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I like the story a lot but you can't overlook how easily enemies seem to breach the fantastic 4s defenses and steal important data. Plot convenience. I rather you take a few more days to be more creative than rush it. when do people stop breaching his defenses? when does that end? is it going to happen again in the future? if not for the convenient plot device used id have give this 5 stars. His AI is awesome until it conveniently shouldn't be to push more story.
I will be honest. I liked the story but hated the execution. There is just so much clutter we have to swim through to just understand a simple sentence. Writing is extremely cringe. Stop using AI, it ruins your story completely. Best of luck with the story but I am out.
the premise of the story is kinda good, but the way it's written/translated is absolutely dogwater, it is very very AI intensive in the last few chapters I've read, if there's anyone who can't even understand that it's heavily AI written you're probably dum asf or you've never seen how AIs give answers, anyway the story is ok, story development is meh no particular goal but it's still fine, character design is just Reed with actual EQ but i feel like he isn't fully taking all his advantages as a reincarnator, update stability is dogsht, if you can ignore all the ai stuff you'll probably like it but this isn't my cup of tea
honestly started off pretty good but devolved into Reed genius, Reed have problem, Reed fix problem, Reed be happy it's so stupid. Also some of the lines in this story are very ai generated jncluding many unnecessary details and dialogue that only an ai could be making because of how cringe and long it is. Overall started of good ended up bad still worth a try if you can read ai generated books without dropping it.
Yeah, no. I couldn't read past chapter 24 of this fic. Don't get me wrong, the premise is fine and the plot itself is okay, it's just that the way it's written deeply annoys me. It's pretty apparent from the get-go that the fic uses ChatGPT, and I wouldn't have any issues with that if it weren't for how its abundant use in the fic utterly ruins the feel of the whole story. The AI makes the fic feel very melodramatic, which really makes some parts hard to read, like with Richard and Susan's flirting. Aside from that, the characters seem less like their own person and more like robots wearing their features, and this is due to them not having any distinguishing details in their dialogue that makes them feel like they're the actual characters speaking. For example, what would differentiate a hillbilly character from gentleman character if they're both speaking in a refined manner? You would expect the hillbilly to instead be less sophisticated in his speech because that's in his character, no? The thing about this though, is that I completely understand why they had to use ChatGPT to write this fic. Writing genius characters is very hard when you aren't a genius yourself, after all. And no, that isn't a veiled insult, it's a real thing that most authors who've attempted to write the same type of character have experienced. Still though, despite the rating I gave here, I don't think it's all that bad. It beats reading those trashy intelligible edgy SI-OC fics any day.
So far this story is great, and it is interesting to see a new marvel character getting the SI treatment. I'm really looking forward to seeing how this develops. Keep up the good work!
Buena historia, la verdad es que me sorprendió, para las personas que quieran leerlo, tengan en mente que es muy bueno, no le hagan caso a las reseñan con poca valoración, de seguro son niños de 5 años
It was great at first when it started, but soon the author's heavy reliance on A.I. completely ruined this story...
The fanfic is good and unique, but the author needs to review their chapters. Most scenes show signs of ChatGPT. There's nothing wrong with using it for some ideas or correcting spelling errors, but the tool makes the story overly melodramatic with cliché words that are easy to spot.
You don't even understand that he is a reincarnated person.ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ
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Fantastic more please I am loving the new Reed Richards who isn't focused solely on lab work but spending time with sue i hope to see this last in the hundreds of chapters [img=update][img=update][img=update]
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The idea is intriguing, as no one seems to consider this hero and his abilities. Recently, everyone has been obsessing over Tony Starks and endless Spider-Men, but Reed Richards stands out in this context. Moreover, it appears that the source material is the comics, not the films, which is another advantage.
Synopsis has a misleading statement about Franklin being a mutant that stops me from even reading the first chapter but I will give it a go at it anyway .
It's been a great start so far. Tony Stark usually gets all the love, so it is nice to see the other super-genius, Reed, get some. I hope you keep posting.
The author is a good person. I would even say that he is an incredibly good person. You can ask your questions about the work and maybe about everything else. I will answer as much as possible.
