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is this your original or MTL if it's mtl then give me link or original title of this MTL
good just needs to be updated everyday at least once mc is a edgelord like the main character from cote ..................................................................................................................................
The MC is Edgelord Supreme. The fic has potential but I couldn't go past chapter 19. đ
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It ok the mc is a edge lord all he does is train and live in the woods ch 1-27 I hope for some character
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A bit forced how Hanami and the protagonist meet at the beginning, considering she was with her father and the guards who were protecting her, similar to the encounter between Hinata and Naruto. But other than that, it was very entertaining.
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I liked almost everything, I love Naruto fanfic but I don't like it when the protagonist has powers from other worlds..........................
My opinion. Positive points: The story is consistent and maintains an adequate pace. The main character is well constructed and very well detailed in history, personality and appearance. Â Negatives: In my opinion, the system is off-putting, it is generally used by beginning writers, it is a shame to be included in such a good story. Â However, you can read it without fear and I guarantee it's good.
W story man dunno if it's a translation or whatnot but great quality. A great premise especially with the downsides of the power he gets from the system.
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Membuka SPOILER is this your original or MTL if it's mtl then give me link or original title of this MTL
good just needs to be updated everyday at least once mc is a edgelord like the main character from cote ..................................................................................................................................
The MC is Edgelord Supreme. The fic has potential but I couldn't go past chapter 19. đ
just try to ruin the fic... [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
It ok the mc is a edge lord all he does is train and live in the woods ch 1-27 I hope for some character
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A bit forced how Hanami and the protagonist meet at the beginning, considering she was with her father and the guards who were protecting her, similar to the encounter between Hinata and Naruto. But other than that, it was very entertaining.
Membuka SPOILER I liked almost everything, I love Naruto fanfic but I don't like it when the protagonist has powers from other worlds..........................
My opinion. Positive points: The story is consistent and maintains an adequate pace. The main character is well constructed and very well detailed in history, personality and appearance. Â Negatives: In my opinion, the system is off-putting, it is generally used by beginning writers, it is a shame to be included in such a good story. Â However, you can read it without fear and I guarantee it's good.
W story man dunno if it's a translation or whatnot but great quality. A great premise especially with the downsides of the power he gets from the system.
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