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Someone tell me, who is the love interest, I’m on ch 337, is it Reize or Lucian? Or is there none as of yet and I’m tweaking😓 i need to know🙏🏽😓 As of the chaptrr ive read I really love the story i dont have much else to say other than that, GREAT JOB AUTHOR
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This is a genuine review. I have read 55 chapters and I can say that the idea of the story is good but the writing and editing is so bad that it actually interrupts your reading flow. It’s extremely hard to follow through when you’re reading how he fights or even how other people fight. The descriptions of fight scenes are so so so so hard to read along. However the story is good. As in the over all idea of the story and originality is there. I jsut can’t get over how hard it is to follow through with fight scenes. I’m talking directly about the infiltration chapters around chapters 48-55 or so. It’s so jarring
Currently at chapter 419, the novel is great. MC has a lot to offer to his friends. But the author is really going too far right now. We have to remember that MC is still too young. MC already accomplished a lot by the time he became barely teenager. MC fought in a war, hopped from one one world and back, became a successful researcher and so on. And now, the Author wants MC to build a fricking city! I hope that that endeavor would at least take a decade to accomplish because it's getting ridiculous! The Runesmith did it right when their MC ran away from home. It took him a lot of years to get the kind of strength he has right now. He was just always minding his own business, building up his strength slowly, giving him enough time to master his craft which in turn became his power until he could finally face threats coming his way. It's only then that the plot finally progresses. I'll say it again, The Runesmith did it right by being reasonable, letting MC grow up, building strength and mastering his craft which makes what he does understandable. Most novels these days just don't make use of timeskip that very much. To recap, this novel is great, a great read but I'm personally starting to have an issue with the MC's age.
I think, as far as novels I’ve read on this app, this might be my favourite novel yet. The Author has managed to pretty damn well nail it on their first go! Damian (Mc) has some of the best characterization, not because he stays 100% true to the original design but because he evolves in what I feel to be a natural way. The primary complaint from readers I’ve seen is that the characters are all younger than seems reasonable. I think as far as the world has been built that makes complete sense though. The only standout for age is Damian and that’s because he isn’t mentally young at all, literally. Truly up there with Mages are OP and Lord of mysteries imo. I can’t wait to see where GlaringError takes this story nor can I wait to see how the new novel takes shape.
I like the book and story of the main character it’s starts off well but the mc is young and he gets himself involved in some stupid things when his growth is already laid out. I’m at chapter 47 and already want to drop it so badly but I like the runic idea it’s what got me past chapter 10. I’ll make this comment be spoiler alert ‼️ But where I am at the MC is literally pulling himself out of a great spot to develop himself for years and obtain knighthood what isn’t even forced plus not strings attached academy. For a kid in a different kingdom who is in a bad situation. Also the thought that the knight brought the kid back to get excucted and not killing him on the spot for what he did is really pulling the strings and snapping them of my patience
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For the moment it is just a smart, well written, well developed character novel ! (Original also)
Excellent writing, however I will point out that there’s an inconsistency, the beast boy is described as having died, later he becomes somewhat significant. The description being having no breath, and no mana.
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It started really nice, then the mc adopted a kid. I can understand wanting to save him (stupid but brave and righteous), but then he decided to babysit forever, which is really not what someone who looks for a calm and peaceful life would do. Character inconsistency is a problem: he does not wish to serve anybody, then he decides to serve in an army; he has no problem killing 50 bandits in their sleep, but then he says "killing lord noble fatass was wrong"; he "expects nothing from anybody", but then he doesn't escape when captured, deciding instead to trust in the mercy of some lady he never met. These are just some of the examples. I had great expectations for this novel, that's what hurts. If there were reasons for these actions and I missed them, someone please explain. great read for a Webnovel tho: everything is pretty trash on this app, this one was worthy of my review instead
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I am giving such a low score because every time he says he is not going get in and trouble and do things to avoid them he will instead do that will get in trouble it gets rather annoying he is a typical Good guy not my taste ,then again it’s my opinion if you like such people go for it, might be a good read
Great story, the author replies to questions in the comments and fixes any misspellings quickly. I can see alot of thought went into the power system, although you may occasionally have to ask for specifics or about hypothetical situations, since the story is told from the MC's perspective and he isn't all knowing.
Another salve book? Man i just want a good book where mc is not a slave of some sort of overpowered girl. It had to end before it even started. Anyway i will give this a full stars. Just not cup of my tea.
The fights in this story are just hard to understand, mc pulled every feat with runecraft that the reader doesn’t understand what it do. But overall it’s okay 👌
I like this style, it's light enough and does not get bogged in minutae. The story is gripping and character development is good. So far read 55 chapters and quite hooked.
