but yeah, adding the family type in does make it more readable and not just meaningless (since u can find extremely similar novels in a large number) I have no idea about the translation or update schedule, since I scimmed through the novel mostly so I just gave them both 4

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1mth
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Arodicus

This story is pretty unique. The power system and world background are interesting. Mc has a bit of a split personality but it’s understandable in some ways when thinking about how a normal person would cope with what mc is doing. Overall I would suggest reading!

1mth
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Jieldan

it was good theme I like at the beginning, but it was changed to become same ordinary cultivation story, and to be honest the story becomes much ordinary, the difference was instead getting skill from the master or someplace it was from his daughter. and to be honest I don't like how the MC way of thinking changes after he got the system, instead thinking as a father, the MC becomes much more thinking like a martial art people, he become like he protecting his daughter and make her life safely to become stronger.

1mth
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DaoistXuw7j5

Good overall, funny just wished that the systems of martial arts were explained better through the story and the different systems were more similar in names to not get confused

1mth
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Ximnax
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I’m seeing good reviews so I’m just going to go ahead and give it a 5 star rating before I dive into it

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2mth
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Gian_Carpio

Empty. No heart given into it. Another catfish by the author. No details. How much did the MC make during the time skip? How do you get more cuts. He has a dao fruit yet still a one cut? These are the details that matter and the details that will never come up. How many square meters is his home. Whats in his large court yard. Are there rooms specifically for his craft? What are his tools? What technique does he use? What does mc look like. What does his wife look like. If he’s from earth then what does that contribute to the story he couldnt even make a cross bow. The names in the story doesnt hold power. The realms are forgetable. Mc’s cultivation is built off random trinkets. The cultivation isnt even detailed he just reads a book and everything else is time skipped. Its not a working mechanism where one act impacts others its just a puppet for authors. The book doesnt feel alive but thats webnovel for you i suppose

2mth
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nimmyy

Thank you for this wonderful story. I hope this gem gets noticed by readers. Looking for the story ahead.

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2mth
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DemonWolf000

Honestly, I really liked this, Author should continue this story. This is a gem among the common multiplying system genre. It is unique and without harem, this novel is even great, with how he explained the importance of family. I hope you could earn in this novel and write more novels.

2mth
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GeneralDeFartos_L

Review by chapter 32. Finally, something unique done right. A solid story of a transmigrator who became a father and obtained a gold finger, however, he never cared more about his power, the focus of the story never deviated from his love for his daughter. The dude never thought of getting a harem or making as many babies to become stronger. His purpose in life is to be there for his daughter and protect her. The title lives up to expectations. Highly recommended. MC has a loving wife and lovely daughter. No nonsense about harem or main character aura, he's just a father who loves his wife and daughter. The gold finger is satisfactory, it has the potential to be OP, but it needs the MC to work for it. It basically just gives the MC an opportunity and a skill, and it's up to the MC to power up. Also, getting one skill per year is perfect, the story doesn't become saturated with a million skills and author forgets them, no, this story is about quality skills that last throughout the story. the pacing is nice and doesn't bore you. The only downside are the lack of interactions; we don't connect with MC, we don't feel affection for his daughter, the novel just says that she's lovable and cute, but we don't feel because there are no meaningful interactions. The same goes for all characters. Even the MC is hard to connect with. All interactions just feel like they have a purpose but no substance. Thats' the only downside for now in my opinion.

3mth
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Jemase

This story isn't very good. The plot is simplistic. The MC wants to protect his daughter and bad guys come at him from weak to strong while allowing him to get stronger. There is no reason the stronger foes don't come sooner. He beats lvl 1 foe then lvl 2,etc... He never uses his brain to delay his ennemies, he just goes with the flow and plot armour makes sure he is never in danger. The author tries to make us believe the MC thinks but he just bulldozers his ennemies, there is no finesse. He goes against ennemies without knowing their strength nor their background and by miracle he is always stronger. And the golden finger is too cheated. He gets 1 Dao fruit every year on his daughter's birthday. I stopped when he had 4 and the 4 were crazy powerful. I can't imagine when his daughter turns 20 years old. The characters are simple, you are either a good guy or a bad guy. The bad guys are bat shit crazy and people let them be crazy. The MC's wife is useless. She has no personality, no use whatsoever in tne story. MC does his thing and he doesn't confide in her. It takes too many chapters for her to cultivate even though she could. And finally, either the original or the translation is horrible. I'm not a native english speaker but I read many stories in english so I have a pretty good level in English. But very often I don't quite understand the author. The way the sentences are written is puzzling.

