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This is one of the best books I've read on this platform. With just 25 chapters, it introduces a diverse cast of characters and intriguing conflicts. Some of the characters feel so real they practically walk off the page! While their screen time is limited so far, I'm excited to see them grow. Pyrrhus, the main character, is well-crafted. He doesn't just destroy everything in his path; instead, he's thoughtful and takes his time to act. The plot and conflicts develop naturally, making it a fantastic read. Highly recommend!
15 chapters in: I've gotta say this novel is really well articulated. The fighting! the characters coolness!!! The engagement to the readers!! the story visualization!!! KYAAAA!!!!! ehem, I mean: -Amazing debut so far. -Great usage of words. -Characters are really well written. -World building is very interesting. -Squeaky smooth story pacing. Well, there is only 15 chapters so far, still in itty bitty baby stage. But the potential this story can grow to... BOOM! Huge! 10/10 would recommend.
Author here, reviewing my own work. You probably already know what I'm going to say and yes, I believe the book is pretty awesome ✌️. Do give it a try and let me know how you find it. Also, I'll answer any questions you might have here to the best of my abilities. If it will spoil the plot though 🤷. I hope you enjoy reading the book.
This is one of the best books I've read on this platform. With just 25 chapters, it introduces a diverse cast of characters and intriguing conflicts. Some of the characters feel so real they practically walk off the page! While their screen time is limited so far, I'm excited to see them grow. Pyrrhus, the main character, is well-crafted. He doesn't just destroy everything in his path; instead, he's thoughtful and takes his time to act. The plot and conflicts develop naturally, making it a fantastic read. Highly recommend!
15 chapters in: I've gotta say this novel is really well articulated. The fighting! the characters coolness!!! The engagement to the readers!! the story visualization!!! KYAAAA!!!!! ehem, I mean: -Amazing debut so far. -Great usage of words. -Characters are really well written. -World building is very interesting. -Squeaky smooth story pacing. Well, there is only 15 chapters so far, still in itty bitty baby stage. But the potential this story can grow to... BOOM! Huge! 10/10 would recommend.
Author here, reviewing my own work. You probably already know what I'm going to say and yes, I believe the book is pretty awesome ✌️. Do give it a try and let me know how you find it. Also, I'll answer any questions you might have here to the best of my abilities. If it will spoil the plot though 🤷. I hope you enjoy reading the book.