I really don't like his subservient character. Don't be pushed around by others, if you have the power to do so.
this is my observations for reading this so far I am completely baffled by the power is scaling in this story and it is oddly similar to the runesmith ps. might be a little late for this but it's generally not good idea to go over a hundred enemies you're aware of human brain can only calculate so much it's hard to imagine when you get that many large of numbers it's hard to visualize it just becomes confusing especially in the early chapter as you're talking about killing thousands of wolves a hundred of bandits quite a big jump in power level he just got his first class. clarify I'm not complaining I'm just pointing out how I see it besides that the authors writing is pretty good
it's a wonderful story, main character is a bit fun, no major writing errors from what I see. the magic system is very mechanical in a technical sense, although MC is the only one able to use it like this. currently mc outwits with stuff rather than raw power. only big thing is I wish there was more
This story has better grammar in the author’s mind, however when he/she is typing it out they seem to accidentally omit some words that would make a sentence flow better and make the story easier to read.
it's one of the better quality books on wn. it has a few important informations missing or change subtly change through the chapters but they aren't glaring plot holes. (well one is but most won't really notice it) I hope the author takes his time to plan and keep track of the important information to minimize the changes. that said this is a general issue with books on wn because they aren't rewritten and edited for another year or two after the first version was finished. we most likely are reading the first written out version of it
As of writing this review I’m at chapter 137 out of the 170 currently posted. As the author has mentioned in their own review, they are obviously new to writing. At first the writing is a bit choppy and personally I would enjoy some more POV hopping to show the thoughts of characters other than the MC. There is obvious improvement in the writing as the The story goes on and nothing has been so bad that I have wanted to drop the novel. So far the MC is just getting started and in in a phase of exploring and experiencing the world. I hope that later this shifts from him learning and gaining experience to making moves of his own to change the world.
Honestly I love this story Thank you author for blessing my eyes with such a beautiful story I love that the Mc prioritizes freedom over everything else and it perfectly embodies what I would feel in the situation I know it sounds crazy but I’ve never seen a Mc care so much about his freedom so much, it makes me feel like this Mc is a extension of me Anyway thank you
it's decent because the tropes are ones I like but author has a tendency to write annoying side characters. this is fine because they're mostly teenagers or children and both of those groups have a tendancy to be annoying. MC is an mc who wants to have the freedom to make his own choices. despite this being pretty important to him he inevitably tries to be a hero and involves himself in other people's shit for no reason. it doesn't help that the side characters he's doing shit for are irritating or annoying . also important to him is learning about the magic system which exists outside of just being a numerical system (yay). more time should be spent doing this because it's the best part of the novel.
on chapter 40 so far. I like the pacing it is a little slower. mc is not instantly op and has a somewhat reasonable explanation of how they got strong. World building is not super unique but has its own twist.
This is an awsome book, the only downside I'd mention is the grammar, as you have to swap/change words or add/remove commas and dots very often.
Very amazing novel 9/10 world building The main character is smart and knows how to plan things. The combat is good and well written The book is a good 10/10 very good read
The story has a fine concept, and is nice to read. World background is now simple but has potential to became good. I am interested what the story wil became.
First of all, thank you to everyone who has given my story a chance. As a newbie writer, I honestly didn’t expect much, but I’ve been pleasantly surprised by the response from so many readers. I’m writing this as an introduction to my story, and as you might have noticed, it’s pretty fast-paced. Let me explain—I'm more of a reader than a writer. I grew tired of novels that drag things out for chapter after chapter. It’s a valid style of writing, and I understand it works for many people, but it’s just not my preference. In short, this is the kind of novel I would have loved to read myself. Sure, there may be mistakes, and sometimes I trust the reader's intelligence a bit too much by leaving certain things unsaid. But I enjoy writing it this way, and I hope you enjoy reading it too. :) This is a story set in a fantasy world where the standards of life are vastly different. Power is absolute. In such a world, there are certain people who hold different views on that reality. Right now, the story is focused on Damian, but keep in mind that the narrative will feature multiple points of view (POVs). There are several main characters whose perspectives we’ll experience throughout the story. Additionally, there will be one-off or occasional POVs from other characters who aren't the primary focus but are necessary for the narrative—such as Alex or Vidalia. If you're curious about which characters have leading roles, their details, along with artwork, are included in the characters section. It's a nuanced story with many eyebrow-raising topics and themes. In this world, there’s no clear right or wrong. Much of what happens falls into a morally grey area, and the characters' actions and intentions reflect that complexity. That’s just how I imagine a world where god-like power exists among common people would be. I welcome all kinds of feedback, so please feel free to share your thoughts on what’s working and what’s not. As I mentioned, I’m not a professional writer—just someone trying to put his daydreaming fantasies into simple words. Thank you for your support! :)
