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Good,i hope update more.thank you . .............................................................................................................
Story has potential. You need to improve your writing style and remove any errors. Also you are making mc op very fast, instead of summons he should get items and on occassion an ability.
*sigh* after the first 13 chapters the story became trash ( no offense) you should have carried on with the momentum you were going with on 13th chapter , no you talking about harem and shit 🚶🚶🚶🚶🚶🚶🚶
Good,i hope update more.thank you . .............................................................................................................
Story has potential. You need to improve your writing style and remove any errors. Also you are making mc op very fast, instead of summons he should get items and on occassion an ability.
*sigh* after the first 13 chapters the story became trash ( no offense) you should have carried on with the momentum you were going with on 13th chapter , no you talking about harem and shit 🚶🚶🚶🚶🚶🚶🚶