In Danmachi as a Witcher

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Orion_Art

Hello there! It seems tradition for authors to leave the first review and who am I to deny it. I'm new at writing. This is my first time writing anything seriously so I'm not sure how good or bad it will be. Though I hope you will like it. If you have any critiques and advice I'll be grateful to receive it. If you have any questions about the story, feel free to ask. As long as it's not spoilers I'll try to answer.

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Cole_Williamson

very very promising. keep up the good work author

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DaoistI7EunG

here you go another review to give people more reasons to read this novel, good luck, but i have only one request just don't go into hole named Harem because it's troublesome

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Willdgrad

Okay, in this story, despite what the synopsis says, the story has a protagonist, who is the older brother Cassian, and the story spends most of its time from his point of view. Now, in terms of the story, it is a plot that has been developing at a stable and realistic pace. Some changes to the Danmachi plot, for me, will be very well received, especially the fact that Bell's story takes place in just 1 year. In this story, the author decided to stretch this time to several years, which in my opinion is very smart, especially for the development of the story. I recommend -> 8.8/10 This analysis was made in chapter 28.

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Hawk_4871

I shall give this 5 stars but I must say I am disappointed in the author for not having already written 3548 chapters I am very disappointed and let down

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Holy_Gull_1843

New author as i expected... you broke the rule number 8, search for the "The Sacred Rules for creating fanfiction" here on webnovel, i will not give you one star because its a common occurrence that happens to new authors, i will give you 3 to encourage you. God luck in the path.

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GaryDaSnaiI

I’m liking this concept of two main characters don’t see this often but still I’m liking the way this fic is progressing so far and I’m looking forward to seeing how this story develops Keep cooking author

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NovelDreamer

You said this is your first time writing novel and I must say you are better writer than most people there, keep up good work and I can't wait for more chapters and how well they will grow up

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ZeroSkillzOnline

As of Chapter 7: Overall Rating of 4.2 Writing Quality: It's pretty good. Very minor mistakes in punctuation but good nonetheless. There was a part where I became unimmersed in the story but if you ignore that it was good overall. Story Development: It's very good. Not much to say other than there is a small amount of chapters so far. Character Design: I like the characters so far, others might dislike the little brother, but I think it's good. Updating Stability: Need more chapters, 'Nuff Said. World Background: It's done decently enough. Things are explained nicely, but I don't think people who don't know anything about Danmachi should read this, they may end up confused. Overall a 4.2, looking for to more and also to seeing the authors improvement as we go along. P.S. If MC visits brothels, I'm out, no questions asked.

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ANY1977

Man, this is the best. When you get tired of rushed stories that get dropped, when you get tired of extreme characters the have just one adjective, when you get bored of the robotic/idiotic/unnatural conversations between caracters .... when you looked through tens ,hundreds fanfictions and start to think of uninstalling webnovel.... there comes a secret diamond, a well made story, with intriguing plot, with world development, character development, realistic conversations and responses. Author, my good sir, you have my thanks for posting this story !

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colmilloblanco

Overall, good book to read. [img=recommend]

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captainfatbelly

terrible book hanging ne from the ankles waiting for a new chapter really good please continue ❤

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Altarediggory

10/10 would recommend. I love the fact that there's two main characters. Though I wish we could see more of the younger brothers perspective of things.

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VTLAS

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Cevahir_Gezer

I think it's really beautiful. I enjoy reading, your story feels realistic while maintaining the necessary fantasy. Nothing happens that you say no to while reading, it can't be like this. And the character backgrounds, the development of the characters are amazing. I hope you don't leave this story unfinished. You don't need to update quickly, just don't leave it half-done. There is a mistake made in the anime; 5, 6 and 7 lvl characters fight at normal human speed, they do not harm the environment while fighting, and there are neither air nor sound explosions as a result of their battles. I would be very happy if you could convey that feeling of empowerment while getting stronger. For example, when you reach 3 lvl, you realize that ordinary knives can no longer pierce your skin, what It would be nice to be able to explain that he is no longer a "human, mortal" with things such as not being harmed even if he falls from such a height (we fall at a speed of 250 km per hour at most) and being able to drink poison that would normally kill an elephant without being affected. For example, when he gets angry about something, he accidentally destroys the environment by only spreading his magic power or something. or when he punches something, it destroys it as if a tank bullet passed through it or hit a saitam.

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Vaneford

I highly recommend this FF the author clearly does research and i wish you luck author TYFC[img=Loving it]

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joe_caa

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Arian_Roque_3877

me gusta la encuentro bastante original y muy entretenida aunque el verso de danmachi no está entre mis favoritos me gustó bastante 💯de💯

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Elemise

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True_Metamorphosis

The story is decent, and I also noticed that the power levels here are several times stronger than in the original novel. Anyway, you're doing a good job with the writing.