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Es difícil decirlo, la historia no es terrible, pero tampoco es buena, tiene algunas cosas lógicas, pero también cosas ilógicas, si decir que, parece hacer las cosas más complicadas de lo normal, por ejemplo, spoiler: durante la transformación del mc en campione, en lugar de hacerlo tan forzado, cuando inari toma control del cuerpo del mc para luchar contra tsukuyomi, mc podría robar la kill cuando la mente de inari estaba a punto de "morir", luego, usar el poder de inari para atraer un meteorito, y atrapar a tsukuyomi para evitar que escapé, mientras mc está al borde de la muerte, después de eliminar por suerte a dos dioses, gracias a la luna y la montaña, mc se recupera de sus heridas gracias a las habilidades combinadas de ambas diosas, las habilidades del mc se basaran en las de un dios principal japonés, por lo que sera super fuerte, lo que permite al mc derrotar a otros dioses japoneses mas débiles, como algunos de los dioses de la fortuna, o dioses de la calamidad, que tienen algunos fuertes y otros débiles entre ellos, bueno, es lo que yo escribiría, para crear un campione japones adecuado, pero este mc parece que se ira a china en la mínima oportunidad, espero que el tonto homicida, recuerde que la campione mas fuerte está en china, y no es exactamente la más social, en fin, diría que este tipo es el mc chino promedio, míralo bajo tu propio riesgo.
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The story up until chapter 66 was annoying and now the MC is with Campione's MC's sister and for plot reasons he managed to kill the god like in the canon, if it's just to follow the canon's plot I should see the original
Great story but the MCs change in personality hurt the story. he was a pacifist for 20 years then suddenly he's this battle loving super being with bloodlust who suddenly has knowledge about everything and anything. He supposedly purged his bloodlust. maybe there will be an explanation for this later but if his personality is this boring going forward then ill have to pass on reading further. the way he's acting is exactly like 90 percent of other MCs on here, generic feeling. at least when he didn't have powers and was more vulnerable his personality had a life to it, a uniqueness. not sure really how to justify his transformation into who he is in the chapter im currently reading. ill keep reading ahead hoping for a change because I like the author and his other stories, if it improved ill definitely revise this review.
How the heck did it get all those 5 stars? I don't know. I read 10 chapters and I can't help but wonder why the heck am I even reading this. It's all over the place, whetever it is plot, characters, or world building. Wouldn't recommend, at most 4/10.
good ratings because this is the ultimate rare Campione story that is not just dropped at chapter 10.
Two words : Quality Fic synopsis: a man gets transmigrated into that silvered hair haru who loves his sister and gets a cheat while allows him to comprehend the essense of everything supernatural without any cost.
Membuka SPOILER
A Campione – a Godslayer – is a supreme ruler. Since he can kill a celestial being, he can therefore call on the sacrosanct, divine powers wielded by the gods. A Campione – a Godslayer – is a lord. Since the power to kill a deity is in his hands, he therefore looms over all mortals on Earth. A Campione – a Godslayer – is a devil. Since of all mortals who live in the world, none can assume a power to match his!
Very well written, with funny moments. And it's a rare fanfiction of Campione. I don't ask for more, for now it's perfect 'the author does a very good job.
hmm 5 star just cuz its a campione fic but writing can definitely be improved.. Well I'll come back later when stacked enough chapters.. hope you dont drop
Great progress and update schedule. I would say the charachter development is a little lacking, as ther personality shift of the MC is a bit fast/extreme. Still pretty good and feels good to fine a Campione fanfic with an OC main charachter - Goudo was just too beta for my liking for someone with that much power.
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I can't seem to add this to my library. Is it just me? I've tried adding others but it works just fine.
i like this alot.............................................................................................................................
This fanfic is like fast food. It is quite widespread. However MC is very good , he is not beta MC so I accept it . The grammar is 9/10. In general, this fanfic is not bad.
Very good so far. Looking forward to the future of this story. --------------------------------------------------------- ---------------------------------------------------------
great fic with cool world and charcters. Everything this author puts out is amazing so 5 stars.
Very happy to see campione get a story. Please continue with the great work, author! Would you mind answering if are there any goddess love interests?
Perfect score just because there is so little Campione Fics. that both exist and aren't abandoned.
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There are minimal number or campione fics out there and most of them are drop. Though this is more on world travel as of the latest chapters it still contains campione. The translation is good there are no pronouns mixups and all are properly translated to english. The only downside is the mc personality he seems like a pushover at the early chapters but it changes as the chapters go on. The harem is fine but the mc is a simp but it seems to be also changing as of the latest chapters.
