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Tulis ulasanI read a few similar novels and I must say that this is one of the best (not best yet since it doesn't have enough chapters) BECAUSE: • It has a good pacing – not fast nor slow. Each chapter is to look forward to. • No inconsistencies to any characters yet where they suddenly act stupid just to force the plot (It might have but not to the point where it's unbearable. I drop novels because of this). • The MC is likeable, or should I say loveable? He is kind of similar to the MC from "The Heavenly Demon Can't Live a Normal Life" BUT since the story has a [Romance] tag, it has to be better! (I don't care who he will end up with whether she's Eritrea, Liya, or a new female character, as long as it isn't forced for the sake of romance, I'm okay with it. I just hope the author wouldn't fumble hard on this). • The side characters are good too, they aren't just brain-dead young masters and nosy jade beauties who are born just to simp the MC. Although the fiancé of Liya acted rude towards the MC in their last exchange, he still saw him as a threat because of his calm demeanor (Even if the MC pretended to be a cripple). • The only downside I can see for now is the lack of details in the fights maybe because of how they easily overpowered the opposing side? Anyway, I already love this and looking forward to more chapters, more wars, and more personal knights!!!
Membuka SPOILERAuthors' review!!!! Finally, after the second volume, I can come up with a decent review about this novel. I'm going to hit the nail on the head and avoid going around. Now, most readers think this work is just a copy and paste because of the title which I do love but I will like to correct that thought for you reading this review. Yes, in the first few chapters the upgrades seemed to be too fast and lacked depth but as the story progresses, it gets deeper and you can confirm it if you read. Asher, the MC is quite smart, he's rational and will not act stupid, i assure you of this. He has information about 'Boundless' and has used it at every chance he gets. Also, the romance tag isn't just to lure you. although the romance would be a bit slow, it will be satisfying. Expect it from the third volume! Come, join the ride of upgrades, new troops, pet beasts, war machines, scheming lords, expanding territories and epic wars! NO HAREM!!!
Just finished the free chapters. So far so good. MC's power may seem OP, but I'm really just here to see him rise up and faceslap those who wronged him. Some people mentioning that he should be more careful with his power and not show it so openly. But he'd end up upgrading his people, so they'll find out soon anyway. So far I am quite satisfied with this novel. It is not perfect, but it was enjoyable and satisfies the type of story I'd like to see from a plot like this
when you wright about a system that can upgrade anything that means it can upgrade anything that includes the person that owns it as well as ppl so called talents witch is retarded you put graded talents to begin with, talents should automatically upgrade on there own by using it or something like that but you don't add that and you even make the system not upgrade them when by what you said could upgrade everything so yeah I'm p*ssed off
I don't understand the others who try to convince readers not to read with their negative opinion. Each to their own. Their own opinion. There are people who don't like pizza. You criticize negatively when you only read 10 chapters. You say it's trashy because it looks like a lot. But the movies too. I tell people don't let them convince you, make up your own mind! Despite the system the MC is in difficulty it's not that easy. The descriptions of the fights are really good. The history of the world itself is well imagined. It's not the same as the other reincarnations. The romance is slow no heram a good point! Make up your own mind. For me it's the best I've read so far.
Story progression is fast. Like new scene after another. No sense of smooth transition. Mc? Just dumb for me. Accepts everything just given? You made the game like what? Without a storyline? This is just pure OP carrot and stick so far. maybe just maybe everything will make sense as the story goes.
Membuka SPOILERthe best of all the kingdom constructions that I have read so far. especially no harem it's good. Very good! Should be adapted for a manhwa.
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Good god, those first couple of chapters were so edgy that I thought I had accidently started reading another Uchiha fanfiction.
Im at chapter 27 please someone tell me he kills Lia? What kind of nonsense is this? Why is he treating her so well going to her wedding and even bringing her a gift? Is the author just trying to mess with me? I had really high expectations at the beginning but now Im disappointed. Another dumb Chinese protagonist, seriously.
