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Bab 14: Obstacle Course

Kern led the trainees to a clearing where an intimidating obstacle course had been set up within the dense forest. His voice boomed across the clearing, drawing everyone's attention.

"This is no ordinary path through the forest," he said. "Each mark you see will guide you, but it's up to you to figure out how to overcome the challenges. The last ones to finish will face... additional training." 

Kern's eyes gleamed intensely. A faint silver glow emanated from his skin, growing brighter by the moment.

Kern leapt into action, his body a blur of motion propelled by otherworldly force. He bounded over fallen logs with impossible grace, feet barely touching the ground before launching forward again. Approaching a dense thicket, his aura flared brightly. He phased through the branches, emerging unscathed on the other side.

They were all watching, transfixed by Kern's display. Without warning, Dray bolted forward, breaking the spell. The others, caught off guard, scrambled to follow him into the course.

Arin's heart raced. Her eyes darted around, searching for the first obstacle. She skidded to a halt before a massive, ancient oak. Its trunk, wider than three men, bore a series of notches cut into the bark, forming a winding path up its immense height.

The bark looked gnarled and treacherous, offering few obvious handholds beyond the marked route. Arin noticed Dray already halfway up, his movements quick but strained. His face was contorted with effort, sweat beading on his brow as he pulled himself up.

Arin hit the tree at a run, scrabbling for purchase on the rough bark. The tree loomed before her, a vertical challenge that seemed to stretch endlessly upward. Her heart pounded as she assessed the obstacle, her eyes darting from handhold to handhold.

"Breathe," she reminded herself. Her fingers searched for each new hold, testing its stability before trusting her weight to it. One moment of doubt, and she could fall.

When she reached the top, she paused to catch her breath. Dray was already descending on the other side, his movements careful and deliberate. Arin followed, her arms trembling from the effort. She landed heavily on the other side, the impact jarring her bones.

Pushing on, she came to a deep ravine filled with swirling, muddy water. Stones protruding from the water's surface bore faint markings, barely visible above the churning current.

The ravine stretched before her, a dark, murky expanse that seemed to go on forever. The water was opaque, concealing whatever lay beneath its surface. She took a deep breath, steeling herself for the plunge.

The cold hit her like a physical blow, driving the air from her lungs. Underwater, Arin's senses were assaulted. The murky water stung her eyes, reducing visibility to almost nothing. She could taste earth and decay, the water filling her nose and mouth. 

Every movement was a struggle against the water's resistance. She forced her arms and legs into a steady stroke, pushing through the water. 

Instinct took over. Her legs kicked out, her arms pulling through the water with desperate strength. Her head broke the surface, and she gasped in a breath, blinking water from her eyes. She could see the edge of the ravine ahead.

She heaved herself out of the water, her clothes heavy and dripping. The next challenge loomed ahead - a series of fallen logs spanning a gap between two towering trees at dizzying heights.

Notches cut into the logs seemed to indicate footholds, but the surfaces looked slick with moss and treacherously uneven. 

Arin gritted her teeth and began her own ascent. She grasped the first log, feeling it rough and sturdy beneath her hands.

"This is insane!" someone shouted from behind. "How are we supposed to do this?"

"Shut up and climb!" came another voice, strained with effort.

Balancing on the first log, Arin took a moment to survey the course ahead. The logs crisscrossed in a dizzying pattern, some stable and others swaying in the breeze. The ground seemed impossibly far below, and she forced herself to look ahead instead of down.

She began to move, placing one foot carefully in front of the other. The log swayed beneath her weight, and she spread her arms wide for balance. A bead of sweat trickled down her forehead, and she blinked it away, not daring to remove a hand from the log to wipe her face.

Halfway across, Arin encountered a section that seemed particularly unstable. The log suddenly gave way more than it should have. Her heart leapt into her throat as she teetered precariously, arms windmilling as she fought to regain her balance.

For a moment, she was sure she would fall. But instincts kicked in, and she managed to shift her weight, regaining her stability.

"Arin!" Lena cried out.

"I'm okay!" Arin called back, her heart pounding. "Just be extra careful on this section!"

Breathing heavily, Arin paused for a moment to calm her racing heart. She could hear the gasps and grunts of her fellow trainees behind her, some struggling with the height, others battling fatigue. She pressed on, more cautious now, testing each log before fully committing her weight.

The rest of the course passed in a blur of pain and exhaustion, each obstacle more grueling than the last. Arin's muscles screamed in protest as she approached a vast network of exposed tree roots, their gnarled forms creating a treacherous maze before her.

The surfaces glistened with morning dew, promising a slippery challenge. Faint arrows had been carved into the bark of nearby trees, offering cryptic guidance through the labyrinth. She took a deep breath and stepped onto the first root, feeling it shift slightly under her weight.

Her progress was painfully slow. The roots varied in thickness and stability, some barely wider than her foot, others as broad as a fallen log. 

"Left... then right... then straight ahead," Lena muttered behind her, deciphering the arrow markings. "Who came up with this twisted path?"

They neared the end of the root maze, and a new challenge loomed ahead - a dense thicket of thorny undergrowth that seemed to stretch endlessly in both directions. Bits of cloth, now tattered and faded, were tied to branches at irregular intervals, marking a winding path through the brambles.

"You've got to be kidding me," Kai groaned, eyeing the thorns warily.

Arin steeled herself and dropped to her hands and knees. She began to crawl, feeling the sharp thorns catching on her clothes and scraping against her skin.

The thorns seemed to grow denser as they progressed, the path narrowing until Arin could barely squeeze through. She could feel warm trickles of blood where particularly vicious thorns had broken her skin. The air was thick with the scent of crushed vegetation and sweat.

