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its good overall, the writing quality was good but not perfect some of them was wrong but still good, story development was kinda, fastpace but still good, good probab?,update is the only problem its too slow, so overall its good. remember we have different taste in reading/story.
Pretty disappointed. The way the characters interact is completely unrealistic. For example the "normal" bank manager has no problem when seeing the 100 trillions in his bank account and gives him a platinum card in a snap....
Disappointing novel and just felt like a wish fulfilment fantasy of some country hick who is rather unimpressive with the way he did things. Sure, he gains this swag of money but does nothing about developing himself, decides to be materialistic and buys clothes, watches, cars and a new dwelling. Major purchase so far is a vehicle racetrack. His points have been spent on ju-jitsu skill, endless stamina (so he can impress the girl he met with his performance) and driving mastery. But throughout there is nothing grabbing in this novel. The author decide for a cash grab and locked it at 15 which is way to soon to have anything revealed or teased and most likely as a result, many will just say nah, nothing here, not wasting the coins/fast passes. Basically I was not intrigued to read further, my interest would have risen if the MC considered he isnt a big mogul just a lucky one and he needs to develop to make a mark on the landscape. Perhaps the author planned this but in 14 chapters, there was no interest to explore a “possible” development. Perhaps the author could have at chapter one revealed more of say a future where he is at, and then go back to how it all began. But the horse has bolted. Next please.
dem content/chapters locked on ch 14 didn't even bother to read the first chapter it might be good you guys read it
I have only read the first few chapters and am enjoying it immensely. I guess I envision myself in the MC's shoes. Keep writing just like that, but quicker, and I will keep reading!
Your novel is such a fun read। Can't wait for more!! Your world creation is also good। Hope u get more reach!❤️
its good overall, the writing quality was good but not perfect some of them was wrong but still good, story development was kinda, fastpace but still good, good probab?,update is the only problem its too slow, so overall its good. remember we have different taste in reading/story.
Pretty disappointed. The way the characters interact is completely unrealistic. For example the "normal" bank manager has no problem when seeing the 100 trillions in his bank account and gives him a platinum card in a snap....
Disappointing novel and just felt like a wish fulfilment fantasy of some country hick who is rather unimpressive with the way he did things. Sure, he gains this swag of money but does nothing about developing himself, decides to be materialistic and buys clothes, watches, cars and a new dwelling. Major purchase so far is a vehicle racetrack. His points have been spent on ju-jitsu skill, endless stamina (so he can impress the girl he met with his performance) and driving mastery. But throughout there is nothing grabbing in this novel. The author decide for a cash grab and locked it at 15 which is way to soon to have anything revealed or teased and most likely as a result, many will just say nah, nothing here, not wasting the coins/fast passes. Basically I was not intrigued to read further, my interest would have risen if the MC considered he isnt a big mogul just a lucky one and he needs to develop to make a mark on the landscape. Perhaps the author planned this but in 14 chapters, there was no interest to explore a “possible” development. Perhaps the author could have at chapter one revealed more of say a future where he is at, and then go back to how it all began. But the horse has bolted. Next please.
dem content/chapters locked on ch 14 didn't even bother to read the first chapter it might be good you guys read it
I have only read the first few chapters and am enjoying it immensely. I guess I envision myself in the MC's shoes. Keep writing just like that, but quicker, and I will keep reading!
Your novel is such a fun read। Can't wait for more!! Your world creation is also good। Hope u get more reach!❤️