3mth
Lihat 2 balasan
SleepyLibrarian

I kinda read ahead on the raws and I noticed a certain duo from a previous work appearing later on in the story multiple times. Specifically a certain chef and his big black dog. I love it when we get cameos. 😆

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3mth
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Ahmed_Emad_7244

very good novel.........................

3mth
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DaoistwLFEsJ

very good.........................................................................................................................................

3mth
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rghd03594

Good book ,update demand is too high, plz update ......................................................................................................

3mth
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Ahmed_Emad_9773

continue uploading brother . it's a very interesting book ...................................................................................

3mth
Lihat 0 balasan
Overdrive_Titan

a good novel good world background , character of MC is quite resonating, good thrill, well it is not some new conceptual novel, as I have already read a novel based on 4 daughters, but it is also different kind of ride upto some sense.story development is good, about one of the villains,he is forgotten without getting killed, that I felt some regret,but it's good that the villains are atleast getting killed. But sometimes too much focus on wood carving has been given, which feels that MC is limiting his abilities feels that he should dabble in different fields, well that was it.good work ...

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4mth
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Marinoboi

Such an enjoyable read. Hidden gem of a story. I just hope the daughter wont become like that one from that one book where half the audience dropped after 20ish chapters because of her disgusting character.

4mth
Lihat 0 balasan
SonDio

This is a good novel, it calms the soul and poisons it. It is certainly not for everyone, it has its touch and if you are here it is because you belong to a group of special readers.

4mth
Lihat 0 balasan
Bmarsh8545

A masterpiece of a story, I’m completely hooked.

4mth
Lihat 0 balasan
qaiser333

loving father with heart warming to kill until he is drunk , oh sorry play with his child i mean [img=nervous] love the story so much , cant wait for more

5mth
Lihat 0 balasan
Amog_elang

So far, it is an enjoyable book to read and I can't wait for more. It has action, a protective father, a loving wife and an adorable daughter - a perfect combination.

5mth
Lihat 0 balasan
Objectively_Wrong

A Li Hongtian work so it should almost definitely be a cut above most trash novels. Good translation, maybe done by a real person? Though, this genre might not appeal to braindead action readers.

5mth
Lihat -1 balasan
Discarded

the book missing a tag. system tag 🔖🔖🔖🔖🔖🔖

15d
Lihat 1 balasan
Transhumanist

Inconsistent and weak world building. At chapter 100 our MC is suddenly turned into a bull demon, when prior to that he was only named by the city folk, Bull Demon because he wore a bull mask to do vigilante murders. Why the hell did the author made such an asinine change I don't know.

15d
Lihat 0 balasan
Annette_Johner

Thanks for sharing your talent for storytelling 🫶🏻 I enjoyed curling up with a coffee ☕️ and enjoying your novel as the characters developed and the plot thickened. I am loving your novel and can hardly wait to see what will happen … I look forward to it being offered again 🥰🫶🏻⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️🫶🏻

16d
Lihat 0 balasan
Parthiban_G

The story development is very slow. But it's got a very good world background and new elements. The MC is a family man but takes too much risk and is always greedy for small powerups. He is also smart and does lots of planning. But the Plot armour is also very thick in this one.

21d
Lihat 0 balasan
AllhailTrump

Fake synopsis Mc doesn't become OP but learns skills through using doa fruits but has to master them .The story is quite boring at the start focusing on Mc becoming wood sculptor . The world background is messed up the author should have just kept a simple world background.

