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its good. i'm currently reading this on qq but ill add it to my library here
10/ 10 REAL GOOD JUST READ IT. FIRST READ IT IN QQ, Reading this is worth your time, JUST READ IT. Characters have depth. World Background is Good.
It's very good, but the story sometimes has a problem with the narrative, leaving the progression a little confusing. (maybe because English is not my first language and use automatic translation to speed up the reading)
One of the best fic on qq saw someone posted it before but like always on WN it’s stolen god give thanks for the few who actually try to write a fix but keep up the good work anyways but as I always say give my body some magic
putting this up in my top 5 Dxd of all time and this story is extremely below written and don't stop please
I am very happy to be able to read this masterpiece because I love how you set up the story arc way back before Canon story arc. And how you are making the MC OP throughout the story, but at the same time, not OP because, like the saying goes, " There's always bigger fish out there." it nice how you make MC a massive troll even when he knows he shouldn't do it, but do it anyway because he can.
Absolute peak indeed. For dxd fics, this one is really a fresh air. No rias route plot, no forced chess game with sona, no killing issei, no stealing boosted gear. But It seems that the author has no experience in writing action scenes, of course it just a minor flaw. It's still worth to read
Its a great story.... And you should continue. And if you stop i will curse you to have misfortune like hitting your toe every time you pass by the furniture.. and to have bad taste in your mouth every time you try to eat something delicious....
Synopsis: A man who was reincarnated into DxD and lived peacefully for 20 years obtained the Celestial System when he took a devil pamphlet. S*** just got real after that. No meta knowledge, Touki build MC, the funny Blender, and best girl Ereskigal Review: Don't know how to write a review so I'll just list what I liked and dislike Like: 1. Touki. It's rare to find a fic about Touki, especially one with a decent story. I cast fist all the way. 2. The Grind. MC never skips practice. Always look for ways to improve his training and we can see his progress. Have good mentality too. Rarely complains, doesn't overthink like DxD next door MC. Just grind and enjoy the gains. He is a bit dumb tho. Lol 3. Away from Kuoh MC is in America, far from Canon. So no Rias desperate recruitment, no Sona forced chess match, no fake Dio, no fallen trio who somehow entered the harem, and of course there is no need to think about plans to rob Issei of boosted gear. It's nice to get away from these overused fic plots once in a while. 4. OP Protein Blender 5. Ereskigal Dislike: Cursed chapter 16. Spoiler, he made male AI. A male AI in harem story. What could be wrong? Read chapter 16. The flags are everywhere. Ended up being a false alarm, but still not a pleasant experience.
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I follow the story on QQ and the story is very good, worth reading. Very good Very good Very good Very good Very good Very good Very good
Give me more please. I really dont like qq because its complicated af for me (mobile phone) so i appreciate it that you post it here. Do you have any other story's that you could post here perhaps?
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This one is the OG story with OG author, if you read the other WN with same title, don't. Just read this one. Support the OG author and creativity.
I love it so far. It's funny, has a good balance between gaining power and other aspects of the story, good writing quality, excellently paced. I can't wait for more. Author could you put the link for your qq in the synopsis?
What can I say? Good fanfic overall. If you enjoy DxD. You should for sure give it try. The story is innovative and engaging in its own way.
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I'm glad u are posting it here, I didn't know how to use QQ [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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overall a very good story hope the MC get something interesting like wings or a species
its good. i'm currently reading this on qq but ill add it to my library here
10/ 10 REAL GOOD JUST READ IT. FIRST READ IT IN QQ, Reading this is worth your time, JUST READ IT. Characters have depth. World Background is Good.
It's very good, but the story sometimes has a problem with the narrative, leaving the progression a little confusing. (maybe because English is not my first language and use automatic translation to speed up the reading)
One of the best fic on qq saw someone posted it before but like always on WN it’s stolen god give thanks for the few who actually try to write a fix but keep up the good work anyways but as I always say give my body some magic
putting this up in my top 5 Dxd of all time and this story is extremely below written and don't stop please
I am very happy to be able to read this masterpiece because I love how you set up the story arc way back before Canon story arc. And how you are making the MC OP throughout the story, but at the same time, not OP because, like the saying goes, " There's always bigger fish out there." it nice how you make MC a massive troll even when he knows he shouldn't do it, but do it anyway because he can.
Absolute peak indeed. For dxd fics, this one is really a fresh air. No rias route plot, no forced chess game with sona, no killing issei, no stealing boosted gear. But It seems that the author has no experience in writing action scenes, of course it just a minor flaw. It's still worth to read
Its a great story.... And you should continue. And if you stop i will curse you to have misfortune like hitting your toe every time you pass by the furniture.. and to have bad taste in your mouth every time you try to eat something delicious....
Synopsis: A man who was reincarnated into DxD and lived peacefully for 20 years obtained the Celestial System when he took a devil pamphlet. S*** just got real after that. No meta knowledge, Touki build MC, the funny Blender, and best girl Ereskigal Review: Don't know how to write a review so I'll just list what I liked and dislike Like: 1. Touki. It's rare to find a fic about Touki, especially one with a decent story. I cast fist all the way. 2. The Grind. MC never skips practice. Always look for ways to improve his training and we can see his progress. Have good mentality too. Rarely complains, doesn't overthink like DxD next door MC. Just grind and enjoy the gains. He is a bit dumb tho. Lol 3. Away from Kuoh MC is in America, far from Canon. So no Rias desperate recruitment, no Sona forced chess match, no fake Dio, no fallen trio who somehow entered the harem, and of course there is no need to think about plans to rob Issei of boosted gear. It's nice to get away from these overused fic plots once in a while. 4. OP Protein Blender 5. Ereskigal Dislike: Cursed chapter 16. Spoiler, he made male AI. A male AI in harem story. What could be wrong? Read chapter 16. The flags are everywhere. Ended up being a false alarm, but still not a pleasant experience.
Membuka SPOILER I follow the story on QQ and the story is very good, worth reading. Very good Very good Very good Very good Very good Very good Very good
Give me more please. I really dont like qq because its complicated af for me (mobile phone) so i appreciate it that you post it here. Do you have any other story's that you could post here perhaps?
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This one is the OG story with OG author, if you read the other WN with same title, don't. Just read this one. Support the OG author and creativity.
I love it so far. It's funny, has a good balance between gaining power and other aspects of the story, good writing quality, excellently paced. I can't wait for more. Author could you put the link for your qq in the synopsis?
What can I say? Good fanfic overall. If you enjoy DxD. You should for sure give it try. The story is innovative and engaging in its own way.
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I'm glad u are posting it here, I didn't know how to use QQ [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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overall a very good story hope the MC get something interesting like wings or a species