Reviews of Pokémon: The Ultimate Adventure of Ash (Remake) by Bloodnight - Webnovel

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Eclipse_Gate12

No pokephilia what a bummer. I need Gardivoir and Lopunny

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Guard_the_Azkaban

I like this story, it's quite entertaining to a certain extent, but if I had to point out its bad points they would be the following: 1) The romance is too fast, I understand that there may be many romantic interests in the future, but literally profess eternal love on the second day knowing each other is terrible. It would have been better for you to lengthen the travel time between cities or the time they spend outdoors, you know to get to know each other better and so that love is not so forced, you could have used short jumps in time and told the facts in a correct way and concise if it seemed too difficult to you. 2) The way he catches shiny pokemon so easily is baffling, apart from the fact that it would be impossible to find a group of charmanders in the wild (on a very busy route), the fact that he finds so many shiny ones so quickly in the story It's not funny. It's been 4 or 5 days since he was reincarnated and he already has a complete team and two girlfriends for the second gym. 3) The dialogues are too forced and unnatural, they seem like something processed by a computer or a kind of Chinese translation. I mean it's not the worst but it literally kills my excitement watching the dialogue and descriptions. 4) And perhaps the most critical point, limiting movements to only 4 makes no sense in reality.

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Aayann_

awesome Pokemon fanfic, keep writing bro

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Climer_Flores

Me gusta el Harem y todo eso... Pero en lo personal me aburrió leerlo... Prácticamente era un adulto en su vida pasada pero no actual ni un poco como tal... Ya que incluso el único en vez de afrontar su mal momento simplemente decidió suicidarse... Y las relaciones los siento muy forzados para ser supuestamente "Romance"... Y no se pero como que lo siento todo muy simple y en lo personal prefiero a los protagonistas un poco más egoístas... Entre otras cosas pero espero que te vaya bien en tu novela pero yo lo dejo más por un gusto personal

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Santosh_Jalvi

Overall story is pretty good but the reatriction of only four moves only is the reason for 3.8 review staus from me because it's not the real world seting as author mention so only four moves is a bad decision to limit pokemon growth if author change these setting and freely allowed moves to learn without forgetting previous moves than i will change my review

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BlitzkriegGamer

Author should not limit pokemon known attacks with just four moves it's annoying it's like a default to prevent them from getting too strong

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MeLucawolf

Haven’t read it at all but I like your old pokemon story and since this is a remake you get 5 stars on everything

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psychotroll69

I've enjoyed reading so far and can't wait to read more. thank you, and keep up the good work.

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Derek_Lycan

great fanfic. it is really good, the story progression and immersion is top tier. one of the few fanfics that I would wait patiently for a new chapter.

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WolfLord

Good story. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

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Unrexl

This some good stuff keep going the only thing I would say is try it

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javi299

Good novel , like all the novels of this author.

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samuel_sowala

Necesito Más Capitulos 🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺 La leí toda en una sola tarde ...............................................................

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Pineapple_Pizza_4458

Really enjoying it. Keep up the good work.

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saintly2k

No Pokephilia :c Apart from that, pretty nice! But still… no Pokephilia…. :<

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lalo101097

es genial, realmente estoy disfrutandoll en grande

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Wesley_Hylry

so... a good story so far, the 18th scene was well developed, good pacing I am a defender of the harem and I hope he can develop the massive harem in a light way, without getting lost or lacking time with the girls

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Dagofsin

Great book so far looking forward to whats to come and how much of an impact he can make compared to the OG Ash.[img=update][img=recommend]

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VictorElderblood

this is a great story so keep up the amazing work 💯💯💯💯

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pablo_alegre

tres shiny el juego tiene un bug [img=En tu cara] me gustaria que el sistema que consigio no sea solo para empoderarlo. me encanto la version 1 donde el prota los entrenaba a los pokemon y estaban al borde de evolucionar cuando llegavan a los gimnacios. el unico uso de un sistema que no genera demaciado inflado al MC para no poder empatisar , es darle 1/20 algo genial(revestimiento metálico), 3/20 algo normal(superball, pociones) y 16/20 algo horrible (una botella de agua). para que no sea una muleta

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Maycon_Henrique_10

É raro encontrar boas histórias de Pokémon espero que continue escrevendo essa história só o que falta são mais capítulos porque a sua história realmente muito boa 🤔🤔😁😁😁😁👍👍👍

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Kronos_

5 stars for high quality content..........

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Anitimesc

He needs a couple pokewaifu as well hehe

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Asura69s

this is one of the best Pokemon fanfic with a satisfying vibe and it is really good hmn hmm i would say that all Pokemon gender women will be umm not good but you portrayed it to the best and I like that thanks

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inferichan

The story's flows and meshes really well, love the choice of pokemon he gets already and the translation is really well done. Hope to keep getting more chapters and can't wait to see all the harem members.

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Austin_6680

it's pretty good to be honest and more the story progresses it get's better

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Carlos_Manoel_1874

história agradável, tem suas qualidades, mas falta profundidade na trama.

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My_Mind_is_18

Good one.... keep it up ❤️ I think as one person in comment was having a guess I think u should add other reincarnated person too. just to torture them. I love novels where others get tortured by Mc. for valid reasons.