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Good .................................................................................................................................................
Great job, keep going! (A little advice: try to add more details, as some events feel a bit rushed.........................................)
I won't give a 5 stars because of the lack of chapters, it was a good story but what bothers me a little is the explanation or descriptions on what's happening there is. So maybe author-sama dump like IDK 100 chapters maybe ;D for me to make a more in depth review maybe?
The premise of the story is cool and all, but the length of the chapters is a little disappointing. Besides a few grammar mistakes, I’d say this book is decent.
How did it come from barely beating Doma with his full strength to suddenly being able to go head to head with all The upper moons and Muzan? I mean like after his fight with Doma he didn't even have a week until he suddenly got that strong? The plot is too sudden!
Good .................................................................................................................................................
Great job, keep going! (A little advice: try to add more details, as some events feel a bit rushed.........................................)
I won't give a 5 stars because of the lack of chapters, it was a good story but what bothers me a little is the explanation or descriptions on what's happening there is. So maybe author-sama dump like IDK 100 chapters maybe ;D for me to make a more in depth review maybe?
The premise of the story is cool and all, but the length of the chapters is a little disappointing. Besides a few grammar mistakes, I’d say this book is decent.
How did it come from barely beating Doma with his full strength to suddenly being able to go head to head with all The upper moons and Muzan? I mean like after his fight with Doma he didn't even have a week until he suddenly got that strong? The plot is too sudden!