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A masterpiece? No. But I really enjoyed reading it. It's a bit uncomfortable when relationships with people develop so quickly, but I find it normal because they always meet in action-packed situations. (I don't know if it's going to be a long-running fan fic, but I hope the author keeps writing.)
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Enjoying to read and the story development it slow but in my opinion I like it. Author make the X-Men and the brotherhood of mutant character turn them likable and respectful people. Usually another fanfic make them into creep or into bunch of incompetent fools. So I like the change of pace of this fanfic also author give me busty caster da Vinci if you don't I will make fou watch the Velma show.
The story was okay, maybe needed some work in some parts of the narrative, but nothing too serious. The problem for me was when for no reason at all they gave our MC who was already very strong and could get stronger with his own efforts a ridiculously OP ability. Other than that the dialogues need some improvement. I see potential but I don't hold out much hope for its future, everyone likes OP MCs, until they get bored of them, which happens a lot faster than you'd think.
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Very gud novel altamente recomendada ................................................................................................. Play Darkest Dungeon
very good novel i highly reccomend it to fgo fans............................................................................................................
very good novel i enjoyed it reading from another account. Please don't drop it...........................................................................................
O protagonista vai continuar fraco ou vai fica mais forte sem os servos Para mim um protagonista que depende dos outros não dura muito quero saber logo para pode para de ler essa história, mais a história e boa só que não e para mim o protagonista que depende muito dos outros e na Marvel também não dá certo e só matarem ele antes de invocar servos tem muitos na Marvel que consegue
Buat MC jdi Morgan lefay[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
It starts rocky but it grows into a Story with an itrecatly weaved Naretiv that Quickly changes Fate's and shatters Destiny's of the Marvel Heros and Villains, It also Shows how Connected Ritsuka Fujimaru is to his Servants and everyone he met in his Journy
A masterpiece? No. But I really enjoyed reading it. It's a bit uncomfortable when relationships with people develop so quickly, but I find it normal because they always meet in action-packed situations. (I don't know if it's going to be a long-running fan fic, but I hope the author keeps writing.)
just don't drop it [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Enjoying to read and the story development it slow but in my opinion I like it. Author make the X-Men and the brotherhood of mutant character turn them likable and respectful people. Usually another fanfic make them into creep or into bunch of incompetent fools. So I like the change of pace of this fanfic also author give me busty caster da Vinci if you don't I will make fou watch the Velma show.
The story was okay, maybe needed some work in some parts of the narrative, but nothing too serious. The problem for me was when for no reason at all they gave our MC who was already very strong and could get stronger with his own efforts a ridiculously OP ability. Other than that the dialogues need some improvement. I see potential but I don't hold out much hope for its future, everyone likes OP MCs, until they get bored of them, which happens a lot faster than you'd think.
[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Very gud novel altamente recomendada ................................................................................................. Play Darkest Dungeon
very good novel i highly reccomend it to fgo fans............................................................................................................
very good novel i enjoyed it reading from another account. Please don't drop it...........................................................................................
O protagonista vai continuar fraco ou vai fica mais forte sem os servos Para mim um protagonista que depende dos outros não dura muito quero saber logo para pode para de ler essa história, mais a história e boa só que não e para mim o protagonista que depende muito dos outros e na Marvel também não dá certo e só matarem ele antes de invocar servos tem muitos na Marvel que consegue
Buat MC jdi Morgan lefay[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
It starts rocky but it grows into a Story with an itrecatly weaved Naretiv that Quickly changes Fate's and shatters Destiny's of the Marvel Heros and Villains, It also Shows how Connected Ritsuka Fujimaru is to his Servants and everyone he met in his Journy