8Ulasan-ulasan
- Kualitas penulisan
- Stabilitas Pembaruan
- Pengembangan Cerita
- Desain Karakter
- Latar Belakang Dunia
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overall I think the story is wonderful it has great potential and I wonder if the venom control will increase his power and also give him other vampires power as well
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Nice. A change from regular twilight fanfiction. Hope you update more tho.
it's light to read and easier to understand and follow. Also, it doesn't have any ridiculous ability, and it follows the original design of the twilight vampire(no flesh and blood vampire, no origin vampire, and such). so overall, this story is worth reading. I just hope that the author will update regularly. ty.
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overall I think the story is wonderful it has great potential and I wonder if the venom control will increase his power and also give him other vampires power as well
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Nice. A change from regular twilight fanfiction. Hope you update more tho.
it's light to read and easier to understand and follow. Also, it doesn't have any ridiculous ability, and it follows the original design of the twilight vampire(no flesh and blood vampire, no origin vampire, and such). so overall, this story is worth reading. I just hope that the author will update regularly. ty.
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