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zane, a common man transported to the world of Mass Effect through unknown divine means arriving a mass fact, has his created stellaris machine species. How will he survive this new existence as a machine intelligence? Will he battle the reapers? Will he leave everyone to die or will he conquer them all or will he leave this dimension for another one?
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Tulis ulasanthank you author for this mass-effect novel because their not many like this one..we need more of this..this novel story is awesome..please do not destroy your fans' hope and time please author. DO NOT QUIT HALFWAY OK
epic fun book to read love the plot idea for this mass effect novel.....................................................................................................................................................................................................................
This story has great potential and is a good concept. The only problem being the glaring grammatical errors. It can be easily solved using chat gpt , google docs or even grammarly. Once that is done this doc will become even better. A request I have is that for the NEX not to coddle humanity too much and just hand over everything on a silver platter.
There is just so much wrong with this story. The writing is just bad. The story is also bad but the why is complex. 1. The author just doesn't know much about anything. Small things like him mentioning electric arc furnaces as if it is futuristic tech. Or him not understanding how AI works or his constant use of the word "scientific". 2. The author is one of those people who loves to waste words on garbage. For example talking about how machines have "emotions" instead of story telling. 3. There is no real action and reaction funciton to this story. The interactions between characters and people are just filler. The end result has already been concluded, which results in everything in between feeling like filler. (because it is) 4. The story and people in it all act very irrational and unrealistic. On a fundamental level, the author just doesn't understand people. This is hard to explain but if you read the story and are even just a little bit smart you will understand what I mean.
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AUTHOR THIS NOVEL IS GOLD AND FUN TO READ. I LOVE THE PLOT IDEA, TRANSFORMERS VS REAPERS,, THE AUTHOR OF THIS NOVEL HAS THE POTENTIAL FOR SOMETHING BIG AND FUN. I BELIEVE IT DO YOU BELIEVE AUTHOR?..SO DO NOT LET YOUR FANS DOWN AND QUIT