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Buenísimo, me encantó como va progresando el personaje, aunque me gustaría que llegara a formar un equipo de verdad, no solo de el mismo, aparte de eso mata a Rachel porfavooor
It is an amazing fanfic novel(almost feel like novel most of the time ). Hope author doesn't lose his motivation.
Author is cooking incredibly hard with this. LOTM and TOG combine quite well imo, and I also like the fact that author is trying to actively change the story by adding new characters and sub plots
this concept(having lotm powers in another universe is one of if not the best of my favorite concepts) is very good and well done, the mc is strong, and has useful abilities but other characters are the same, the limitations put on the mc such as him not having the acting methods or advancement rituals given to him is a good balancing factor, this particular world(tower of god) has a clear sense of progression as the mc is climbing the tower and getting stronger in the process and the fact the mc is going the Amon route *shivers in my boots* is a good "such wow" factor. the only down side is that the world seems to be following the tower of god story pretty closely without alterations, as if the mc dont have impact on the story as a whole, yeah there was the whole ship raid and battle with the red ranker and the "silver" dude and the whole Amon plague on the floors 21-22 but these thing dont seem to affect the main cast or story all that much, like khum(bad with names) dont even mention the amon thing with Winston, which i assume they should be aware of as it was said to be something that was gaining attention and they are aware of the new "team" which is just winston and the avatars, friends talk about news, interesting facts and things like that, maybe one future chapter could be one of the main cast meeting a "Amon" and all he does is tease them while being... you know, an Amon, creepy, eerie, weird and peculiar, and this encounter have some impact on the person who encoutered the Amon, like giving them monocle-phobia, and later the mc jokingly puts on an monocle while meeting their friends as a prank, but you do you, just a suggestion
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Fanfic muito boa , na verdade a melhor fic de TOG que ja li ......... eu daria nota 5 estrelas apenas por mistura LOTM com TOG, a escrita esta impecavel também. Desejo tudo de bom ao autor!! Também espero que ele nao abandone é joia rara.
Samuel ruined everything for me when reading this. for someone who wants to read this fanfic, prepare to read annoying antagonists that have luck more than a protagonist because he "always" revive when mc kill him because the author can't move the story without it note : the "always" is a hyperbole from me because the antagonists only revive one time from the latest chapter I read.
Captures some of the mystery of LoTM and the world building of ToG Noice Noice Damn still not 140? Oioi oioioioioioioioioioioioioioioioioioioioioioioioioioioi
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Best one yet but I do wish you came back sooner………………………………………… …………………………… …………………………… …………………………… …………………………… …………………………… …………………………… …………………………… …………………………… ……………………………
Very good story even though the main story feels the same it’s still very good
The story so far has been very beautifully pieced together and the crossover between the LoTM and ToG has been very smooth and well thought of. It's just maybe in the 2nd volume the author can start diverting from canon as volume 1 follows canon through and through.
Volume 1 has studied well, I hope volume 2 will be just as good ..................................................................................................................
Posion tester . This make you read again Tog . Author has done great story development with his own creativity . you can give it try .
as per the author's desire this review was written, main thing I like about this fanfic is the way the sequence was added and instill in the story, the nonexistent plot holes, as well as the pacing. main question tho, who is the heroine? Or will there be one?
A dumb repetition of the original story. The author has a hard time with imagination. The main character here is just as an outsider who participates in the plot, without really changing anything. The beginning was good, but in the end it was a big disappointment.
Just the words LOTM x TOG is enough to makes it 5 stars ...........................................................................;;;......
