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Leezertje

A dark BL story. While you might expect some quick action the author takes his/her time to build the background story and is not just writing smut. It seems there is a story to be told. I see a lot of reviews about it being romantic etc, which annoys me as they are just trolling. It is a necessity, and though not in any way romantic, it is (kinda) hot. There is also some interesting change in general roles between the two main characters which I won’t spoil for you. I do wonder how this relationship is going to progress and hope it doesn’t get too abusive but keeps the MC in a form of power position. Could go both ways in really interesting and running away fast as of this point. Only time will tell. But that is just personal preference. Give it a try and see for yourself. It is interesting enough for that matter.

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mhd654

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god1691569

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Minakshi_Prajapati

After reading the novel my reaction, πŸ₯°πŸ’˜πŸ’˜

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ipkookiee

ahhhh !!!!! it is good but the chapters are locked author locked them sooooooooo sooooonnnnnnn

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QuillMistress

I’m yet to read but the first line had me clutching my pearls, in a good way 😈 Will definitely add to my library to go over later. Author, a lot of people reviewing are yet to read the story, this makes it hard for genuinely curious readers to know what to expect/believe. Even if it’s for review swaps advise them to open a few chapters first. Best of luck❀️

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rixote6487

I very impressed by the work of this author.

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Mea_Nollitsac

interesting character and nice story development

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Kool_Aid_7729

Gomen, Amanai. Ore wa ima, omae no tame ni okottenai. Daremo nikunjainai. Ima wa tada tada kono sekai ga kokochi ii. "Tenjō tenge yuiga dokuson" Dai dai tsutawaru sōden no jutsushiki no meritto wa torisetsu ga aru koto. Demeritto wa jutsushiki no jōhō ga more yasui koto. Anta zen'in-ke no ningen darou? Mukagen jujutsu no koto wa yoku shitteru wake da. Daga kore wa, Gojō-ke no naka demo goku ichibu no ningen shika shiranai. Junten to hanten, πŸ”΄πŸ”΅ Sorezore no mugen o shōtotsu saseru koto de seisei sareru kasō no shitsuryō o oshidasu. Kyoshiki, "Murasaki" 🫴🟣

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Moa19
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Nice content. It would have been better with other name choice for ML.

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Aria_Stark_96

Omg this is so good. I enjoyed reading it.

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Kool_Aid_7729

I want you to stay 'Til I'm in the grave 'Til I rot away, dead and buried 'Til I'm in the casket you carry If you go, I'm going too, uh 'Cause it was always you, alright And if I'm turning blue, please don't save me Nothing left to lose without my baby Birds of a feather, we should stick together, I know I said I'd never think I wasn't better alone Can't change the weather, might not be forever But if it's forever, it's even better And I don't know what I'm crying for I don't think I could love you more It might not be long, but baby, I I'll love you 'til the day that I die 'Til the day that I die 'Til the light leaves my eyes 'Til the day that I die I want you to see, hm How you look to me, hm You wouldn't believe if I told ya You would keep the compliments I throw ya But you're so full of shit, uh Tell me it's a bit, oh Say you don't see it, your mind's polluted Say you wanna quit, don't be stupid And I don't know what I'm crying for I don't think I could love you more Might not be long, but baby, I Don't wanna say goodbye Birds of a feather, we should stick together, I know ('til the day that I die) I said I'd never think I wasn't better alone ('til the light leaves my eyes) Can't change the weather, might not be forever ('til the day that I die) But if it's forever, it's even better I knew you in another life You had that same look in your eyes I love you, don't act so surprised

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galagirwa_anthony

it looks more interesting , have to read more

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Yung_Pablo_1401

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Akofe_Hamzah

A decent book with a thrilling and appealing romance plot

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Daoist267702

rotting in the deep of the class in the

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Jacob_Harrison_0501

An amazing novel i liked the store line.

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Jessie_Maria_7378

nice and interesting novel, I recommand it

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jabzz
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sorry i haven't read the story yet......

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Benone_Davidescu

Nice novel. Can’t wait for more chapters

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Jab_Z
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nice Start author please update more chapters

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DaoistJUM8sH

This is dark romance and I love it Please please we need more updates on the rest of the chapters

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NYASHA_GUPTA

good , it is a nice one. maybe you will like it.

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Asema_Mary

interesting captivating captivating captivating captivating

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Budhaki_Dkhar

wow such romance novel the story is good

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Punky_P
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Wow, where to start! This is probably the most romantic, sickeningly sweet love story I have ever read in my history of reading! I never expected that result at all but it was wonderful, intriguing and beautifully plot out! Definitely worth the read!

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DaWizard

Here’s a 5 star!!! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

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Manauar
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I'm writing this review to get that fast pass

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suresh_palanisamy

nice[img=thinking][img=thinking][img=thinking][img=thinking][img=thinking]πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘Œ

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hid12352101

Started off well. I suppose the MC will soon learn of his identity in later chapters. Is the Sir Alexander? I'll read to find out more.

