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I love the story,the character design is nice, story development is good and background is nice.The only bad thing is the grammatical mistakes but the good parts totally makes up for it.
I like immortal stories but this one is different, it makes me feel different like it is so good,the main character is kind and nice.The author writes very good that I feel that the story is a real life story. The story also has grammatical mistakes,the grammatical mistakes is the only bad thing.
I love this story,the main character is nice, I also like the way the author brings new things, although the story has grammatical mistakes,it is Super nice.
It seems nice,I also like fantasy and immortal stories.It is just grammatical errors that is the problem.I truely LOVE it.
I really LOVE IT! ❤️ It's interesting, and I'm a huge fan of fantasy stuff. There are only a few grammar mistakes, and over use of pronouns. The grammar is the only bad thing. Otherwise, AWESOME! KEEP WRITING! YOU'RE AWESOME AT IT! 😊🤩🥰😍🤗🤗😏😘😘😘😀😃😄😃😁😁😄🤣🤣😂😆😁😃🥰😍😍🥰🥰😇😊😉🫠🙂🙂🙂😚😚😗😗🤩
Hello readers, author here, I would selfishly give my story five star rating, I hope you enjoy the story. 😀😃😁😆😅😂🤣🥳📕📗📕📕📗📘📙📚.
I love this story, it has things I really love like the immortal power,qi and so on.The problem is the grammatical mistakes but the good things overcome the bad things.
I love the story,the character design is nice, story development is good and background is nice.The only bad thing is the grammatical mistakes but the good parts totally makes up for it.
I like immortal stories but this one is different, it makes me feel different like it is so good,the main character is kind and nice.The author writes very good that I feel that the story is a real life story. The story also has grammatical mistakes,the grammatical mistakes is the only bad thing.
I love this story,the main character is nice, I also like the way the author brings new things, although the story has grammatical mistakes,it is Super nice.
It seems nice,I also like fantasy and immortal stories.It is just grammatical errors that is the problem.I truely LOVE it.
I really LOVE IT! ❤️ It's interesting, and I'm a huge fan of fantasy stuff. There are only a few grammar mistakes, and over use of pronouns. The grammar is the only bad thing. Otherwise, AWESOME! KEEP WRITING! YOU'RE AWESOME AT IT! 😊🤩🥰😍🤗🤗😏😘😘😘😀😃😄😃😁😁😄🤣🤣😂😆😁😃🥰😍😍🥰🥰😇😊😉🫠🙂🙂🙂😚😚😗😗🤩
Hello readers, author here, I would selfishly give my story five star rating, I hope you enjoy the story. 😀😃😁😆😅😂🤣🥳📕📗📕📕📗📘📙📚.
I love this story, it has things I really love like the immortal power,qi and so on.The problem is the grammatical mistakes but the good things overcome the bad things.