An amazing Tower of God fic with addition of LoTM Pathways. I am quite interested in this fanfic since I like both of the stories. Personally, I would have preferred for GA Pathways for the Tower, but it is what it is, I guess. On another note, the writing quality is pretty good with little to no errors. I have some problems with the way the story is not changing much with the addition of another Irregular in the fold but it's okay I guess. Maybe once this first arc is over, the changes will become more prominent. The characterization for the OG characters is pretty on point. MC on the other hand feels a little bit off from time to time. He doesn't really have a solid stance on things so far, which I don't like since he seems to be developing in the direction of Klein while having limited amount of qualities that made Klein great. Perhaps the author is going somewhere with this so I won't be too harsh on him. Update stability is great, and I would definitely recommend it to new readers.
the best lotm & tog fanfic ever and I loved the writing style the transition of perspective between the m c and the other characters i am just worried about the facing of his advancement in his sequence like it's not even half of the story of tower of god and he's already nearing mid sequence and will your writing source only be the anime or will you take from the manhwa or other sources
tower of god was all I needed to know, and a main character that'll scam you out of your money just to help you is a bonus.
I have been waiting for a decent Tower of God fic for forever. Author, you shattered my expectations and dropped this masterpiece. Not to mention the crossover with Lotm, one of my favourite novels. Honestly, thanks for writing this and don't you dare drop it! Xd
I smell a god tier potential~ I just hope the author doesn't fold under pressure as this is such a unique peace that it might just make it to top 10 in the power rankings of All Ti e
This is by far the best TOG fanfic I’ve every read and found, and trust me I’ve looked EVERYWHERE. The story promises a unique approach to the story, with beyonder powers in the play it makes things interesting. While the grammar in the first volume can hit or miss, the author polishes himself immeasurably in the second volume, his writing becomes refined and well written, truly befitting that of a gentlemen if you truly understand what I’m trying to accentuate. The characters and world? Well, assuming we all know TOG, this shouldn’t be even up for debate, it’s incredible, courtesy of SIU with his masterpiece. All in all, it’s very engaging and enjoyable, take for example the lastest chapter im on, it left off in a gun wrenching cliff hanger for me. So much so that anything else I read I can’t help but summarize it to trash compared to what I was expecting to read, what I’m basically saying is that it instilled an immense amount of anticipation and hype inside me, so much so that I’m feeling antsy from leaving off during such a heated moment. Either way, it’s an incredible read, and I’m immeasurably happy I found it, as I find the lack of good TOG stories here unfortunate to me and most likey most of you seeing this. I, crown you the king of TOG stories on this platform
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Buenísimo, me encantó como va progresando el personaje, aunque me gustaría que llegara a formar un equipo de verdad, no solo de el mismo, aparte de eso mata a Rachel porfavooor
It is an amazing fanfic novel(almost feel like novel most of the time ). Hope author doesn't lose his motivation.
Author is cooking incredibly hard with this. LOTM and TOG combine quite well imo, and I also like the fact that author is trying to actively change the story by adding new characters and sub plots
this concept(having lotm powers in another universe is one of if not the best of my favorite concepts) is very good and well done, the mc is strong, and has useful abilities but other characters are the same, the limitations put on the mc such as him not having the acting methods or advancement rituals given to him is a good balancing factor, this particular world(tower of god) has a clear sense of progression as the mc is climbing the tower and getting stronger in the process and the fact the mc is going the Amon route *shivers in my boots* is a good "such wow" factor. the only down side is that the world seems to be following the tower of god story pretty closely without alterations, as if the mc dont have impact on the story as a whole, yeah there was the whole ship raid and battle with the red ranker and the "silver" dude and the whole Amon plague on the floors 21-22 but these thing dont seem to affect the main cast or story all that much, like khum(bad with names) dont even mention the amon thing with Winston, which i assume they should be aware of as it was said to be something that was gaining attention and they are aware of the new "team" which is just winston and the avatars, friends talk about news, interesting facts and things like that, maybe one future chapter could be one of the main cast meeting a "Amon" and all he does is tease them while being... you know, an Amon, creepy, eerie, weird and peculiar, and this encounter have some impact on the person who encoutered the Amon, like giving them monocle-phobia, and later the mc jokingly puts on an monocle while meeting their friends as a prank, but you do you, just a suggestion
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Fanfic muito boa , na verdade a melhor fic de TOG que ja li ......... eu daria nota 5 estrelas apenas por mistura LOTM com TOG, a escrita esta impecavel também. Desejo tudo de bom ao autor!! Também espero que ele nao abandone é joia rara.