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Leezertje

A dark BL story. While you might expect some quick action the author takes his/her time to build the background story and is not just writing smut. It seems there is a story to be told. I see a lot of reviews about it being romantic etc, which annoys me as they are just trolling. It is a necessity, and though not in any way romantic, it is (kinda) hot. There is also some interesting change in general roles between the two main characters which I won’t spoil for you. I do wonder how this relationship is going to progress and hope it doesn’t get too abusive but keeps the MC in a form of power position. Could go both ways in really interesting and running away fast as of this point. Only time will tell. But that is just personal preference. Give it a try and see for yourself. It is interesting enough for that matter.

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mhd654

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god1691569

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Minakshi_Prajapati

After reading the novel my reaction, πŸ₯°πŸ’˜πŸ’˜

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ipkookiee

ahhhh !!!!! it is good but the chapters are locked author locked them sooooooooo sooooonnnnnnn

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QuillMistress

I’m yet to read but the first line had me clutching my pearls, in a good way 😈 Will definitely add to my library to go over later. Author, a lot of people reviewing are yet to read the story, this makes it hard for genuinely curious readers to know what to expect/believe. Even if it’s for review swaps advise them to open a few chapters first. Best of luck❀️

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rixote6487

I very impressed by the work of this author.

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Mea_Nollitsac

interesting character and nice story development

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Kool_Aid_7729

Gomen, Amanai. Ore wa ima, omae no tame ni okottenai. Daremo nikunjainai. Ima wa tada tada kono sekai ga kokochi ii. "Tenjō tenge yuiga dokuson" Dai dai tsutawaru sōden no jutsushiki no meritto wa torisetsu ga aru koto. Demeritto wa jutsushiki no jōhō ga more yasui koto. Anta zen'in-ke no ningen darou? Mukagen jujutsu no koto wa yoku shitteru wake da. Daga kore wa, Gojō-ke no naka demo goku ichibu no ningen shika shiranai. Junten to hanten, πŸ”΄πŸ”΅ Sorezore no mugen o shōtotsu saseru koto de seisei sareru kasō no shitsuryō o oshidasu. Kyoshiki, "Murasaki" 🫴🟣

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Moa19
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Nice content. It would have been better with other name choice for ML.

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Aria_Stark_96

Omg this is so good. I enjoyed reading it.

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Kool_Aid_7729

I want you to stay 'Til I'm in the grave 'Til I rot away, dead and buried 'Til I'm in the casket you carry If you go, I'm going too, uh 'Cause it was always you, alright And if I'm turning blue, please don't save me Nothing left to lose without my baby Birds of a feather, we should stick together, I know I said I'd never think I wasn't better alone Can't change the weather, might not be forever But if it's forever, it's even better And I don't know what I'm crying for I don't think I could love you more It might not be long, but baby, I I'll love you 'til the day that I die 'Til the day that I die 'Til the light leaves my eyes 'Til the day that I die I want you to see, hm How you look to me, hm You wouldn't believe if I told ya You would keep the compliments I throw ya But you're so full of shit, uh Tell me it's a bit, oh Say you don't see it, your mind's polluted Say you wanna quit, don't be stupid And I don't know what I'm crying for I don't think I could love you more Might not be long, but baby, I Don't wanna say goodbye Birds of a feather, we should stick together, I know ('til the day that I die) I said I'd never think I wasn't better alone ('til the light leaves my eyes) Can't change the weather, might not be forever ('til the day that I die) But if it's forever, it's even better I knew you in another life You had that same look in your eyes I love you, don't act so surprised

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galagirwa_anthony

it looks more interesting , have to read more

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Yung_Pablo_1401

I’m really impressed [img=update][img=exp]

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Akofe_Hamzah

A decent book with a thrilling and appealing romance plot

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Daoist267702

rotting in the deep of the class in the

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Jacob_Harrison_0501

An amazing novel i liked the store line.

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Jessie_Maria_7378

nice and interesting novel, I recommand it

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jabzz
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sorry i haven't read the story yet......

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Benone_Davidescu

Nice novel. Can’t wait for more chapters

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Jab_Z
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nice Start author please update more chapters

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DaoistJUM8sH

This is dark romance and I love it Please please we need more updates on the rest of the chapters

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NYASHA_GUPTA

good , it is a nice one. maybe you will like it.

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Asema_Mary

interesting captivating captivating captivating captivating

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Budhaki_Dkhar

wow such romance novel the story is good

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Punky_P
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Wow, where to start! This is probably the most romantic, sickeningly sweet love story I have ever read in my history of reading! I never expected that result at all but it was wonderful, intriguing and beautifully plot out! Definitely worth the read!

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DaWizard

Here’s a 5 star!!! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

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Manauar
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I'm writing this review to get that fast pass

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suresh_palanisamy

nice[img=thinking][img=thinking][img=thinking][img=thinking][img=thinking]πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘Œ

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hid12352101

Started off well. I suppose the MC will soon learn of his identity in later chapters. Is the Sir Alexander? I'll read to find out more.

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