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The only real problem so far (30ch) is the grammar, it's really difficult to know what is happening or what is being said.
Writing quality is extremely terrible with lots of grammatical errors. It is confusing to understand sentences properly.
Grammar is terrible. MC is described as indifferent, calm, and serene type but it don't follow that description. Character Design is weird and taken references from Chinese novels. Overall, this is just average novel.
Not that bad, but not that good either. The writing quality is a disaster, but the novel does raise curiosity. As in, you wonder what the author means to say in multiple paragraphs due to the poor grammar. MC is an edgelord, very cringy and turns from cold and indifferent to a 3rd rate young master with an overblown ego. Many inconsistencies, shallow developments and overall, it's a struggle to read without feeling annoyed either with the grammar, or with the MC. Multiple things are too over the top, without any buildup or credibility. The world itself also feels very small, with barely any details in it.
reading this gave me diarrhoea , author please work on your grammar , yo can also take help of chat gpt to proof read your chapters for you so that you won't change the pronounce of Mc from He to She IN A SINGLE PARAGRAPH AND RUIN OUR MOOD!
Well, I’ll leave my review to encourage you to read this gem. First, let’s start with what I consider the most important aspect: the MC. The MC has pride and attitude, and I literally believe that even if he lost all his power, he would still succeed just by his character alone. The MC is ruthless; he doesn’t hesitate to kill his enemies, but the best part is how well he treats his women. In most reincarnation novels with villainous MCs, they are ruthless and indifferent and treat the heroines badly, or even end up hating them just because they weren’t on their side in the original novel. I find that very hypocritical considering what the villains did. But this MC is different. He’s upset because his sister didn’t support him in the novel, but he forgives her, and his attitude toward the other heroines is indifferent, not extreme and unjustified hatred. The MC is ruthless but not insane; he always has a purpose behind his actions. (He’s also the most handsome.) Now, the power system is easy to understand, and it doesn’t overwhelm you with information you’ll forget in two days, which is great. The secondary characters and the world they live in are interesting. There aren’t many details yet to give a better opinion since there are only a few chapters. Now, for the men of culture, the obscene scenes are acceptable—not the best but not the worst either, a 7/10. Recommendation: For the new heroines or potential harem candidates of the MC, I’d suggest that their personalities be diverse, and improving the obscene scenes would be nice. A good example of this would be "The Conqueror's Path," although not as exaggerated as that. Well, in conclusion, it’s a good novel with a promising future.
We haven't really learned much about the world yet but what we got so far was very intriguing I like the pace of the Story so far not to fast and not to slow, so perfect for me I like the characters even more because you don't immediately get what is going on with them And the mc because he goes his own path instead of following the system The Update's are coming without problem so nothing much i can say except please continue like this The english isn't always correct and there is a bit of word mambo jumbo at times but not in a way that you don't get the intent of the words and he also doesn't mind if you correct it so he can edit it, so even better So all i can say it's been great fun reading so far and i hope you continue like this And for the last part of the chapter
Membuka SPOILER
Simply a masterpiece [img=update][img=update][img=update] By the way, Luna is the best girl.
It's a good story, a good world, very good characters (especially Theos), and a fairly constant publication pace. What more can I ask for? Excellent! The MC is a villain, but one who cares about his harem; for now, it's Alice and Luna, and by the looks of it, he's going to grow even more. The MC is someone quite ruthless but loving to his loved ones; he's quite powerful, the greatest genius of the generation. Also, there are a lot of mysteries and quite interesting ones. I hope the author keeps up the great work!
A villain MC who only cares about his harem! Sign me up! At least, that's what I got from the synopsis. Am I right?
is it going to be Harem or single FL ??? well I prefer Harem .... but whatever it is ,I am loving your story writing ..💯👊
I really like in starting 10 to 12 chapters but the mc became to volatile for my liking like -typical villian young masters in Chinese novels where they thought themselves invincible and thought of everyone plaything, I know some people like that kind of novel but not for me. I don't hate the story, i really like starting chapters it's refreshing for me but then it becomes that i describe above, if you like that kind of novel you can give it a try. Remember he only cares for person in the novel - Alice.
Author if you even think about dropping this novel I'll pirate all your future works. There are not many good harem novels out there but this is wayyy too good (my top 3) oh and BTW please make harem BIGGGGGG (small harem and single fl are for those who lack stamina MWAHAHAHAHA)
The only real problem so far (30ch) is the grammar, it's really difficult to know what is happening or what is being said.