Someone tell me, who is the love interest, I’m on ch 337, is it Reize or Lucian? Or is there none as of yet and I’m tweaking😓 i need to know🙏🏽😓 As of the chaptrr ive read I really love the story i dont have much else to say other than that, GREAT JOB AUTHOR
Membuka SPOILER This is a genuine review. I have read 55 chapters and I can say that the idea of the story is good but the writing and editing is so bad that it actually interrupts your reading flow. It’s extremely hard to follow through when you’re reading how he fights or even how other people fight. The descriptions of fight scenes are so so so so hard to read along. However the story is good. As in the over all idea of the story and originality is there. I jsut can’t get over how hard it is to follow through with fight scenes. I’m talking directly about the infiltration chapters around chapters 48-55 or so. It’s so jarring
Currently at chapter 419, the novel is great. MC has a lot to offer to his friends. But the author is really going too far right now. We have to remember that MC is still too young. MC already accomplished a lot by the time he became barely teenager. MC fought in a war, hopped from one one world and back, became a successful researcher and so on. And now, the Author wants MC to build a fricking city! I hope that that endeavor would at least take a decade to accomplish because it's getting ridiculous! The Runesmith did it right when their MC ran away from home. It took him a lot of years to get the kind of strength he has right now. He was just always minding his own business, building up his strength slowly, giving him enough time to master his craft which in turn became his power until he could finally face threats coming his way. It's only then that the plot finally progresses. I'll say it again, The Runesmith did it right by being reasonable, letting MC grow up, building strength and mastering his craft which makes what he does understandable. Most novels these days just don't make use of timeskip that very much. To recap, this novel is great, a great read but I'm personally starting to have an issue with the MC's age.
I think, as far as novels I’ve read on this app, this might be my favourite novel yet. The Author has managed to pretty damn well nail it on their first go! Damian (Mc) has some of the best characterization, not because he stays 100% true to the original design but because he evolves in what I feel to be a natural way. The primary complaint from readers I’ve seen is that the characters are all younger than seems reasonable. I think as far as the world has been built that makes complete sense though. The only standout for age is Damian and that’s because he isn’t mentally young at all, literally. Truly up there with Mages are OP and Lord of mysteries imo. I can’t wait to see where GlaringError takes this story nor can I wait to see how the new novel takes shape.
I like the book and story of the main character it’s starts off well but the mc is young and he gets himself involved in some stupid things when his growth is already laid out. I’m at chapter 47 and already want to drop it so badly but I like the runic idea it’s what got me past chapter 10. I’ll make this comment be spoiler alert ‼️ But where I am at the MC is literally pulling himself out of a great spot to develop himself for years and obtain knighthood what isn’t even forced plus not strings attached academy. For a kid in a different kingdom who is in a bad situation. Also the thought that the knight brought the kid back to get excucted and not killing him on the spot for what he did is really pulling the strings and snapping them of my patience
Membuka SPOILER For the moment it is just a smart, well written, well developed character novel ! (Original also)
Excellent writing, however I will point out that there’s an inconsistency, the beast boy is described as having died, later he becomes somewhat significant. The description being having no breath, and no mana.
Membuka SPOILER It started really nice, then the mc adopted a kid. I can understand wanting to save him (stupid but brave and righteous), but then he decided to babysit forever, which is really not what someone who looks for a calm and peaceful life would do. Character inconsistency is a problem: he does not wish to serve anybody, then he decides to serve in an army; he has no problem killing 50 bandits in their sleep, but then he says "killing lord noble fatass was wrong"; he "expects nothing from anybody", but then he doesn't escape when captured, deciding instead to trust in the mercy of some lady he never met. These are just some of the examples. I had great expectations for this novel, that's what hurts. If there were reasons for these actions and I missed them, someone please explain. great read for a Webnovel tho: everything is pretty trash on this app, this one was worthy of my review instead
Membuka SPOILER I am giving such a low score because every time he says he is not going get in and trouble and do things to avoid them he will instead do that will get in trouble it gets rather annoying he is a typical Good guy not my taste ,then again it’s my opinion if you like such people go for it, might be a good read
Great story, the author replies to questions in the comments and fixes any misspellings quickly. I can see alot of thought went into the power system, although you may occasionally have to ask for specifics or about hypothetical situations, since the story is told from the MC's perspective and he isn't all knowing.
Another salve book? Man i just want a good book where mc is not a slave of some sort of overpowered girl. It had to end before it even started. Anyway i will give this a full stars. Just not cup of my tea.
The fights in this story are just hard to understand, mc pulled every feat with runecraft that the reader doesn’t understand what it do. But overall it’s okay 👌
I like this style, it's light enough and does not get bogged in minutae. The story is gripping and character development is good. So far read 55 chapters and quite hooked.