Membuka SPOILERIt's quite interesting, if some details or coherence were added to the system it would be better, it really seems like it's the power of the plot, something like points for missions or improvement cards. The psychology is also a bit strange but the system covers it clumsily, in a similar novel he mentions that if he does what the MC does, he will be branded a demon or a heretic, so he justifies it as miracles and support from gods.
Have literally spent my last bit of money to keep reading. Super cool an very fun world that I would like to experience
Okay till now I saw nothing that the tag "overpowered" does. Every time mc is in danger he is almost every time suppressed or almost killed this shows me he is rather weak.
if you are soft hearted , Don't read the novel or ready for losing loved ones loss of countship, betreyal,etc....
this is a really great story but when it reaches chapter 240 or something near it, I can not flow it's pace and does not make much sense to it. i know author want to develop his character but for that the soldiers rebelled in silver town, I can understand he was careless there and forget to check the loyalty of soldiers from system but then the enemy duke sent an killer that wiped everyone in the castle and he does not activate his talent until everyone is dead even his pet and the reason the author gave is blood was evaporated by fire. then for that reason he goes into depression and leave on a solo adventure.,.... i don't want to write any more author according to me u r currently introducing many elements at a fast pace and here I am confused and flow of story is completely cut off.(new elements - I am(the god), new talent(zenith level - kyros), new territory, new power levels(the awaken or something), the people he is currently staying with( who r they) ) , just know the story is totally out of control and I can not connect any dots anymore
Membuka SPOILERGreat story overall, would definitely recommend if you like lord or territory building novels. Until you reach Chapter 234, the novels great, the Mc has his troubles but he over comes them. My only gripe with the novel is that ranks don’t matter as long as your talents good, although the author says that higher rank can defeat 10 or even 100 of those who are just one rank lower.
i love this type of stories it fits my taste. I like when the fights are keep simpler and the author uses words that are easier to understand and are not just fancy. I love the story because it fulfilled my type perfectly.Kingdom buidling , mc is not a simp, system , romance tag + no harem , conquering and semi medival settings. Although some might argue that the story is simple and quite not so advanced it is the beauty of it. Loved the first volume keep updating much love to the author 👍🔥💯😁
brilliant books reminds me of the Witcher coz of white hair ...and eyes but that's where it ends. i love it so far the mc is great just how i like them . the world is to die for the system and upgrading is new i love it am a died hard fan of this book
I really like this story , it's really interesting and enjoyable for me, it reminds me of a lord of oasis, and I was searching for a similar story and I found this gem so I created this account to thank you for this masterpiece ❤️
This novel lacks substance. The first few chapters narration was indeed impeccable, it made me want to continue how the story unfolds further. But subsequent chapters, I feel like the story essence is lacking, bland, and monotonous. This is my personal and honest opinion and nothing against the author or its avid readers. Best of luck!
Membuka SPOILERThe drama in the begin was good and i really like the world building. The writing is really good and you get allot of details about the world that i like. Mc also has a cool power.
keep updating author, i will change the review till this have like 600-800 chap, i give e cause its netral for now
Writing and sorry development are really good, only a few issue with how things are worded, you can obviously assume what he meant but they should get fixed at some point. Not a weeb MC and its not one of those novels that are pornagraphic novels half the time and it looking like he will actually find true love. I would recommend to give it a shot. I expect great things with this and and most the time I am disappointed with WebNovel being porn half the time or trash translated novels. THIS novel is a gem on this website.
I can’t tell if it’s the name Asher but every main character with that name is in my top novels. This novel is really good it keeps you excited and engaged in every chapter from the interesting story and the characters that have purpose. There is also not a woman from the get go that he has to rescue or simp for which is like a breath of fresh air so many books want to do a fl lead that is so dam annoying to the plot progression and has multiple chapters wasted on that when you just want a guy that beats up medieval monsters like a dragon or some shi overall just read this it’s good.