1mth
Lihat 0 balasan
Luchee_321

good story development and fresh twist. hope that author keep up the good work. maintain the quality

1mth
Lihat 0 balasan
Soma_PGR

If possible please someone comment all the realm .....................................................................................................

img
1mth
Lihat 0 balasan
Asc_EIf
LV 13 Badge

Honestly I like how down to earth this novel is and even though the MC has a golden finger system it doesn't automatically give him OP powers and he has to work for it. There are 2 Paths in this novel, The Martial Path and The Divine Cultivation Path, The Martial Path as you all know delves into refining the body to be powerful and there are stages in it. The Divine Cultivation Path delves with mythological Chinese gods, from my understanding, You must first build a Divine Foundation with a Divine Foundation Manual which can be acquired through noble families,sects,imperial families, or God temples. And there are different qualities to Divine Foundations I believe, I've read so fa there are seven emotions foundations like Joy, Sad, Furious, Happy, (can't remember the rest lol), and Four Imperial Levels, and there's more which is kind of confusing, because of all these different names lol, but the higher the quality of your divine foundation acquired from Cultivation Manuals the farther you can go in the Divine Cultivation Path. I wish the translation was kind of better but this is fine as well, not perfect for 5 stars but 4 stars for superb grammar and storytelling. [img=update] Occasionally names for cultivation stages will change back and forth but it's fine. I love this novel either way!

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1mth
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Pefayl

I have only read the free chapter so about thirty and here is my conclusion. A pretty basic start but the daughter father thing, does add some flavour to it. Now I am not a fan of these types, since almost always the mc has an insane enemy almost right from the start, which makes him always under constant threat. I don’t think this is that bad, but it’s incredibly overused. Like can it be a bit chiller? I understand that the massive darkness and corruption portrayed is part of the story and world building, but it’s so overused and not in a good way. I am too lazy to check my grammar but yeah, adding the family type in does make it more readable and not just meaningless (since u can find extremely similar novels in a large number) I have no idea about the translation or update schedule, since I scimmed through the novel mostly so I just gave them both 4

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1mth
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Arodicus

This story is pretty unique. The power system and world background are interesting. Mc has a bit of a split personality but it’s understandable in some ways when thinking about how a normal person would cope with what mc is doing. Overall I would suggest reading!

1mth
Lihat 0 balasan
Jieldan

it was good theme I like at the beginning, but it was changed to become same ordinary cultivation story, and to be honest the story becomes much ordinary, the difference was instead getting skill from the master or someplace it was from his daughter. and to be honest I don't like how the MC way of thinking changes after he got the system, instead thinking as a father, the MC becomes much more thinking like a martial art people, he become like he protecting his daughter and make her life safely to become stronger.

1mth
Lihat 0 balasan
DaoistXuw7j5

Good overall, funny just wished that the systems of martial arts were explained better through the story and the different systems were more similar in names to not get confused

1mth
Lihat 0 balasan
Ximnax
LV 14 Badge

I’m seeing good reviews so I’m just going to go ahead and give it a 5 star rating before I dive into it

img
2mth
Lihat 0 balasan
Gian_Carpio

Empty. No heart given into it. Another catfish by the author. No details. How much did the MC make during the time skip? How do you get more cuts. He has a dao fruit yet still a one cut? These are the details that matter and the details that will never come up. How many square meters is his home. Whats in his large court yard. Are there rooms specifically for his craft? What are his tools? What technique does he use? What does mc look like. What does his wife look like. If he’s from earth then what does that contribute to the story he couldnt even make a cross bow. The names in the story doesnt hold power. The realms are forgetable. Mc’s cultivation is built off random trinkets. The cultivation isnt even detailed he just reads a book and everything else is time skipped. Its not a working mechanism where one act impacts others its just a puppet for authors. The book doesnt feel alive but thats webnovel for you i suppose

2mth
Lihat 2 balasan
nimmyy

Thank you for this wonderful story. I hope this gem gets noticed by readers. Looking for the story ahead.

img
2mth
Lihat 0 balasan
DemonWolf000

Honestly, I really liked this, Author should continue this story. This is a gem among the common multiplying system genre. It is unique and without harem, this novel is even great, with how he explained the importance of family. I hope you could earn in this novel and write more novels.

