Primordial Harem System

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Primordial_Seven

My previous review got deleted for some reason... Anyways, you guys can ask if you have any questions about the novel. We are already past chap 100 now.

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SYED_AFAQ

author is there Yuri in it not a fan of it

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Aim_zx

Hello Author, I have a question Is the MC here the same as your other novel whete the MC was stupid and dumb and not even overpowerd as you've said that's what I've seen from reading 20 chapters in it and this was annoying Please don't take offense I just don't want to read smth I won't enjoy others might like it.

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Daoist096852

Nice story so far.Will have to see how it goes in the future .

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Daoist_Large_Slong

From what i can tell, this is the first critical review - lets get into it Ill start with two massive issues I have. This may save some of you from wasting your time immedietly. 1. The MC tells his mom that he is a reincarnator in the beginning of the story. - seemed forced too. The authors preference, but there are a ton like me who hate that stuff. 2. Due to some “issue” the MC acts like a complete shy simp. This is suppose to end at 18 years old but honestly seems hard to stomach the more I read. - its the kind of shy where the MC gets red over the smallest things. Japanese simp vibe smh Other than that, so far the story is fairly good. world building progresses the more he grows stronger. Also, hes supposedly pretty OP. If the two issues dont bother you, id suggest you read this. Otherwise, you may want to pass this one up.

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p_narayanarao

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ShinGotLost

oh, yeah this novel is a banger, five star, ✌️

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UNPHAZED_LEPER

As promised. My reasons for giving this 5 star have already been posted in chapter comments. If you want, go read them. Or don't. But whatever you choose, do yourself a favor and read this novel.

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TrustyLoyal

Review should be more than 40 characters.

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Blazzing18

I read the description and this looks pretty good... I think ill give it a try but the only thing that sucks is that the MC has to leave his mother and sister on earth... it would be cool if they can go with him... but Ill still give it shot because it looks pretty cool

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Dark_PersonJJ

very good read, i will give it 5 star rating at this moment, keep it up.

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Dark_PersonJJ

Fast pass for you today, Hope you update your Naruto story soon?

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Dark_PersonJJ

You have great talent in writing, very interesting read this story is, and hope you update your Naruto story soon.

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joyce_4070

first of all, i am not a paid reader, so I won't be able to read paid chaps. but from what i have read in free 37 chaps, the novel has potential. a huge amount of dormant potential, about to be unleashed by author (idk which type of potential, iykyk). so i recomend you give this one a try. and it will be a treat for Harem genre lovers. I hope there will be some lemons in next chapters when I purchase them.