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Great story! A decent MTL, could use some editing, but no big flaws. Read if you want to spend some time mindlessly enjoying a power fantasy.
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Interesante, aunque es un poco difícil entender, más para los que recién empiezan a leer, porque para los que llevamos años y leído varios historias con diferentes idiomas con traductor, ya te acostumbras.
the story is ok need more in dep't in love seen i mean cultured one on one character building .......................................................................................................................................................................................
Only Writing Quality: 3 Stars Else it's pretty common for a MTL readers like me. And the plot is really saucy. Hope it doesn't get dropped early.
MUDA! MUDA! MUDA! MUDA!... 5 ⭐ to my novel. SHAMELESS INDEED. All Comments are valued and appreciated, so don't shy away to comment. 10 Reviews: 5 Extra Chaps/Right Away 20 Reviews: 10 Extra Chaps/Right Away
Great story! A decent MTL, could use some editing, but no big flaws. Read if you want to spend some time mindlessly enjoying a power fantasy.
Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa Aaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa,....... ... . ..
Interesante, aunque es un poco difícil entender, más para los que recién empiezan a leer, porque para los que llevamos años y leído varios historias con diferentes idiomas con traductor, ya te acostumbras.
the story is ok need more in dep't in love seen i mean cultured one on one character building .......................................................................................................................................................................................
Only Writing Quality: 3 Stars Else it's pretty common for a MTL readers like me. And the plot is really saucy. Hope it doesn't get dropped early.
MUDA! MUDA! MUDA! MUDA!... 5 ⭐ to my novel. SHAMELESS INDEED. All Comments are valued and appreciated, so don't shy away to comment. 10 Reviews: 5 Extra Chaps/Right Away 20 Reviews: 10 Extra Chaps/Right Away