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characters have no depth and so many grammar mistakes. it is definitely written by a child. everything doesn't make any sense he suddenly enters a cooking competition ad next moment aunt may is kidnapped but she doesn't go to police after that and later Peter gets kidnapped by mutant bcoz of no reason and may stands there whole time not informing anyone. If you get high and then read it it will be good.
The grammar is so bad. The author keeps using wrong pretense and has so many misspelled words, like they keep using har instead of her, and thats just the beginning. All these little mistakes take away so much from the story.
the only thing that i hate about this fic is the grammar, but everything else, i love it so far, so please don't drop it, If you need some tool to help you with the grammar, there is a google extension called quillbot, you can use the automatic grammar checker for free actually, only if you want to
Chaotic messy unedited just bad. The plot is all over the place. Things just happen for no reason. The character seems interesting, but he never gets any kind of. Ownership of his own actions because he's slowly turning it into sanji.
characters have no depth and so many grammar mistakes. it is definitely written by a child. everything doesn't make any sense he suddenly enters a cooking competition ad next moment aunt may is kidnapped but she doesn't go to police after that and later Peter gets kidnapped by mutant bcoz of no reason and may stands there whole time not informing anyone. If you get high and then read it it will be good.
The grammar is so bad. The author keeps using wrong pretense and has so many misspelled words, like they keep using har instead of her, and thats just the beginning. All these little mistakes take away so much from the story.
the only thing that i hate about this fic is the grammar, but everything else, i love it so far, so please don't drop it, If you need some tool to help you with the grammar, there is a google extension called quillbot, you can use the automatic grammar checker for free actually, only if you want to
Chaotic messy unedited just bad. The plot is all over the place. Things just happen for no reason. The character seems interesting, but he never gets any kind of. Ownership of his own actions because he's slowly turning it into sanji.