I like the story a lot but you can't overlook how easily enemies seem to breach the fantastic 4s defenses and steal important data. Plot convenience. I rather you take a few more days to be more creative than rush it. when do people stop breaching his defenses? when does that end? is it going to happen again in the future? if not for the convenient plot device used id have give this 5 stars. His AI is awesome until it conveniently shouldn't be to push more story.
I will be honest. I liked the story but hated the execution. There is just so much clutter we have to swim through to just understand a simple sentence. Writing is extremely cringe. Stop using AI, it ruins your story completely. Best of luck with the story but I am out.
the premise of the story is kinda good, but the way it's written/translated is absolutely dogwater, it is very very AI intensive in the last few chapters I've read, if there's anyone who can't even understand that it's heavily AI written you're probably dum asf or you've never seen how AIs give answers, anyway the story is ok, story development is meh no particular goal but it's still fine, character design is just Reed with actual EQ but i feel like he isn't fully taking all his advantages as a reincarnator, update stability is dogsht, if you can ignore all the ai stuff you'll probably like it but this isn't my cup of tea
honestly started off pretty good but devolved into Reed genius, Reed have problem, Reed fix problem, Reed be happy it's so stupid. Also some of the lines in this story are very ai generated jncluding many unnecessary details and dialogue that only an ai could be making because of how cringe and long it is. Overall started of good ended up bad still worth a try if you can read ai generated books without dropping it.
Yeah, no. I couldn't read past chapter 24 of this fic. Don't get me wrong, the premise is fine and the plot itself is okay, it's just that the way it's written deeply annoys me. It's pretty apparent from the get-go that the fic uses ChatGPT, and I wouldn't have any issues with that if it weren't for how its abundant use in the fic utterly ruins the feel of the whole story. The AI makes the fic feel very melodramatic, which really makes some parts hard to read, like with Richard and Susan's flirting. Aside from that, the characters seem less like their own person and more like robots wearing their features, and this is due to them not having any distinguishing details in their dialogue that makes them feel like they're the actual characters speaking. For example, what would differentiate a hillbilly character from gentleman character if they're both speaking in a refined manner? You would expect the hillbilly to instead be less sophisticated in his speech because that's in his character, no? The thing about this though, is that I completely understand why they had to use ChatGPT to write this fic. Writing genius characters is very hard when you aren't a genius yourself, after all. And no, that isn't a veiled insult, it's a real thing that most authors who've attempted to write the same type of character have experienced. Still though, despite the rating I gave here, I don't think it's all that bad. It beats reading those trashy intelligible edgy SI-OC fics any day.
So far this story is great, and it is interesting to see a new marvel character getting the SI treatment. I'm really looking forward to seeing how this develops. Keep up the good work!
Buena historia, la verdad es que me sorprendió, para las personas que quieran leerlo, tengan en mente que es muy bueno, no le hagan caso a las reseñan con poca valoración, de seguro son niños de 5 años
It was great at first when it started, but soon the author's heavy reliance on A.I. completely ruined this story...
The fanfic is good and unique, but the author needs to review their chapters. Most scenes show signs of ChatGPT. There's nothing wrong with using it for some ideas or correcting spelling errors, but the tool makes the story overly melodramatic with cliché words that are easy to spot.
You don't even understand that he is a reincarnated person.ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ
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Fantastic more please I am loving the new Reed Richards who isn't focused solely on lab work but spending time with sue i hope to see this last in the hundreds of chapters [img=update][img=update][img=update]
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The idea is intriguing, as no one seems to consider this hero and his abilities. Recently, everyone has been obsessing over Tony Starks and endless Spider-Men, but Reed Richards stands out in this context. Moreover, it appears that the source material is the comics, not the films, which is another advantage.
Synopsis has a misleading statement about Franklin being a mutant that stops me from even reading the first chapter but I will give it a go at it anyway .
It's been a great start so far. Tony Stark usually gets all the love, so it is nice to see the other super-genius, Reed, get some. I hope you keep posting.
The author is a good person. I would even say that he is an incredibly good person. You can ask your questions about the work and maybe about everything else. I will answer as much as possible.