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Overall pretty good, and the premise is one that has promise. looking forward to seeing how it progresses.
Mmm I got to say that the 10 chapters was good but I hope the mc has a bit of control over his body then what I saw yes I do love the story but I hope mc doesn’t act like he did when he meet the villain again. But has control but still likes her you get what I mean and why did his personality change from his first appearance it’s kind of weird that he was clam in the first chapter when Death was near but he was a cowered when he reincarnated to the game world which just made this novel from 10/10 to 8/10 and since he is a male character he shouldn’t have acted like that which makes me not want to read it but I get that it the other girl body so I was okay with it but I hope in the future he has control and is more daring to do stuff with the fl instead of her taking control over her will the novel was good that the only reason I give it a 10/10 for only 10 chapters because I don’t have much information about the novel
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This is by far the best novel with both the mc and the fl as yanderes i have read. I will also say the author does a really good job with balancing the romance and the other aspects of the story.
Overall pretty good, and the premise is one that has promise. looking forward to seeing how it progresses.
Mmm I got to say that the 10 chapters was good but I hope the mc has a bit of control over his body then what I saw yes I do love the story but I hope mc doesn’t act like he did when he meet the villain again. But has control but still likes her you get what I mean and why did his personality change from his first appearance it’s kind of weird that he was clam in the first chapter when Death was near but he was a cowered when he reincarnated to the game world which just made this novel from 10/10 to 8/10 and since he is a male character he shouldn’t have acted like that which makes me not want to read it but I get that it the other girl body so I was okay with it but I hope in the future he has control and is more daring to do stuff with the fl instead of her taking control over her will the novel was good that the only reason I give it a 10/10 for only 10 chapters because I don’t have much information about the novel
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This is by far the best novel with both the mc and the fl as yanderes i have read. I will also say the author does a really good job with balancing the romance and the other aspects of the story.