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Bab 1: The Start

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A spiral substance in an empty space was visible, and it looked like dots of light were creating that spiral-like substance, and those lights were creating spirals of their own that were creating another spiral of light. From all those spirals of light, light started to get out of its orbit, and in no time the dot reached another side of space. The separated light didn't make any spirals of its own. It started to glitch, and after a few moments, it stopped glitching, became bigger, and was producing a light that created brightness around it. 

A white, glowing figure was seeing this and started thinking, "Another meta universe? "It was interesting," and smiled.

< The fugure was thinking in a different language that does not exist.>

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Ep: 01-:

27/11/2983

12:38 Pm

A kid with black hair and blue eyes wearing a brown school bag and a school dress (a light gray shirt and black pants) is running.

He stops in front of a house. He opens the outer gate and starts walking faster to the main door of the house, which was slightly opened.

The boy reaches the slightly opened door

Gunshot sound-

He opened the slightly opened door widely and saw a middle-aged man with a gun standing and two dead bodies on the ground.

(A male body and a female body )

The middle-aged guy notices the boy and says,

"It looks like someone else wants to die.

Well, to be honest, I thought you had died that day, but surprisingly, you did survive, kiddo. But this time, I won't repeat that mistake again."

The guy pointed his gun in the direction of the kid. He was going to press the trigger. While posing, he looked into the boy's eyes. He saw the emotionless eyes of the boy. Looking into the boy's eyes, his expression changed to fear. His eyes started to bleed.

His arm became weak, and he dropped his gun.

Dropping sound

The sound reached the ear of the guy, and he quickly lifted the red bag, which was beside one of the dead bodies, and without wasting time, he started running outside.

He gets into the car outside, and with a fearful expression, he quickly starts the car and escapes the place.

4 Year Later

In the bustling cityscape, A young man with Black hair, Blue eyes, Fear skin, Wearing brown t -shirt, Black full slave pant.

his striking features masked by an inscrutable expression, stood at a bicycle stand, frustration etched on his face.

Wrestling with his memory, he grumbled while trying to unlock his cycle, muttering, "Ah, I hate this. I can't even recall my own cycle password. Let me think... It's not 7, it's 1. That means the password is 81656. With this memory, how will I ever get admission to the university entrance exam?"

As he walked alongside his cycle.

suddenly, searing pain gripped his entire being, a torment that felt like fleeting eternity. While the pain is making his body suffer.

<In perspective view , the time has stopped.>

Gasping for breath, he collapsed on the ground.

He starts thinking, "What the..ahh, my body, why is it burning? It feels like every nerve in my body is melting with extreme heat. I can't see anything. Am I dying?....


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