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Hey man ! I think that your fic is one of the few that can up the level of Elden Ring fic . I hope to see New chapters pretty son ! And Morgott for the win
this fanfic has a lot of potential, only the update frequency is a bit low. But they story itself and the adequate grammar more than make up for it. I can only recommend reading this fanfic.
Instant 5 stars, why because I love fromsoftware games love the gritty atmosphere and the undertone of the hope premises of the games and seeing a fanfic made me hyped
Alright, I really like the concept of this story, and on that alone I'm gonna give it a 5 star view
So far so good if we could tone it the hell down with the whole perverted mc thing (yes I get it this is WebNovel half of the stories have. Mc’s who’ve already decided to have a harem of children from the beginning) but it would focus the story much better if that was toned down going forward love the concept of the mc being an important omen character his sister as well exploring the crucibles many blessings and the formless mother would be a great route to explore further.
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Hey man ! I think that your fic is one of the few that can up the level of Elden Ring fic . I hope to see New chapters pretty son ! And Morgott for the win
this fanfic has a lot of potential, only the update frequency is a bit low. But they story itself and the adequate grammar more than make up for it. I can only recommend reading this fanfic.
Instant 5 stars, why because I love fromsoftware games love the gritty atmosphere and the undertone of the hope premises of the games and seeing a fanfic made me hyped
Alright, I really like the concept of this story, and on that alone I'm gonna give it a 5 star view
So far so good if we could tone it the hell down with the whole perverted mc thing (yes I get it this is WebNovel half of the stories have. Mc’s who’ve already decided to have a harem of children from the beginning) but it would focus the story much better if that was toned down going forward love the concept of the mc being an important omen character his sister as well exploring the crucibles many blessings and the formless mother would be a great route to explore further.
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