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Amazing history, always i like history of the path, Second War, but this history are im another level. Just read this. jejjsjsjsjsjznnzjzjzjzjzjzjzjkzjzjz(Limit of characters)
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Pretty good story thus far. Character Design is just IRL people so not really all that creative but that is to be expected from this type of fanfic. Writing Quality is good, no mistakes from what I have read. Story Development is also good. World Background is mentioned a lot, with many characters appearing and many changes to the actual WW2. Overall, pretty good, but it would be better if this gal took charge instead.
Going into this I was bit wary but this book suprised me. It takes the 3rd Reich in a completely new direction and the ending had me tearing up. A great read and I would suggest this to anyone lookinh for a good free read.
O livro teve alguns problemas no começo mais é inegável o quanto o escritor melhorou com o tempo os últimos capítulos em particular foram maravilhosamente construído levando a uma crescente fenomenal você realmente sente a emoção de "eu vim vi e venci e agora essa história acabou, meu tempo acabou e parto com o coração leve".
Its pretty good Subjectmatter might be controversial. But I think of it more as a fun thought experiment. There’s lots of weird sentences ect, but generally it’s manageable with a bit of mental gymnastics… Chapters are long wich is nice… Overall fun read…
Eu adorei, terminei a história toda e final não me decepcionou, a uma coisa que eu diria que não me agradou muito foi a falta e a inexistência de um romance, mas eu entendo, essa história não é sobre amor e família e sim, sobre a ascensão de um império e conquista.
Превосходно 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁
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thanks very much. You are a godsend my man . I was searching for good novel like holy roman empire. Don't listen to haters other, there are those like me with you. please keep posting TL 🙏.
Great novel more chapters please ??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Good as hell. [img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it]
This is a great story to read, I already finished reading all of its chapters.
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Yo a great read. I never really liked History but this provided some really nice details and, For the people taking this personally, just relax it's a fanfic. The best you could do is not read it and if you do read it atleast don't make baseless arguments and advice something constructive. Anyways would recommend it if you've got nothing to read right now.
goood story do anyone know ther raw name or link pls ? :) tnx ................................................................................................................................................
It’s actually a really good story I hope you keep posting and those who say it is bad just read it at least to chp30 and then you can complain but it’s a really good story like I said, and I really really really hope you keep posting the only thing I can really say that’s the downside of this story is that there’s no type of romance whatsoever but if you’re not into reading, romance stories, and you just want a kingdom building story. This is a really good story for you.
thanks for the story again brother, I had last 30 chapters remaining when your novel suddenly got deleted, and I was in dilemma, not knowing what to do seriously thank you for this masterpiece of a novel. This is THE one of the best war/historic fan fiction I ever read in my 3 years since I started reading fan fiction
É. Acho que eu estou sem palavras para descrever isso. Mas... Isso é Legalmente questionável. Moralmente repugnante. Pessoalmente, eu gosto.
Yes!!! Waiting for this for a long time since last read this. Heard you pull this out cause of someone talk bad about public this. I want to say unless it's the Author himself ( I think, depends) don't care about how others thinks bad at you. Just know that there are some who will support you ( I want to help more than just moral support but I'm poor :'(( ). Really thank you for sending this story up for everyone to read.
Amazing history, always i like history of the path, Second War, but this history are im another level. Just read this. jejjsjsjsjsjznnzjzjzjzjzjzjzjkzjzjz(Limit of characters)
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Pretty good story thus far. Character Design is just IRL people so not really all that creative but that is to be expected from this type of fanfic. Writing Quality is good, no mistakes from what I have read. Story Development is also good. World Background is mentioned a lot, with many characters appearing and many changes to the actual WW2. Overall, pretty good, but it would be better if this gal took charge instead.
Going into this I was bit wary but this book suprised me. It takes the 3rd Reich in a completely new direction and the ending had me tearing up. A great read and I would suggest this to anyone lookinh for a good free read.
O livro teve alguns problemas no começo mais é inegável o quanto o escritor melhorou com o tempo os últimos capítulos em particular foram maravilhosamente construído levando a uma crescente fenomenal você realmente sente a emoção de "eu vim vi e venci e agora essa história acabou, meu tempo acabou e parto com o coração leve".
Its pretty good Subjectmatter might be controversial. But I think of it more as a fun thought experiment. There’s lots of weird sentences ect, but generally it’s manageable with a bit of mental gymnastics… Chapters are long wich is nice… Overall fun read…
Eu adorei, terminei a história toda e final não me decepcionou, a uma coisa que eu diria que não me agradou muito foi a falta e a inexistência de um romance, mas eu entendo, essa história não é sobre amor e família e sim, sobre a ascensão de um império e conquista.
Превосходно 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁
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thanks very much. You are a godsend my man . I was searching for good novel like holy roman empire. Don't listen to haters other, there are those like me with you. please keep posting TL 🙏.
Great novel more chapters please ??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Good as hell. [img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it]
This is a great story to read, I already finished reading all of its chapters.
For idea . . . .. . . .. . .. . .. . .. . .. . .. . .. . .. . .. . .. . .. . .. . .. . .. . .. . .. . .. . .. . .. . .. . .. . .. . .. . .. . .. . .. . .. . .. . .. . .. . .. . .. ..
Yo a great read. I never really liked History but this provided some really nice details and, For the people taking this personally, just relax it's a fanfic. The best you could do is not read it and if you do read it atleast don't make baseless arguments and advice something constructive. Anyways would recommend it if you've got nothing to read right now.
goood story do anyone know ther raw name or link pls ? :) tnx ................................................................................................................................................
It’s actually a really good story I hope you keep posting and those who say it is bad just read it at least to chp30 and then you can complain but it’s a really good story like I said, and I really really really hope you keep posting the only thing I can really say that’s the downside of this story is that there’s no type of romance whatsoever but if you’re not into reading, romance stories, and you just want a kingdom building story. This is a really good story for you.
thanks for the story again brother, I had last 30 chapters remaining when your novel suddenly got deleted, and I was in dilemma, not knowing what to do seriously thank you for this masterpiece of a novel. This is THE one of the best war/historic fan fiction I ever read in my 3 years since I started reading fan fiction
É. Acho que eu estou sem palavras para descrever isso. Mas... Isso é Legalmente questionável. Moralmente repugnante. Pessoalmente, eu gosto.
Yes!!! Waiting for this for a long time since last read this. Heard you pull this out cause of someone talk bad about public this. I want to say unless it's the Author himself ( I think, depends) don't care about how others thinks bad at you. Just know that there are some who will support you ( I want to help more than just moral support but I'm poor :'(( ). Really thank you for sending this story up for everyone to read.
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