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The system has become a friend. which is never good it becomes a crutch for the author as the system becomes the best friend of the MC or even the second MC because seintent systems are always with the MC meaing ALL other character interactions become secondary to the system. What happens when he finds a girl friend or gets married. i can already here him yelling at his wife " YOU DONT KNOW ANYTHING ABOUT ME!! MY SYSTEM KNOWS WHAT I LIKE!!"
A fantastic story. And actually entertaining leave on journey to becoming superman. if there was one thing, the story got right, it is Superman special brand of heroism doing the right thing even if it’s hard. There are some weird things to though mainly the terraforming of Mars. Does Jon Jones not exist here anyway, here is five stars to keep you going.
The author did a great job, I enjoyed reading it very much. Many people did not like the fact that there was a system, but the existence of the system is not important in the story except for the first chapters. It just helps the main character, which I think is nice! I also liked the personality of the main character, he looks like the ideal superman.
i love it but when i got to the latest chapeters about mars and terreformingi t i thought but what about the martians bc if u dont remeber they are a massive thing in every dc universe but so far i have not seen anything about them and u even put it as if mars was unhabiltible fix that please or at least clarify on it
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Bruv, i wanna be honest with you, blunt even, the truth is that your writing feels robotic, it's missing this particular spark and I don't no how to explain it, but when someone writes without that spark, it makes the creation, novel, fanfic, or whatever you may call it feel rather boring and particularly tiring to read, then again this is just from my point of view and my personal opinion, no hard feelings, bruv.
This is something I highly would recommend someone to read. It has great pacing.
THEEERESSS AAAA STARRR MANNNN WAIIITTIING INNN THEEEE SKKYYYYY HEED LIKEEEE TO COOOME ANDDD MEETT USSS BUT TT HESSS SCAREDD HELL BLOWWW OURRR MINDSS
This is honestly one of the best fan-fictions I’ve read so far. The character development is amazing, hope it keeps going strong.
I didnt really like the story. First of all, the dude is reborn as superman, yet has a system that is intent on making him the "protector of earth." Yes, i quoted that, because the system itself said that, which is really annoying. Another problem i have is that every paragraph is written with a sort of grandiose that is really off puting. The worst in my opinion is that its apparently a grown man transmigrated as clark kent, but it might as well not be. Its like he has no real memories except those of the DC universe, and just acts like a copy of Clark, but more level headed. Overall, I guess nothing i said is really negative per se, but i really didnt like it.
system. system. system. system. Now he crams it into every fanfic even when it's not required. The MC is already a Kryptonian and can already be considered the strongest and most cheater, but no, you have to shove a system in there to lead him by the handle in the story. That's lazy.
I love everything that has happened so far, I haven't been able to find a lot of Smallville SI fanfics, so this has been an exciting read! [img=gift]
AUTHOR OK YOUR NOVEL IS GOLD LOVE THE STORY YOU BUILD.BUT ONE QUESTION WHY THE HELLo SUPERMAN NEED TO BE A REPORTER OF A NEWSPAPER,, WHY IS SUPERMAN RICH LIKE TONY STARK,.CMON AUTHOR DO NTO FOLLOW ALL OTHER NOVLE I HAVE READ ABOUT SUPERMAN..CMON A POOR SUPERMAN IS BORING it has been done a lot in all novels, so why not a novel about rich Superman like Ironman the story would become more fun with a lot of potential for the multiverse..AUTHOR YOUR NOVLE IS GOLD THANK YOU DO NOT QUIT HALFWAY,, WITH LOVE FROM A FAN.ironman was rion superman steel FUNNY
This is nice story to read with whole new superman and various character with different starting point.it gives the vibe of classic superman but also tell us how he gets involved in the plot and with all the characters
The system has become a friend. which is never good it becomes a crutch for the author as the system becomes the best friend of the MC or even the second MC because seintent systems are always with the MC meaing ALL other character interactions become secondary to the system. What happens when he finds a girl friend or gets married. i can already here him yelling at his wife " YOU DONT KNOW ANYTHING ABOUT ME!! MY SYSTEM KNOWS WHAT I LIKE!!"
A fantastic story. And actually entertaining leave on journey to becoming superman. if there was one thing, the story got right, it is Superman special brand of heroism doing the right thing even if it’s hard. There are some weird things to though mainly the terraforming of Mars. Does Jon Jones not exist here anyway, here is five stars to keep you going.
The author did a great job, I enjoyed reading it very much. Many people did not like the fact that there was a system, but the existence of the system is not important in the story except for the first chapters. It just helps the main character, which I think is nice! I also liked the personality of the main character, he looks like the ideal superman.
i love it but when i got to the latest chapeters about mars and terreformingi t i thought but what about the martians bc if u dont remeber they are a massive thing in every dc universe but so far i have not seen anything about them and u even put it as if mars was unhabiltible fix that please or at least clarify on it
Membuka SPOILER Bruv, i wanna be honest with you, blunt even, the truth is that your writing feels robotic, it's missing this particular spark and I don't no how to explain it, but when someone writes without that spark, it makes the creation, novel, fanfic, or whatever you may call it feel rather boring and particularly tiring to read, then again this is just from my point of view and my personal opinion, no hard feelings, bruv.
This is something I highly would recommend someone to read. It has great pacing.
THEEERESSS AAAA STARRR MANNNN WAIIITTIING INNN THEEEE SKKYYYYY HEED LIKEEEE TO COOOME ANDDD MEETT USSS BUT TT HESSS SCAREDD HELL BLOWWW OURRR MINDSS
This is honestly one of the best fan-fictions I’ve read so far. The character development is amazing, hope it keeps going strong.
I didnt really like the story. First of all, the dude is reborn as superman, yet has a system that is intent on making him the "protector of earth." Yes, i quoted that, because the system itself said that, which is really annoying. Another problem i have is that every paragraph is written with a sort of grandiose that is really off puting. The worst in my opinion is that its apparently a grown man transmigrated as clark kent, but it might as well not be. Its like he has no real memories except those of the DC universe, and just acts like a copy of Clark, but more level headed. Overall, I guess nothing i said is really negative per se, but i really didnt like it.
system. system. system. system. Now he crams it into every fanfic even when it's not required. The MC is already a Kryptonian and can already be considered the strongest and most cheater, but no, you have to shove a system in there to lead him by the handle in the story. That's lazy.
I love everything that has happened so far, I haven't been able to find a lot of Smallville SI fanfics, so this has been an exciting read! [img=gift]
AUTHOR OK YOUR NOVEL IS GOLD LOVE THE STORY YOU BUILD.BUT ONE QUESTION WHY THE HELLo SUPERMAN NEED TO BE A REPORTER OF A NEWSPAPER,, WHY IS SUPERMAN RICH LIKE TONY STARK,.CMON AUTHOR DO NTO FOLLOW ALL OTHER NOVLE I HAVE READ ABOUT SUPERMAN..CMON A POOR SUPERMAN IS BORING it has been done a lot in all novels, so why not a novel about rich Superman like Ironman the story would become more fun with a lot of potential for the multiverse..AUTHOR YOUR NOVLE IS GOLD THANK YOU DO NOT QUIT HALFWAY,, WITH LOVE FROM A FAN.ironman was rion superman steel FUNNY
This is nice story to read with whole new superman and various character with different starting point.it gives the vibe of classic superman but also tell us how he gets involved in the plot and with all the characters