Es difícil decirlo, la historia no es terrible, pero tampoco es buena, tiene algunas cosas lógicas, pero también cosas ilógicas, si decir que, parece hacer las cosas más complicadas de lo normal, por ejemplo, spoiler: durante la transformación del mc en campione, en lugar de hacerlo tan forzado, cuando inari toma control del cuerpo del mc para luchar contra tsukuyomi, mc podría robar la kill cuando la mente de inari estaba a punto de "morir", luego, usar el poder de inari para atraer un meteorito, y atrapar a tsukuyomi para evitar que escapé, mientras mc está al borde de la muerte, después de eliminar por suerte a dos dioses, gracias a la luna y la montaña, mc se recupera de sus heridas gracias a las habilidades combinadas de ambas diosas, las habilidades del mc se basaran en las de un dios principal japonés, por lo que sera super fuerte, lo que permite al mc derrotar a otros dioses japoneses mas débiles, como algunos de los dioses de la fortuna, o dioses de la calamidad, que tienen algunos fuertes y otros débiles entre ellos, bueno, es lo que yo escribiría, para crear un campione japones adecuado, pero este mc parece que se ira a china en la mínima oportunidad, espero que el tonto homicida, recuerde que la campione mas fuerte está en china, y no es exactamente la más social, en fin, diría que este tipo es el mc chino promedio, míralo bajo tu propio riesgo.
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The story up until chapter 66 was annoying and now the MC is with Campione's MC's sister and for plot reasons he managed to kill the god like in the canon, if it's just to follow the canon's plot I should see the original
Great story but the MCs change in personality hurt the story. he was a pacifist for 20 years then suddenly he's this battle loving super being with bloodlust who suddenly has knowledge about everything and anything. He supposedly purged his bloodlust. maybe there will be an explanation for this later but if his personality is this boring going forward then ill have to pass on reading further. the way he's acting is exactly like 90 percent of other MCs on here, generic feeling. at least when he didn't have powers and was more vulnerable his personality had a life to it, a uniqueness. not sure really how to justify his transformation into who he is in the chapter im currently reading. ill keep reading ahead hoping for a change because I like the author and his other stories, if it improved ill definitely revise this review.
How the heck did it get all those 5 stars? I don't know. I read 10 chapters and I can't help but wonder why the heck am I even reading this. It's all over the place, whetever it is plot, characters, or world building. Wouldn't recommend, at most 4/10.
good ratings because this is the ultimate rare Campione story that is not just dropped at chapter 10.
Two words : Quality Fic synopsis: a man gets transmigrated into that silvered hair haru who loves his sister and gets a cheat while allows him to comprehend the essense of everything supernatural without any cost.
Membuka SPOILER A Campione – a Godslayer – is a supreme ruler. Since he can kill a celestial being, he can therefore call on the sacrosanct, divine powers wielded by the gods. A Campione – a Godslayer – is a lord. Since the power to kill a deity is in his hands, he therefore looms over all mortals on Earth. A Campione – a Godslayer – is a devil. Since of all mortals who live in the world, none can assume a power to match his!
Very well written, with funny moments. And it's a rare fanfiction of Campione. I don't ask for more, for now it's perfect 'the author does a very good job.
hmm 5 star just cuz its a campione fic but writing can definitely be improved.. Well I'll come back later when stacked enough chapters.. hope you dont drop
Great progress and update schedule. I would say the charachter development is a little lacking, as ther personality shift of the MC is a bit fast/extreme. Still pretty good and feels good to fine a Campione fanfic with an OC main charachter - Goudo was just too beta for my liking for someone with that much power.
I love it! 🎀💓💓💓🎀🎀💓💓💓🎀🎀💓💓💓🎀🎀💓💓💓🎀🎀💓💓💓🎀🎀💓💓💓🎀🎀💓💓💓🎀🎀💓💓💓🎀🎀💓💓💓🎀🎀💓💓💓🎀🎀💓💓💓🎀🎀💓💓💓🎀🎀💓💓💓🎀🎀💓💓💓🎀🎀💓💓💓🎀
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I can't seem to add this to my library. Is it just me? I've tried adding others but it works just fine.
i like this alot.............................................................................................................................
This fanfic is like fast food. It is quite widespread. However MC is very good , he is not beta MC so I accept it . The grammar is 9/10. In general, this fanfic is not bad.
Very good so far. Looking forward to the future of this story. --------------------------------------------------------- ---------------------------------------------------------
great fic with cool world and charcters. Everything this author puts out is amazing so 5 stars.
Very happy to see campione get a story. Please continue with the great work, author! Would you mind answering if are there any goddess love interests?
Perfect score just because there is so little Campione Fics. that both exist and aren't abandoned.
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"Author, were you inspired by a Chinese novel or are you translating?" 😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀
There are minimal number or campione fics out there and most of them are drop. Though this is more on world travel as of the latest chapters it still contains campione. The translation is good there are no pronouns mixups and all are properly translated to english. The only downside is the mc personality he seems like a pushover at the early chapters but it changes as the chapters go on. The harem is fine but the mc is a simp but it seems to be also changing as of the latest chapters.