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There are some grammatical mistakes and strangely fast pacing at times, but it’s overall pretty decent. Interesting that he’s addicted to painkillers… never seen something like that in a story. Keep posting, I want to read more.
There are some grammatical mistakes and strangely fast pacing at times, but it’s overall pretty decent. Interesting that he’s addicted to painkillers… never seen something like that in a story. Keep posting, I want to read more.