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Although the novel is great overall, there are some parts I find confusing. First, what is the MC's main goal? It hasn’t been clearly stated so far. Second, how did the MC acquire this body? There are other aspects that remain unclear as well, and I hope these questions get addressed in future chapters.
the translation is okay, but there are A LOT of MAJOR inconsistencies with the storyline and the plot. some really dumb things like tsunade having hemophobia before even going to war and having her family dead, or the 'sannin' acquiring this title before even fighting hanzo
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to anyone reading this review.. give this fanfic a try. this is a very good read
Honestly, it’s an OKAY translation. There are occasions (last 9 or so chapters) that have the occasional Chinese name. Which is annoying. Other than that, the translator should probably triple check and actually edit the translations if they know English well. Just so it flows better. Other than those bits and translation errors it’s not a bad read.
well mc is a demon Or to be more accurate mc got the whole muzan Jackson bundle in naruto and yeah this is a translation but it's way better than the original one and translation is also good soo yeah 5 stars for good story and translation
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Although the novel is great overall, there are some parts I find confusing. First, what is the MC's main goal? It hasn’t been clearly stated so far. Second, how did the MC acquire this body? There are other aspects that remain unclear as well, and I hope these questions get addressed in future chapters.
the translation is okay, but there are A LOT of MAJOR inconsistencies with the storyline and the plot. some really dumb things like tsunade having hemophobia before even going to war and having her family dead, or the 'sannin' acquiring this title before even fighting hanzo
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to anyone reading this review.. give this fanfic a try. this is a very good read
Honestly, it’s an OKAY translation. There are occasions (last 9 or so chapters) that have the occasional Chinese name. Which is annoying. Other than that, the translator should probably triple check and actually edit the translations if they know English well. Just so it flows better. Other than those bits and translation errors it’s not a bad read.
well mc is a demon Or to be more accurate mc got the whole muzan Jackson bundle in naruto and yeah this is a translation but it's way better than the original one and translation is also good soo yeah 5 stars for good story and translation
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