I really liked how the story flows the birth of a child from our world 🌎 to a magical one. He figures out his path through trials and tribulations. A man who longs for adventure and experiences championship to loss. I hope for more chapters to follow his path of adventure
I read a few similar novels and I must say that this is one of the best (not best yet since it doesn't have enough chapters) BECAUSE: • It has a good pacing – not fast nor slow. Each chapter is to look forward to. • No inconsistencies to any characters yet where they suddenly act stupid just to force the plot (It might have but not to the point where it's unbearable. I drop novels because of this). • The MC is likeable, or should I say loveable? He is kind of similar to the MC from "The Heavenly Demon Can't Live a Normal Life" BUT since the story has a [Romance] tag, it has to be better! (I don't care who he will end up with whether she's Eritrea, Liya, or a new female character, as long as it isn't forced for the sake of romance, I'm okay with it. I just hope the author wouldn't fumble hard on this). • The side characters are good too, they aren't just brain-dead young masters and nosy jade beauties who are born just to simp the MC. Although the fiancé of Liya acted rude towards the MC in their last exchange, he still saw him as a threat because of his calm demeanor (Even if the MC pretended to be a cripple). • The only downside I can see for now is the lack of details in the fights maybe because of how they easily overpowered the opposing side? Anyway, I already love this and looking forward to more chapters, more wars, and more personal knights!!!
Membuka SPOILERAuthors' review!!!! Finally, after the second volume, I can come up with a decent review about this novel. I'm going to hit the nail on the head and avoid going around. Now, most readers think this work is just a copy and paste because of the title which I do love but I will like to correct that thought for you reading this review. Yes, in the first few chapters the upgrades seemed to be too fast and lacked depth but as the story progresses, it gets deeper and you can confirm it if you read. Asher, the MC is quite smart, he's rational and will not act stupid, i assure you of this. He has information about 'Boundless' and has used it at every chance he gets. Also, the romance tag isn't just to lure you. although the romance would be a bit slow, it will be satisfying. Expect it from the third volume! Come, join the ride of upgrades, new troops, pet beasts, war machines, scheming lords, expanding territories and epic wars! NO HAREM!!!
Just finished the free chapters. So far so good. MC's power may seem OP, but I'm really just here to see him rise up and faceslap those who wronged him. Some people mentioning that he should be more careful with his power and not show it so openly. But he'd end up upgrading his people, so they'll find out soon anyway. So far I am quite satisfied with this novel. It is not perfect, but it was enjoyable and satisfies the type of story I'd like to see from a plot like this
when you wright about a system that can upgrade anything that means it can upgrade anything that includes the person that owns it as well as ppl so called talents witch is retarded you put graded talents to begin with, talents should automatically upgrade on there own by using it or something like that but you don't add that and you even make the system not upgrade them when by what you said could upgrade everything so yeah I'm p*ssed off
I don't understand the others who try to convince readers not to read with their negative opinion. Each to their own. Their own opinion. There are people who don't like pizza. You criticize negatively when you only read 10 chapters. You say it's trashy because it looks like a lot. But the movies too. I tell people don't let them convince you, make up your own mind! Despite the system the MC is in difficulty it's not that easy. The descriptions of the fights are really good. The history of the world itself is well imagined. It's not the same as the other reincarnations. The romance is slow no heram a good point! Make up your own mind. For me it's the best I've read so far.
Story progression is fast. Like new scene after another. No sense of smooth transition. Mc? Just dumb for me. Accepts everything just given? You made the game like what? Without a storyline? This is just pure OP carrot and stick so far. maybe just maybe everything will make sense as the story goes.
Membuka SPOILERthe best of all the kingdom constructions that I have read so far. especially no harem it's good. Very good! Should be adapted for a manhwa.
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Good god, those first couple of chapters were so edgy that I thought I had accidently started reading another Uchiha fanfiction.
Im at chapter 27 please someone tell me he kills Lia? What kind of nonsense is this? Why is he treating her so well going to her wedding and even bringing her a gift? Is the author just trying to mess with me? I had really high expectations at the beginning but now Im disappointed. Another dumb Chinese protagonist, seriously.
