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honestly I got lost after the first couple chapters and after finishing still couldn't make heads or tails of it
the story barely started and the author already getting sidetracked by side stories
bro dont't make harry insert bro starting is good 👍 it has potential keep writer insert only bro 👍👍👍
Story started off great, and then just like the authors other works, he got sidetracked. I was digging the gatcha system as I was looking for something not too serious but the plot went for a walk and by chapter 11, I just gave up. Author writes like they have ADHD and it's sad because there are good ideas, but should just be seperate books. Author, do yourself a favor and commit to a single story and fill out some chapters.
Membuka SPOILER honestly I got lost after the first couple chapters and after finishing still couldn't make heads or tails of it
the story barely started and the author already getting sidetracked by side stories
bro dont't make harry insert bro starting is good 👍 it has potential keep writer insert only bro 👍👍👍
Story started off great, and then just like the authors other works, he got sidetracked. I was digging the gatcha system as I was looking for something not too serious but the plot went for a walk and by chapter 11, I just gave up. Author writes like they have ADHD and it's sad because there are good ideas, but should just be seperate books. Author, do yourself a favor and commit to a single story and fill out some chapters.
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