2mth
Lihat 0 balasan
GeneralDeFartos_L

Review by chapter 32. Finally, something unique done right. A solid story of a transmigrator who became a father and obtained a gold finger, however, he never cared more about his power, the focus of the story never deviated from his love for his daughter. The dude never thought of getting a harem or making as many babies to become stronger. His purpose in life is to be there for his daughter and protect her. The title lives up to expectations. Highly recommended. MC has a loving wife and lovely daughter. No nonsense about harem or main character aura, he's just a father who loves his wife and daughter. The gold finger is satisfactory, it has the potential to be OP, but it needs the MC to work for it. It basically just gives the MC an opportunity and a skill, and it's up to the MC to power up. Also, getting one skill per year is perfect, the story doesn't become saturated with a million skills and author forgets them, no, this story is about quality skills that last throughout the story. the pacing is nice and doesn't bore you. The only downside are the lack of interactions; we don't connect with MC, we don't feel affection for his daughter, the novel just says that she's lovable and cute, but we don't feel because there are no meaningful interactions. The same goes for all characters. Even the MC is hard to connect with. All interactions just feel like they have a purpose but no substance. Thats' the only downside for now in my opinion.

3mth
Lihat 0 balasan
Jemase

This story isn't very good. The plot is simplistic. The MC wants to protect his daughter and bad guys come at him from weak to strong while allowing him to get stronger. There is no reason the stronger foes don't come sooner. He beats lvl 1 foe then lvl 2,etc... He never uses his brain to delay his ennemies, he just goes with the flow and plot armour makes sure he is never in danger. The author tries to make us believe the MC thinks but he just bulldozers his ennemies, there is no finesse. He goes against ennemies without knowing their strength nor their background and by miracle he is always stronger. And the golden finger is too cheated. He gets 1 Dao fruit every year on his daughter's birthday. I stopped when he had 4 and the 4 were crazy powerful. I can't imagine when his daughter turns 20 years old. The characters are simple, you are either a good guy or a bad guy. The bad guys are bat shit crazy and people let them be crazy. The MC's wife is useless. She has no personality, no use whatsoever in tne story. MC does his thing and he doesn't confide in her. It takes too many chapters for her to cultivate even though she could. And finally, either the original or the translation is horrible. I'm not a native english speaker but I read many stories in english so I have a pretty good level in English. But very often I don't quite understand the author. The way the sentences are written is puzzling.

3mth
Lihat 2 balasan
SleepyLibrarian

I kinda read ahead on the raws and I noticed a certain duo from a previous work appearing later on in the story multiple times. Specifically a certain chef and his big black dog. I love it when we get cameos. 😆

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3mth
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Ahmed_Emad_7244

very good novel.........................

3mth
Lihat 0 balasan
DaoistwLFEsJ

very good.........................................................................................................................................

3mth
Lihat 0 balasan
rghd03594

Good book ,update demand is too high, plz update ......................................................................................................

3mth
Lihat 0 balasan
Ahmed_Emad_9773

continue uploading brother . it's a very interesting book ...................................................................................

3mth
Lihat 0 balasan
Overdrive_Titan

a good novel good world background , character of MC is quite resonating, good thrill, well it is not some new conceptual novel, as I have already read a novel based on 4 daughters, but it is also different kind of ride upto some sense.story development is good, about one of the villains,he is forgotten without getting killed, that I felt some regret,but it's good that the villains are atleast getting killed. But sometimes too much focus on wood carving has been given, which feels that MC is limiting his abilities feels that he should dabble in different fields, well that was it.good work ...

img
4mth
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Marinoboi

Such an enjoyable read. Hidden gem of a story. I just hope the daughter wont become like that one from that one book where half the audience dropped after 20ish chapters because of her disgusting character.

4mth
Lihat 0 balasan
SonDio

This is a good novel, it calms the soul and poisons it. It is certainly not for everyone, it has its touch and if you are here it is because you belong to a group of special readers.

4mth
Lihat 0 balasan
Bmarsh8545

A masterpiece of a story, I’m completely hooked.

4mth
Lihat 0 balasan
qaiser333

loving father with heart warming to kill until he is drunk , oh sorry play with his child i mean [img=nervous] love the story so much , cant wait for more

5mth
Lihat 0 balasan
Amog_elang

So far, it is an enjoyable book to read and I can't wait for more. It has action, a protective father, a loving wife and an adorable daughter - a perfect combination.

5mth
Lihat 0 balasan
Objectively_Wrong

A Li Hongtian work so it should almost definitely be a cut above most trash novels. Good translation, maybe done by a real person? Though, this genre might not appeal to braindead action readers.

5mth
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