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Tulis ulasanStory started off great, and then just like the authors other works, he got sidetracked. I was digging the gatcha system as I was looking for something not too serious but the plot went for a walk and by chapter 11, I just gave up. Author writes like they have ADHD and it's sad because there are good ideas, but should just be seperate books. Author, do yourself a favor and commit to a single story and fill out some chapters.
Membuka SPOILERhonestly I got lost after the first couple chapters and after finishing still couldn't make heads or tails of it
Not a single finished story nor updated for months...It already shows what kind of author you are. Better focus on one story then try other but your most fics stops at below 10 chapters. This is simply outrageous
Story started off great, and then just like the authors other works, he got sidetracked. I was digging the gatcha system as I was looking for something not too serious but the plot went for a walk and by chapter 11, I just gave up. Author writes like they have ADHD and it's sad because there are good ideas, but should just be seperate books. Author, do yourself a favor and commit to a single story and fill out some chapters.
Membuka SPOILERhonestly I got lost after the first couple chapters and after finishing still couldn't make heads or tails of it
Not a single finished story nor updated for months...It already shows what kind of author you are. Better focus on one story then try other but your most fics stops at below 10 chapters. This is simply outrageous