Finally, they emerged from the thicket. But there was no time to rest. Ahead of them rose a sheer cliff face, its surface rough and forbidding. Arin's heart sank as she surveyed the cliff. Vines clung sparsely to its face, offering tempting but potentially treacherous handholds.

Marks had been chipped into the rock at irregular intervals, suggesting a possible route up. She approached the cliff, her fingers searching for purchase on the rough stone. The first few meters were the hardest, her tired muscles protesting every movement.

The chipped marks in the rock face were frustratingly far apart, forcing her to stretch to her limits to reach each one. Halfway up, Arin's foot slipped as she reached for a particularly distant handhold, leaving her dangling by one hand.

Arin swung her body, her free hand scrabbling at the rock face. Her fingers found a tiny crevice, and she clung on, her breath coming in ragged gasps. Slowly, painfully, she resumed her climb focusing solely on the next handhold, the next step upward.

She neared the top and caught sight of Dray. He was already over the edge, but his usual grace was gone. He lay on his back, chest heaving, clearly as exhausted as she felt. With a final, monumental effort, Arin hauled herself over the edge of the cliff. She collapsed onto solid ground.

The finish line finally came into view, a welcome sight for their exhausted bodies. They stumbled across the finish line gasping for air. Arin's knees buckled, and she would have fallen if not for Kai's steadying hand on her arm.

Arin looked around, seeing the other trainees in various states of collapse. Dray was on his hands and knees, retching into the grass. His usually smug face was pale and drawn, his hair plastered to his forehead with sweat. Even he hadn't been able to breeze through this challenge.

The sun dipped towards the horizon, painting the sky in hues of orange and pink. Kern's eyes swept over the group. Then, his gaze settled on the last three to finish - a scrawny boy named Tarn, a girl with a slight limp called Mira, and to Arin's dismay, Lena.

"You three," Kern said, his voice dangerously calm. "Step forward."

They obeyed, their exhaustion evident in every movement. Kern loomed over them, his face a mask of disapproval. The fading sunlight cast long shadows across his features, making him look even more intimidating.

"I thought I made it clear there'd be consequences for falling behind," he said coldly. "You three think you're special, that you can slack off while the others push themselves to the limit?"

Tarn opened his mouth to protest, but Kern silenced him with a glare. "Save it," he growled. "Can't keep up? Then you don't belong. End of story."

Addressing the entire group, he continued, "Let this sink in. In a fight, weakness gets you killed. There's no room for slackers pulling the team down. You're only as strong as your weakest link."

Turning back to Tarn, Mira, and Lena, "And you three are going to make up for your sorry performance. You think you're tired now? You haven't seen anything yet."

Kern dismissed the other trainees back to the village. He turned his full attention to the three stragglers, leading them to where an ancient, towering oak tree stood. Its gnarled branches stretched towards the darkening sky, the uppermost lost in shadow.

"This," Kern said, patting the rough bark of the tree, "is going to be your home for the night. You're going to climb it. All the way to the top. And you're not coming down until sunrise."

Arin's heart sank as she watched the color drain from her friends' faces. The tree was easily the tallest in the area, its first branches too high to reach without a running jump.

"But-" Mira began, her voice trembling.

"No buts," Kern cut her off. "You start now. And if I catch any of you on the ground before first light, you'll be doing this every night for a month. Understood?"

The three nodded, their faces etched with resignation. They approached the base of the tree, defeat already settling into their postures. Arin exchanged a worried glance with Kai, both concerned for Lena.

As night fell, Arin tossed and turned in her bed, unable to shake the image of Lena struggling. She sat up, finding Kai's eyes gleaming in the darkness. Without a word, they both knew what they had to do.

Silently, they slipped away from the village, determined to support their friend through this brutal ordeal. At the base of the tree, they found Lena, Tarn, and Mira struggling, their exhausted bodies barely able to make progress up the rough trunk.

Without a word, Arin and Kai moved to help. They formed a human ladder, allowing Tarn to scramble onto the lowest branch. From there, he helped pull Mira up, wincing as her injured leg scraped against the bark. Lena was the last to ascend, her arms shaking with the effort.

The climb was agonizingly slow. The rough bark bit into their hands and feet, leaving scrapes and splinters. They ascended higher, and the branches grew thinner, creaking ominously under their weight.

Hours passed, marked only by the slow arc of the moon across the sky.

Halfway up the tree, disaster struck. Mira, her injured leg finally giving out, lost her grip. She plummeted downward with a terrified shriek, only to be caught at the last second by Kai. 

But somehow, they held on. With trembling arms and ragged breaths, they pulled Mira back to safety. The group huddled together on a wide branch, shaking not just from the cold, but from the near miss.

"We can't go on like this," Lena whispered, her voice hoarse. "We're going to get ourselves killed."

Arin looked at her friends' battered and exhausted faces, then up at the still-distant top of the tree. She made a decision. "We rest here," she said firmly. "We've come far enough. If Kern has a problem with it, he can take it up with me."

No one argued. They found relatively comfortable positions among the branches, using each other for support and warmth. The night wore on, and they took turns keeping watch, making sure no one slipped in their sleep.

Inevitably, the eastern sky began to lighten. The first rays of dawn broke over the horizon, and Arin felt a wave of relief wash over her.

The descent was almost as challenging as the climb but finally, mercifully, their feet touched solid ground. Kern was waiting for them, his face unreadable.

"Next time," he growled, "I expect you to reach the top. Now get out of my sight."


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