Writing quality is extremely terrible with lots of grammatical errors. It is confusing to understand sentences properly.
Grammar is terrible. MC is described as indifferent, calm, and serene type but it don't follow that description. Character Design is weird and taken references from Chinese novels. Overall, this is just average novel.
Not that bad, but not that good either. The writing quality is a disaster, but the novel does raise curiosity. As in, you wonder what the author means to say in multiple paragraphs due to the poor grammar. MC is an edgelord, very cringy and turns from cold and indifferent to a 3rd rate young master with an overblown ego. Many inconsistencies, shallow developments and overall, it's a struggle to read without feeling annoyed either with the grammar, or with the MC. Multiple things are too over the top, without any buildup or credibility. The world itself also feels very small, with barely any details in it.
reading this gave me diarrhoea , author please work on your grammar , yo can also take help of chat gpt to proof read your chapters for you so that you won't change the pronounce of Mc from He to She IN A SINGLE PARAGRAPH AND RUIN OUR MOOD!
Well, I’ll leave my review to encourage you to read this gem. First, let’s start with what I consider the most important aspect: the MC. The MC has pride and attitude, and I literally believe that even if he lost all his power, he would still succeed just by his character alone. The MC is ruthless; he doesn’t hesitate to kill his enemies, but the best part is how well he treats his women. In most reincarnation novels with villainous MCs, they are ruthless and indifferent and treat the heroines badly, or even end up hating them just because they weren’t on their side in the original novel. I find that very hypocritical considering what the villains did. But this MC is different. He’s upset because his sister didn’t support him in the novel, but he forgives her, and his attitude toward the other heroines is indifferent, not extreme and unjustified hatred. The MC is ruthless but not insane; he always has a purpose behind his actions. (He’s also the most handsome.) Now, the power system is easy to understand, and it doesn’t overwhelm you with information you’ll forget in two days, which is great. The secondary characters and the world they live in are interesting. There aren’t many details yet to give a better opinion since there are only a few chapters. Now, for the men of culture, the obscene scenes are acceptable—not the best but not the worst either, a 7/10. Recommendation: For the new heroines or potential harem candidates of the MC, I’d suggest that their personalities be diverse, and improving the obscene scenes would be nice. A good example of this would be "The Conqueror's Path," although not as exaggerated as that. Well, in conclusion, it’s a good novel with a promising future.
We haven't really learned much about the world yet but what we got so far was very intriguing I like the pace of the Story so far not to fast and not to slow, so perfect for me I like the characters even more because you don't immediately get what is going on with them And the mc because he goes his own path instead of following the system The Update's are coming without problem so nothing much i can say except please continue like this The english isn't always correct and there is a bit of word mambo jumbo at times but not in a way that you don't get the intent of the words and he also doesn't mind if you correct it so he can edit it, so even better So all i can say it's been great fun reading so far and i hope you continue like this And for the last part of the chapter
Membuka SPOILER Simply a masterpiece [img=update][img=update][img=update] By the way, Luna is the best girl.
It's a good story, a good world, very good characters (especially Theos), and a fairly constant publication pace. What more can I ask for? Excellent! The MC is a villain, but one who cares about his harem; for now, it's Alice and Luna, and by the looks of it, he's going to grow even more. The MC is someone quite ruthless but loving to his loved ones; he's quite powerful, the greatest genius of the generation. Also, there are a lot of mysteries and quite interesting ones. I hope the author keeps up the great work!
A villain MC who only cares about his harem! Sign me up! At least, that's what I got from the synopsis. Am I right?
is it going to be Harem or single FL ??? well I prefer Harem .... but whatever it is ,I am loving your story writing ..💯👊
I really like in starting 10 to 12 chapters but the mc became to volatile for my liking like -typical villian young masters in Chinese novels where they thought themselves invincible and thought of everyone plaything, I know some people like that kind of novel but not for me. I don't hate the story, i really like starting chapters it's refreshing for me but then it becomes that i describe above, if you like that kind of novel you can give it a try. Remember he only cares for person in the novel - Alice.
Author if you even think about dropping this novel I'll pirate all your future works. There are not many good harem novels out there but this is wayyy too good (my top 3) oh and BTW please make harem BIGGGGGG (small harem and single fl are for those who lack stamina MWAHAHAHAHA)