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A interesting and incredible story that deserves to be read! An dtoryline that get you intruigt and close to the world with the background not lacking!
Got about 12 chapters in. The dialog is pretty weird. Not terrible. Feels unnatural. The MC is a hypocrite who adds nothing to the story even though it is about him. A random time skip happens with no mention from the author? Overall it seemed like a mess thrown together and called a story
I read all your histories, hope one day u do a Alexander the Great based novel. or one in Germany before WWÄŗl. love your write.
WOW. This is a great find, I really hope you continue with this it has the potential to be so amazing. Good job author you have my support!
The biggest issue with this novel is the protagonist. From what I read he seems to just be spoonfed power from the system and the side characters. Basically everything is done for him and anybody could take his place. The protagonist has an extremely high responsibility running the country and yet he doesn't actually run it? instead the system guides him on a leash like he's an idiot on what to do next, while his staff also make all the important decisions and the mc just plays along with the majority opinion. So far he hasn't shown any talents of his own which in my opinion is essential for any protagonist to have to make the novel interesting. Im Willing to boost my rating and continue reading if this changes tho if anyone knows if it gets betterš
Membuka SPOILER A interesting and incredible story that deserves to be read! An dtoryline that get you intruigt and close to the world with the background not lacking!
Got about 12 chapters in. The dialog is pretty weird. Not terrible. Feels unnatural. The MC is a hypocrite who adds nothing to the story even though it is about him. A random time skip happens with no mention from the author? Overall it seemed like a mess thrown together and called a story
I read all your histories, hope one day u do a Alexander the Great based novel. or one in Germany before WWÄŗl. love your write.
WOW. This is a great find, I really hope you continue with this it has the potential to be so amazing. Good job author you have my support!
The biggest issue with this novel is the protagonist. From what I read he seems to just be spoonfed power from the system and the side characters. Basically everything is done for him and anybody could take his place. The protagonist has an extremely high responsibility running the country and yet he doesn't actually run it? instead the system guides him on a leash like he's an idiot on what to do next, while his staff also make all the important decisions and the mc just plays along with the majority opinion. So far he hasn't shown any talents of his own which in my opinion is essential for any protagonist to have to make the novel interesting. Im Willing to boost my rating and continue reading if this changes tho if anyone knows if it gets betterš
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