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Well this is a motivation boosting review ! I'll give a proper after reading more chaps but I'll say author and mc both are doing real 👍🏻 for holy moly sake !! so you can definitely give it a read! trust me 😉🙏
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Haven’t read this yet but i see you haven’t updated this novel in a month author. Have you dropped the novel??
The beginning was heart ripping, the love of a mother was show perfectly, it made me kind of emotional. I found myself immersed in the vivid characters and environments that played out like a perfect scenery in my mind, capturing both the inhuman aspect of Malaki's wolfish nature and the depths of his emotional journey. I have great respect for the authors attention to detail and would 100% recommend anyone who craves depth and realism in their fantasy adventures.
Wonderful! It's nicely paced, the writing flows well. I love how the first three chapters conveyed this sense of motherly love for Malaki from his mother. It was absolutely well written. So immersive that you can feel a bit of sympathy for a fictional character. Lovely!
A well-thought-out novel with potential. The way the authors plot the events is intriguing, making the narrative worth reading. If you are interested in elements like intelligent monsters, magic, and systems, I recommend giving it a chance. Well done, author!
wonderful work of art, the characters are well described so as the environment, playing a perfect scenery in the mind. I must say you did a good one author.
The long, drawn-out, and dark start effectively drives home the dystopian world, then the rebirth and change happen, and while this is a system novel, it doesn't drown you in stats right off the bat, but slowly eases you into it. The Interesting, well-written concept makes me wonder where it will go from here. Easy to recommend.
I really like this book. Very realistic beginning. I love the supportive mother figure. and i love the full inhuman aspect to the story. The fact that he is literally a wolf is awesome. Great book. Keep going author!
Wow! Compared to quite a number of books I've read, this one has an astonishing begining. The tension is thick, dark yet captivating. Good work author, thumbs up on the descriptions. Keep it up.
This is an interesting story. It's dark and does not fit to everyone's taste. I will not spoil the story but here is my take: The scenes are well described and the story is engaging to read. I can really sense and feel the character's reaction and emotions reading the story. It's really a dark start and I can tell the reader had invested in the story itself. I am giving this story an overall perfect 5.0 for its potential. I can see the writer did a good job. Keep writing, you have done well!
A great premise, not to boring but not too over the top, its taken well throughout the eleven chapters given and im sure the author is cooking with something. Though that said there is still room for improvement, like in every creative work out there, master your craft and dont give up dear author
Overall smooth reading experience. The premise itself is enticing and even with the few chapters so far it’s been a treat.
This I the Author, I'm writing this cause I've always loved inhuman MC, Please give your honest review, If you have any questions that need to be answered, you can ask them here, I'll answer as soon as I see it.
Well this is a motivation boosting review ! I'll give a proper after reading more chaps but I'll say author and mc both are doing real 👍🏻 for holy moly sake !! so you can definitely give it a read! trust me 😉🙏
Membuka SPOILER Haven’t read this yet but i see you haven’t updated this novel in a month author. Have you dropped the novel??
The beginning was heart ripping, the love of a mother was show perfectly, it made me kind of emotional. I found myself immersed in the vivid characters and environments that played out like a perfect scenery in my mind, capturing both the inhuman aspect of Malaki's wolfish nature and the depths of his emotional journey. I have great respect for the authors attention to detail and would 100% recommend anyone who craves depth and realism in their fantasy adventures.
Wonderful! It's nicely paced, the writing flows well. I love how the first three chapters conveyed this sense of motherly love for Malaki from his mother. It was absolutely well written. So immersive that you can feel a bit of sympathy for a fictional character. Lovely!
A well-thought-out novel with potential. The way the authors plot the events is intriguing, making the narrative worth reading. If you are interested in elements like intelligent monsters, magic, and systems, I recommend giving it a chance. Well done, author!
wonderful work of art, the characters are well described so as the environment, playing a perfect scenery in the mind. I must say you did a good one author.
The long, drawn-out, and dark start effectively drives home the dystopian world, then the rebirth and change happen, and while this is a system novel, it doesn't drown you in stats right off the bat, but slowly eases you into it. The Interesting, well-written concept makes me wonder where it will go from here. Easy to recommend.
I really like this book. Very realistic beginning. I love the supportive mother figure. and i love the full inhuman aspect to the story. The fact that he is literally a wolf is awesome. Great book. Keep going author!
Wow! Compared to quite a number of books I've read, this one has an astonishing begining. The tension is thick, dark yet captivating. Good work author, thumbs up on the descriptions. Keep it up.
This is an interesting story. It's dark and does not fit to everyone's taste. I will not spoil the story but here is my take: The scenes are well described and the story is engaging to read. I can really sense and feel the character's reaction and emotions reading the story. It's really a dark start and I can tell the reader had invested in the story itself. I am giving this story an overall perfect 5.0 for its potential. I can see the writer did a good job. Keep writing, you have done well!
A great premise, not to boring but not too over the top, its taken well throughout the eleven chapters given and im sure the author is cooking with something. Though that said there is still room for improvement, like in every creative work out there, master your craft and dont give up dear author
Overall smooth reading experience. The premise itself is enticing and even with the few chapters so far it’s been a treat.
This I the Author, I'm writing this cause I've always loved inhuman MC, Please give your honest review, If you have any questions that need to be answered, you can ask them here, I'll answer as soon as I see it.