Reviews of Hechicero supremo en hogwarts by YoDarki - Webnovel

How to start? The story has a good beginning and trajectory. The world itself has been expanded to fit the type of Marvel magic, that is, extra details about the magic. The author chose to go the route of saying that he is a reincarnated person to his adoptive grandparents. A decision that I normally repudiate. But, I just had to skip it and ignore that it happened. They don't talk about it much because it doesn't matter. The character setup was changed to fit the author's mood. Fleur, in this story, is portrayed as a quarrelsome and bad-tempered person, but this was to make fun of the MC's relationship. Speaking of him, I have a lot to say about him. Stephen is a shallow character. He likes to make jokes about everything. If you want something serious, a serious character, this story is not for you. Even for those looking for a little humor, this might be too much. MC likes to see how people react to things, that is, there are often scenes with exaggerated reactions. The story is good. It's not bad for a first story. But, it is that. For some people, the first time writing is just a test. Many first-time authors do the same thing with their characters, making them childish and easy to write. That's why many end up giving up. That's not the case with this story. The story, the characters, the relationship, I like them all. Now for the criticism. The text seems to have been written and not proofread. Some things were out of context or difficult to follow, making me want to skip paragraphs. The character is tiring. Tiring to read and for some people, perhaps nauseating. Anything that is used in excess becomes bad. Now, author, understand that my comment is not a hateful comment about the story or your writing, they are suggestions of what, in your next stories, or in this one, you can improve.