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J'adore đđđ , cette histoire est tellement bien Ă©crite, l'Ă©criture est vivante et passionnante et surtout dans le fond et la forme avec une Ă©volution positive contextualisĂ© , les personnages sont bien Ă©crits et dĂ©veloppĂ©s , ce qui rend l'Ă©criture et la formulation de celle si presque parfaite voir Parfaite mais ceci sous rĂ©serve
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Rlly good, aizen is op, FUN FIC KEEP GOING BRO GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD
it has potential but the translation need a little bit more tweaking to become good it's readable though so all goodđ
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good. impressive. The author makes MC strong. but not too overpowered that it's boring to read. recommended.
Isagi Yoichi âTemplateâ would be the more accurate title. Itâs a pretty good fanfic, though personally, I wouldâve preferred longer chapters. But thatâs probably just me being greedy.
It's fun to read more than the Chinese version. No racism that ruins the characters in the story
At this point this is like an entirely new fanfic with similarities to the chinese one. (I read that one I couldn't stand a single chapter it was too neurotic. Not recommended)
To gostando muito de como a histĂłria estĂĄ se desenrolando(estou sentindo que o treinador vai fazer alguma merda), estou ansioso por mais capĂtulos, vlw autor.
Great so far.Momoi for love interest +++[img=gĂŒncelleme][img=gĂŒncelleme][img=gĂŒncelleme][img=gĂŒncelleme][img=gĂŒncelleme][img=gĂŒncelleme][img=gĂŒncelleme]
Love it ,but please let him any other high other than seiren high. Other than that it all good. Joining seiren would be boring in my opinion
Great story, I hope you donât drop it. I hope you at least get to the high school arc, maybe he can join Seirin
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J'adore đđđ , cette histoire est tellement bien Ă©crite, l'Ă©criture est vivante et passionnante et surtout dans le fond et la forme avec une Ă©volution positive contextualisĂ© , les personnages sont bien Ă©crits et dĂ©veloppĂ©s , ce qui rend l'Ă©criture et la formulation de celle si presque parfaite voir Parfaite mais ceci sous rĂ©serve
Membuka SPOILER Rlly good, aizen is op, FUN FIC KEEP GOING BRO GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD
it has potential but the translation need a little bit more tweaking to become good it's readable though so all goodđ
[img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls]
good. impressive. The author makes MC strong. but not too overpowered that it's boring to read. recommended.
Isagi Yoichi âTemplateâ would be the more accurate title. Itâs a pretty good fanfic, though personally, I wouldâve preferred longer chapters. But thatâs probably just me being greedy.
It's fun to read more than the Chinese version. No racism that ruins the characters in the story
At this point this is like an entirely new fanfic with similarities to the chinese one. (I read that one I couldn't stand a single chapter it was too neurotic. Not recommended)
To gostando muito de como a histĂłria estĂĄ se desenrolando(estou sentindo que o treinador vai fazer alguma merda), estou ansioso por mais capĂtulos, vlw autor.
Great so far.Momoi for love interest +++[img=gĂŒncelleme][img=gĂŒncelleme][img=gĂŒncelleme][img=gĂŒncelleme][img=gĂŒncelleme][img=gĂŒncelleme][img=gĂŒncelleme]
Love it ,but please let him any other high other than seiren high. Other than that it all good. Joining seiren would be boring in my opinion
Great story, I hope you donât drop it. I hope you at least get to the high school arc, maybe he can join Seirin
Shameless review of the translator. Ask me whatever you want. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------