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MC is a little immature but obviously because of his age I found it interesting for others MC being young has meaningless maturity it's a story with cool and interesting development he enjoys a story I would like good football and it has so far I'm enjoying it quite
The author here, this is my first work and I would love to hear your reviews and comments about it. I've always been a big fan of football and I just thought why not write a novel about it[img=recommend]
I still don't understand why this story wasn't successful it's one of the best football stories in the web novel it's really a very good football story the episodes are a bit short but it's good
MC is a little immature but obviously because of his age I found it interesting for others MC being young has meaningless maturity it's a story with cool and interesting development he enjoys a story I would like good football and it has so far I'm enjoying it quite
The author here, this is my first work and I would love to hear your reviews and comments about it. I've always been a big fan of football and I just thought why not write a novel about it[img=recommend]
I still don't understand why this story wasn't successful it's one of the best football stories in the web novel it's really a very good football story the episodes are a bit short but it's good