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hey bro I want you to add His daughter's into the harem of course. we can't let anybody else have his daughters. we also more wife stealing, the husband, boyfriend, son being cucked or being cheated on without them ever knowing.
5 stars? I meant to give it one star, *ahem* anyway, I shall be claiming this book in the name of the Buddha for studying its deprivation, yes just studying *ahem*.
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Honestly, I still didn't read it as I will marinate it for a while, but being as the author is a man of culture, even if I didn't like the story, as another man of culture I must support
Not aure why there's a cover for a short hentai story from Punopupu here. White haired, blue coat and blue eyes busty chick. If that's the one it's definitely not AI art. I did notice once I added it to my reading list a new image popped up which is great but it's so strange to see That image. It's kind of Like seeing Mori Calliope on a random System novel. Strange. I'll leave a actual review once I read a decent amount.
Writing: Readable, enjoyable but nothing more. (3/5 ) Story Development: smut story nothing profound here. But antagonist could have been written better... A cold, cunning ruthless, master of demonic art is introduced but the next chapters his mother wants to sleep with Mc. Feels like failed comedy. Plus, everyone in sect is cuck-fetish who loves to see their wives with Mc. Character design: Chinese cultivation novel, big dual mountains, wide hip, long legs, jade skin free from all impurities, lotus feet, moon like eyebrows, ocean like eyes, cherry lips, and same. Update stability: 5/5 ( best ) World Background: 3/5 ( for a smut, this book has good world background that is comparable to highly great novels but has some issues because it's more Smut focused rather than world building. Overall: 3/5
Interesting story, good development and good cover! I really wanted to read this when the chapters has already 100+ Bro i hope this author didnt stop his any project lol 😂
Hello, Juniors... A perfect book for cultural enlightenment! This primordial saint lord hopes juniors will donate power stones otherwise, I won't drop character images...
hey bro I want you to add His daughter's into the harem of course. we can't let anybody else have his daughters. we also more wife stealing, the husband, boyfriend, son being cucked or being cheated on without them ever knowing.
5 stars? I meant to give it one star, *ahem* anyway, I shall be claiming this book in the name of the Buddha for studying its deprivation, yes just studying *ahem*.
Interesting story, good development&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&
Honestly, I still didn't read it as I will marinate it for a while, but being as the author is a man of culture, even if I didn't like the story, as another man of culture I must support
Not aure why there's a cover for a short hentai story from Punopupu here. White haired, blue coat and blue eyes busty chick. If that's the one it's definitely not AI art. I did notice once I added it to my reading list a new image popped up which is great but it's so strange to see That image. It's kind of Like seeing Mori Calliope on a random System novel. Strange. I'll leave a actual review once I read a decent amount.
Writing: Readable, enjoyable but nothing more. (3/5 ) Story Development: smut story nothing profound here. But antagonist could have been written better... A cold, cunning ruthless, master of demonic art is introduced but the next chapters his mother wants to sleep with Mc. Feels like failed comedy. Plus, everyone in sect is cuck-fetish who loves to see their wives with Mc. Character design: Chinese cultivation novel, big dual mountains, wide hip, long legs, jade skin free from all impurities, lotus feet, moon like eyebrows, ocean like eyes, cherry lips, and same. Update stability: 5/5 ( best ) World Background: 3/5 ( for a smut, this book has good world background that is comparable to highly great novels but has some issues because it's more Smut focused rather than world building. Overall: 3/5
Interesting story, good development and good cover! I really wanted to read this when the chapters has already 100+ Bro i hope this author didnt stop his any project lol 😂
Hello, Juniors... A perfect book for cultural enlightenment! This primordial saint lord hopes juniors will donate power stones otherwise, I won't drop character images...