Invisible-a Harry Potter FanFic

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Jeet_Chattopadhyay

A great story with a really good translation and I hope you continue translating this and maybe even some of the other stories by the same author.

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omiguh

The translation is great but the story is meh. It’s just not logical. There’s no reason for everyone to hate the mc. At least make it logical, make is so they are not fond of him or there is clearly a favorite but it’s just dialed up to 11. Not to mention Voldemort is still alive but from the sounds of it the prophecy still got out and the mc younger brother is still famous? Idk, not a fan of the story but like I said, the translation is good. And it seems it may be one of those power fantasy novels. Apparently Harry can do 6th and 7th year magic as a child without a wand. Whatever, I’m not interested, oh and it looks like snape may actually like him

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ahmedIprahim

هل يتغاضي المعلمون عن سلوك برايان بسبب دمبلدور ولا أفهم ف جميع الروايات التي قرأتها تقريبا دمبلدور شخص متلاعب وذكي لماذ في هذه الرواية هو غبي بهذا الشكلولا يفهم التلميحات مره عندما رأي طائر الفينيق التحول الخاص بهاري لماذا لم يربط هذا بالنبؤه تلميحات أخرى كثيره مثل عدم موهبه برايان وموهبه هاري المبالغ بها

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nerghomek

A great translation, I hope you continue it, What is the name of the original author? It's a small doubt of mine, so I can give a review to the original author as well.

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Soal_San

I can't speak for updates since it was done when I got here, so five. World background, it's a fic which is normally a 4, but there was an effort to give more depth to the usual setting, so 5. It's a TL, so I won't judge writing quality, and instead, I'll judge translation quality, 4 out of 5, there were minor mistakes, but it's not perfect, still well done though, and there are corrections in effective writing quality that make the TL better than the original. Story development, I'll give a 3 at best, it's a basic power trip fantasy fic, and it is short as far as finished fics go, so the story comes across as rushed at the end, more like the original Author was done but didn't want to disappoint by dropping. Character design, is a 3, as I said, it's a short power trip fic so there really isn't much characterization happening, as in, a Character gets established and doesn't have any growth for the rest of the story, with the MC having the most growth, but 43 chapters isn't a lot of room for anyone to grow. Overall, a 4 star bump TL of a 3 star fic.

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TemplisReaper

I have never rewritten a review but this book deserves one. It has a unique twist to the Harry Potter books that I enjoy.

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abner_Britto

Good read and a good translation by the author 👍

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Slayerzach

It was great till the author decided to rush the ending. the ending was completely out of nowhere and made absolutely no sense.

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God_of_hentai

its so fucking good one of the best ive read

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ZEN_F

amazing fan fic [img=recommend] one of few fan fic that truly make me read it again and again .

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SonDio

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John_Smith_3313

Really great can’t wait for next one on the edge of my seat for what happens next

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The_Eldritch_Troll

Good read. Give more bonus chapters.

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menalik_boyd

honestly I really like the story and thank you for translating it , the comments at the end are soo relatable

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dragonfinatic

this is a story about harry living a worse life than he did with the dursley family but there are ups to this story after making it to Hogwarts. this is the most well written story i have read in a long time. especially with how this story keeps you emotionally invested and attached to it even with the constant want to put it down from how harry's family treats him

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PuddingLord

Obligatory Author review! it's a good book, We are almost done over on P@treon with it so I can finally say the following...The characters are written fine, not that indef in the beginning but the lore grows with the book, the Translation quality is amazing!