Samuel ruined everything for me when reading this. for someone who wants to read this fanfic, prepare to read annoying antagonists that have luck more than a protagonist because he "always" revive when mc kill him because the author can't move the story without it note : the "always" is a hyperbole from me because the antagonists only revive one time from the latest chapter I read.
Captures some of the mystery of LoTM and the world building of ToG Noice Noice Damn still not 140? Oioi oioioioioioioioioioioioioioioioioioioioioioioioioioioi
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Best one yet but I do wish you came back sooner………………………………………… …………………………… …………………………… …………………………… …………………………… …………………………… …………………………… …………………………… …………………………… ……………………………
Very good story even though the main story feels the same it’s still very good
The story so far has been very beautifully pieced together and the crossover between the LoTM and ToG has been very smooth and well thought of. It's just maybe in the 2nd volume the author can start diverting from canon as volume 1 follows canon through and through.
Volume 1 has studied well, I hope volume 2 will be just as good ..................................................................................................................
Posion tester . This make you read again Tog . Author has done great story development with his own creativity . you can give it try .
as per the author's desire this review was written, main thing I like about this fanfic is the way the sequence was added and instill in the story, the nonexistent plot holes, as well as the pacing. main question tho, who is the heroine? Or will there be one?
A dumb repetition of the original story. The author has a hard time with imagination. The main character here is just as an outsider who participates in the plot, without really changing anything. The beginning was good, but in the end it was a big disappointment.
Just the words LOTM x TOG is enough to makes it 5 stars ...........................................................................;;;......
An amazing Tower of God fic with addition of LoTM Pathways. I am quite interested in this fanfic since I like both of the stories. Personally, I would have preferred for GA Pathways for the Tower, but it is what it is, I guess. On another note, the writing quality is pretty good with little to no errors. I have some problems with the way the story is not changing much with the addition of another Irregular in the fold but it's okay I guess. Maybe once this first arc is over, the changes will become more prominent. The characterization for the OG characters is pretty on point. MC on the other hand feels a little bit off from time to time. He doesn't really have a solid stance on things so far, which I don't like since he seems to be developing in the direction of Klein while having limited amount of qualities that made Klein great. Perhaps the author is going somewhere with this so I won't be too harsh on him. Update stability is great, and I would definitely recommend it to new readers.
the best lotm & tog fanfic ever and I loved the writing style the transition of perspective between the m c and the other characters i am just worried about the facing of his advancement in his sequence like it's not even half of the story of tower of god and he's already nearing mid sequence and will your writing source only be the anime or will you take from the manhwa or other sources
tower of god was all I needed to know, and a main character that'll scam you out of your money just to help you is a bonus.
I have been waiting for a decent Tower of God fic for forever. Author, you shattered my expectations and dropped this masterpiece. Not to mention the crossover with Lotm, one of my favourite novels. Honestly, thanks for writing this and don't you dare drop it! Xd
I smell a god tier potential~ I just hope the author doesn't fold under pressure as this is such a unique peace that it might just make it to top 10 in the power rankings of All Ti e
This is by far the best TOG fanfic I’ve every read and found, and trust me I’ve looked EVERYWHERE. The story promises a unique approach to the story, with beyonder powers in the play it makes things interesting. While the grammar in the first volume can hit or miss, the author polishes himself immeasurably in the second volume, his writing becomes refined and well written, truly befitting that of a gentlemen if you truly understand what I’m trying to accentuate. The characters and world? Well, assuming we all know TOG, this shouldn’t be even up for debate, it’s incredible, courtesy of SIU with his masterpiece. All in all, it’s very engaging and enjoyable, take for example the lastest chapter im on, it left off in a gun wrenching cliff hanger for me. So much so that anything else I read I can’t help but summarize it to trash compared to what I was expecting to read, what I’m basically saying is that it instilled an immense amount of anticipation and hype inside me, so much so that I’m feeling antsy from leaving off during such a heated moment. Either way, it’s an incredible read, and I’m immeasurably happy I found it, as I find the lack of good TOG stories here unfortunate to me and most likey most of you seeing this. I, crown you the king of TOG stories on this platform