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The story is about a man with no balls binging scared often and people doing stuff around him Does think for himself and isn’t very brave
the amount of brain cells i lost is enoromous. don't recommend for anyone to read . i say this because MC is so dumb that he tries to be a hero by not giving darkhold, when he has no power.
I’m sorry but the OC is the weakest part for me me in this book like everytime the OC has a paragraph about him or what he’s doing I skim it or skip it. I find the Avengers and Wanda and Vision are more enjoyable to read then the OC. Like I get it the oc is weak and gets stronger later on but the thing is you would think the when the oc was near death he would unleash some magic energy or power to protect himself even if it was a fluke. Hopefully you continue this and find someway to make the oc a bit more appealing anyway this is not for me but I know some people will enjoy your work so keep going.
The story is about a man with no balls binging scared often and people doing stuff around him Does think for himself and isn’t very brave
the amount of brain cells i lost is enoromous. don't recommend for anyone to read . i say this because MC is so dumb that he tries to be a hero by not giving darkhold, when he has no power.
I’m sorry but the OC is the weakest part for me me in this book like everytime the OC has a paragraph about him or what he’s doing I skim it or skip it. I find the Avengers and Wanda and Vision are more enjoyable to read then the OC. Like I get it the oc is weak and gets stronger later on but the thing is you would think the when the oc was near death he would unleash some magic energy or power to protect himself even if it was a fluke. Hopefully you continue this and find someway to make the oc a bit more appealing anyway this is not for me but I know some people will enjoy your work so keep going.