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This is a fine piece of novel, a bit too fast-paced. The characters and new situations are continuously introduced including trials, fights, learning new skills but everything is goint too smoothly. I missed a few arrogant young masters or a short term villian lasting at least a few chapters to spice things up. Writing quality is fine, story development can be considered good, character design needs a bit more and the world development seems okish this early. But some interesting moments and fight scene are too rushed and written in few quick explaination ruining the enjoyment of the imagining the whole fights and situations.
Hello, shameless author here. I know it's not necessary for me to give a review but I just had to. This book is going to be about 1000 chapters long and is going to have a lot of ups and downs as well. I hope you guys are going to stick with me through thick and thin. Thank you all.
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A very great book. The first book I'm reading on Webnovel and from what I've seen it's peak. I just hope the author continues with this intensity.
Story is very well written. Reminds quite a lot of an anime I watched a while back. Keep doing what you're doing with this story, and you will wind up doing very well. Also, regardless of what anyone says, regarding your story and how they think you should write it. Here is a piece of life advice, as long as you yourself are happy with the story, then that, in itself is what should matter the most. Have a blessed week, and may god bless you.
Why is it that if not vampires, always mortal against gods is what I am reading? Well, the story is good. It's fast-paced indeed. But smooth read and interesting. How would that boy win against the gods? He may be one of those failures too! I recommend this book. Looking forward to Lius meeting with his family
Very interesting plot setting. The grammar is alright albeit some errors, anyways good work!
This one has a lot of potential, if you don't mind some spacing and other errors, and focus on what's happening and the plot, I believe you will like it! I'll be supporting this!
This is a fine piece of novel, a bit too fast-paced. The characters and new situations are continuously introduced including trials, fights, learning new skills but everything is goint too smoothly. I missed a few arrogant young masters or a short term villian lasting at least a few chapters to spice things up. Writing quality is fine, story development can be considered good, character design needs a bit more and the world development seems okish this early. But some interesting moments and fight scene are too rushed and written in few quick explaination ruining the enjoyment of the imagining the whole fights and situations.
Hello, shameless author here. I know it's not necessary for me to give a review but I just had to. This book is going to be about 1000 chapters long and is going to have a lot of ups and downs as well. I hope you guys are going to stick with me through thick and thin. Thank you all.
Membuka SPOILER A very great book. The first book I'm reading on Webnovel and from what I've seen it's peak. I just hope the author continues with this intensity.
Story is very well written. Reminds quite a lot of an anime I watched a while back. Keep doing what you're doing with this story, and you will wind up doing very well. Also, regardless of what anyone says, regarding your story and how they think you should write it. Here is a piece of life advice, as long as you yourself are happy with the story, then that, in itself is what should matter the most. Have a blessed week, and may god bless you.
Why is it that if not vampires, always mortal against gods is what I am reading? Well, the story is good. It's fast-paced indeed. But smooth read and interesting. How would that boy win against the gods? He may be one of those failures too! I recommend this book. Looking forward to Lius meeting with his family
Very interesting plot setting. The grammar is alright albeit some errors, anyways good work!
This one has a lot of potential, if you don't mind some spacing and other errors, and focus on what's happening and the plot, I believe you will like it! I'll be supporting this!
Liu Xhikang current design after he ventured to New York