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I can say that the work is not bad (If anything, I am writing through a translator). I hope the author will update the work more often. And if it's not too much trouble, could you please make Zoro and Sanji women? Since you did it with Ace, I don't think it's such a big problem with Zoro and Sanji. You can also come up with new comic scenes based on this.For example, Sanji tries to seduce Luffy, Zoro calls her Ero-cook and a fight begins. In short, the work is good. 👍
it's good a littel bit To much smut For XD i would probably do the Same If i was in one piece yeah but i dont really Like IT so much in the book but i can recommend To Others
I really like the story but you'll get only 2 stars for the patreon paywall.
okay hope it's nice is it a harem please if it is include nami robin Hancock and Yamato thanks
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Good strory but mc gets too op to fast and please don't just put female crewmembers in the crew
I'm leaving this review to clear up some misunderstandings. While it's true that the R-18 content was originally paywalled, that’s no longer the case! As of last month, all R-18 chapters have been fully released or updated here with no paywall. Some of the chapters from early release might still mention that R-18 content is exclusive to Patreon, but rest assured—that's outdated info! That said, a small portion of the heavier content remains paywalled, but it's very minimal. So, I encourage you not to judge based solely on the early chapters—give it a fair shot!
I can say that the work is not bad (If anything, I am writing through a translator). I hope the author will update the work more often. And if it's not too much trouble, could you please make Zoro and Sanji women? Since you did it with Ace, I don't think it's such a big problem with Zoro and Sanji. You can also come up with new comic scenes based on this.For example, Sanji tries to seduce Luffy, Zoro calls her Ero-cook and a fight begins. In short, the work is good. 👍
it's good a littel bit To much smut For XD i would probably do the Same If i was in one piece yeah but i dont really Like IT so much in the book but i can recommend To Others
I really like the story but you'll get only 2 stars for the patreon paywall.
okay hope it's nice is it a harem please if it is include nami robin Hancock and Yamato thanks
[img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it]
Good strory but mc gets too op to fast and please don't just put female crewmembers in the crew
I'm leaving this review to clear up some misunderstandings. While it's true that the R-18 content was originally paywalled, that’s no longer the case! As of last month, all R-18 chapters have been fully released or updated here with no paywall. Some of the chapters from early release might still mention that R-18 content is exclusive to Patreon, but rest assured—that's outdated info! That said, a small portion of the heavier content remains paywalled, but it's very minimal. So, I encourage you not to judge based solely on the early chapters—give it a fair shot!