Membuka SPOILERIt's quite interesting, if some details or coherence were added to the system it would be better, it really seems like it's the power of the plot, something like points for missions or improvement cards. The psychology is also a bit strange but the system covers it clumsily, in a similar novel he mentions that if he does what the MC does, he will be branded a demon or a heretic, so he justifies it as miracles and support from gods.
Have literally spent my last bit of money to keep reading. Super cool an very fun world that I would like to experience
Okay till now I saw nothing that the tag "overpowered" does. Every time mc is in danger he is almost every time suppressed or almost killed this shows me he is rather weak.
if you are soft hearted , Don't read the novel or ready for losing loved ones loss of countship, betreyal,etc....
this is a really great story but when it reaches chapter 240 or something near it, I can not flow it's pace and does not make much sense to it. i know author want to develop his character but for that the soldiers rebelled in silver town, I can understand he was careless there and forget to check the loyalty of soldiers from system but then the enemy duke sent an killer that wiped everyone in the castle and he does not activate his talent until everyone is dead even his pet and the reason the author gave is blood was evaporated by fire. then for that reason he goes into depression and leave on a solo adventure.,.... i don't want to write any more author according to me u r currently introducing many elements at a fast pace and here I am confused and flow of story is completely cut off.(new elements - I am(the god), new talent(zenith level - kyros), new territory, new power levels(the awaken or something), the people he is currently staying with( who r they) ) , just know the story is totally out of control and I can not connect any dots anymore
Membuka SPOILERGreat story overall, would definitely recommend if you like lord or territory building novels. Until you reach Chapter 234, the novels great, the Mc has his troubles but he over comes them. My only gripe with the novel is that ranks don’t matter as long as your talents good, although the author says that higher rank can defeat 10 or even 100 of those who are just one rank lower.
i love this type of stories it fits my taste. I like when the fights are keep simpler and the author uses words that are easier to understand and are not just fancy. I love the story because it fulfilled my type perfectly.Kingdom buidling , mc is not a simp, system , romance tag + no harem , conquering and semi medival settings. Although some might argue that the story is simple and quite not so advanced it is the beauty of it. Loved the first volume keep updating much love to the author 👍🔥💯😁
brilliant books reminds me of the Witcher coz of white hair ...and eyes but that's where it ends. i love it so far the mc is great just how i like them . the world is to die for the system and upgrading is new i love it am a died hard fan of this book
I really like this story , it's really interesting and enjoyable for me, it reminds me of a lord of oasis, and I was searching for a similar story and I found this gem so I created this account to thank you for this masterpiece ❤️
This novel lacks substance. The first few chapters narration was indeed impeccable, it made me want to continue how the story unfolds further. But subsequent chapters, I feel like the story essence is lacking, bland, and monotonous. This is my personal and honest opinion and nothing against the author or its avid readers. Best of luck!
Membuka SPOILERThe drama in the begin was good and i really like the world building. The writing is really good and you get allot of details about the world that i like. Mc also has a cool power.
keep updating author, i will change the review till this have like 600-800 chap, i give e cause its netral for now
Writing and sorry development are really good, only a few issue with how things are worded, you can obviously assume what he meant but they should get fixed at some point. Not a weeb MC and its not one of those novels that are pornagraphic novels half the time and it looking like he will actually find true love. I would recommend to give it a shot. I expect great things with this and and most the time I am disappointed with WebNovel being porn half the time or trash translated novels. THIS novel is a gem on this website.
I can’t tell if it’s the name Asher but every main character with that name is in my top novels. This novel is really good it keeps you excited and engaged in every chapter from the interesting story and the characters that have purpose. There is also not a woman from the get go that he has to rescue or simp for which is like a breath of fresh air so many books want to do a fl lead that is so dam annoying to the plot progression and has multiple chapters wasted on that when you just want a guy that beats up medieval monsters like a dragon or some shi overall just read this it’s good.
I really liked how the story flows the birth of a child from our world 🌎 to a magical one. He figures out his path through trials and tribulations. A man who longs for adventure and experiences championship to loss. I hope for more chapters to follow his path of adventure