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ok he really just dropped this huh. the fk scenes were you know something pretty good. Now I know why people are liking this that much. iIthink he has more chapters updated in his patroen but iIwont be joining that. over all a pretty solid book in my case
More trash wish fulfillment for people who are desperate to cause pain to others because that’s all they know
It's an enjoyable read. The chapters are uploaded fast as well. Just don't drop it in the middle and you are set to go. Keep writing man.
25 chapters to simply repeat what is already summarized in the synopsis. In general, if you have already read the synopsis, you can start reading with chapter 26.
CONGRATULATIONS! 🎊 Why? because you found this piece of art. Now, let's get on to what this poor author has to say. All I want to say is that read this for at least 30 chapter and decide if it's for you or not. I can confidently say that after chapter 30 does this gets better and better. (Begger: Send this poor soul gifts 😭 to reward his hard work and join the privilege, if not, then you'll miss out on a lot and won't be able to see them in their prime glory :>) Take this as QNA Box and let your questions flow out, I, as a good author will answer 'em all.
The start of the story could've been better. There are some minor loopholes which could be changed. The story took too long before jumping into the cultivation world. This entire first story of Ivan could've been displayed better in some sort of flashbacks while cultivating. Him being reminded of his past life after seeing similarities in the other world rather than taking this long way trip just to be Isekai'd. If this was not a cultivation novel or any transmigration, the chapter till his death could be a much better story, though rather than him dying, he strayed into the path of no return and so on and so on.
You are a Author with good skills but this novel will most probably be dropped so I'm gonna wait here fro sometime before reading it.
I hope the MCs past helps us in understanding his character and personality as you mentioned before. And I hope the novel doesn't disappoint us. Good Luck 👍
Dear Author-san, even though only three chapters are out, It's still an amazing read, although Arthur's debt was surprising! But keep up the good work and keep posting!
Brothers and Sisters! If you liked it and want to send anything in this work, hold your horse and go here: You'll love it (and you can show support to that work thinking it's this one 😉😋😏) My second book, which ive already given the link needs all of your support! 🙏✊🥺
ok he really just dropped this huh. the fk scenes were you know something pretty good. Now I know why people are liking this that much. iIthink he has more chapters updated in his patroen but iIwont be joining that. over all a pretty solid book in my case
More trash wish fulfillment for people who are desperate to cause pain to others because that’s all they know
It's an enjoyable read. The chapters are uploaded fast as well. Just don't drop it in the middle and you are set to go. Keep writing man.
25 chapters to simply repeat what is already summarized in the synopsis. In general, if you have already read the synopsis, you can start reading with chapter 26.
CONGRATULATIONS! 🎊 Why? because you found this piece of art. Now, let's get on to what this poor author has to say. All I want to say is that read this for at least 30 chapter and decide if it's for you or not. I can confidently say that after chapter 30 does this gets better and better. (Begger: Send this poor soul gifts 😭 to reward his hard work and join the privilege, if not, then you'll miss out on a lot and won't be able to see them in their prime glory :>) Take this as QNA Box and let your questions flow out, I, as a good author will answer 'em all.
The start of the story could've been better. There are some minor loopholes which could be changed. The story took too long before jumping into the cultivation world. This entire first story of Ivan could've been displayed better in some sort of flashbacks while cultivating. Him being reminded of his past life after seeing similarities in the other world rather than taking this long way trip just to be Isekai'd. If this was not a cultivation novel or any transmigration, the chapter till his death could be a much better story, though rather than him dying, he strayed into the path of no return and so on and so on.
You are a Author with good skills but this novel will most probably be dropped so I'm gonna wait here fro sometime before reading it.
I hope the MCs past helps us in understanding his character and personality as you mentioned before. And I hope the novel doesn't disappoint us. Good Luck 👍
Dear Author-san, even though only three chapters are out, It's still an amazing read, although Arthur's debt was surprising! But keep up the good work and keep posting!
Brothers and Sisters! If you liked it and want to send anything in this work, hold your horse and go here: You'll love it (and you can show support to that work thinking it's this one 😉😋😏) My second book, which ive already given the link needs all of your support! 🙏✊🥺