I really don't like his subservient character. Don't be pushed around by others, if you have the power to do so.
this is my observations for reading this so far I am completely baffled by the power is scaling in this story and it is oddly similar to the runesmith ps. might be a little late for this but it's generally not good idea to go over a hundred enemies you're aware of human brain can only calculate so much it's hard to imagine when you get that many large of numbers it's hard to visualize it just becomes confusing especially in the early chapter as you're talking about killing thousands of wolves a hundred of bandits quite a big jump in power level he just got his first class. clarify I'm not complaining I'm just pointing out how I see it besides that the authors writing is pretty good
it's a wonderful story, main character is a bit fun, no major writing errors from what I see. the magic system is very mechanical in a technical sense, although MC is the only one able to use it like this. currently mc outwits with stuff rather than raw power. only big thing is I wish there was more
This story has better grammar in the author’s mind, however when he/she is typing it out they seem to accidentally omit some words that would make a sentence flow better and make the story easier to read.
it's one of the better quality books on wn. it has a few important informations missing or change subtly change through the chapters but they aren't glaring plot holes. (well one is but most won't really notice it) I hope the author takes his time to plan and keep track of the important information to minimize the changes. that said this is a general issue with books on wn because they aren't rewritten and edited for another year or two after the first version was finished. we most likely are reading the first written out version of it
As of writing this review I’m at chapter 137 out of the 170 currently posted. As the author has mentioned in their own review, they are obviously new to writing. At first the writing is a bit choppy and personally I would enjoy some more POV hopping to show the thoughts of characters other than the MC. There is obvious improvement in the writing as the The story goes on and nothing has been so bad that I have wanted to drop the novel. So far the MC is just getting started and in in a phase of exploring and experiencing the world. I hope that later this shifts from him learning and gaining experience to making moves of his own to change the world.
Honestly I love this story Thank you author for blessing my eyes with such a beautiful story I love that the Mc prioritizes freedom over everything else and it perfectly embodies what I would feel in the situation I know it sounds crazy but I’ve never seen a Mc care so much about his freedom so much, it makes me feel like this Mc is a extension of me Anyway thank you
it's decent because the tropes are ones I like but author has a tendency to write annoying side characters. this is fine because they're mostly teenagers or children and both of those groups have a tendancy to be annoying. MC is an mc who wants to have the freedom to make his own choices. despite this being pretty important to him he inevitably tries to be a hero and involves himself in other people's shit for no reason. it doesn't help that the side characters he's doing shit for are irritating or annoying . also important to him is learning about the magic system which exists outside of just being a numerical system (yay). more time should be spent doing this because it's the best part of the novel.
on chapter 40 so far. I like the pacing it is a little slower. mc is not instantly op and has a somewhat reasonable explanation of how they got strong. World building is not super unique but has its own twist.
This is an awsome book, the only downside I'd mention is the grammar, as you have to swap/change words or add/remove commas and dots very often.
Very amazing novel 9/10 world building The main character is smart and knows how to plan things. The combat is good and well written The book is a good 10/10 very good read
The story has a fine concept, and is nice to read. World background is now simple but has potential to became good. I am interested what the story wil became.
First of all, thank you to everyone who has given my story a chance. As a newbie writer, I honestly didn’t expect much, but I’ve been pleasantly surprised by the response from so many readers. I’m writing this as an introduction to my story, and as you might have noticed, it’s pretty fast-paced. Let me explain—I'm more of a reader than a writer. I grew tired of novels that drag things out for chapter after chapter. It’s a valid style of writing, and I understand it works for many people, but it’s just not my preference. In short, this is the kind of novel I would have loved to read myself. Sure, there may be mistakes, and sometimes I trust the reader's intelligence a bit too much by leaving certain things unsaid. But I enjoy writing it this way, and I hope you enjoy reading it too. :) This is a story set in a fantasy world where the standards of life are vastly different. Power is absolute. In such a world, there are certain people who hold different views on that reality. Right now, the story is focused on Damian, but keep in mind that the narrative will feature multiple points of view (POVs). There are several main characters whose perspectives we’ll experience throughout the story. Additionally, there will be one-off or occasional POVs from other characters who aren't the primary focus but are necessary for the narrative—such as Alex or Vidalia. If you're curious about which characters have leading roles, their details, along with artwork, are included in the characters section. It's a nuanced story with many eyebrow-raising topics and themes. In this world, there’s no clear right or wrong. Much of what happens falls into a morally grey area, and the characters' actions and intentions reflect that complexity. That’s just how I imagine a world where god-like power exists among common people would be. I welcome all kinds of feedback, so please feel free to share your thoughts on what’s working and what’s not. As I mentioned, I’m not a professional writer—just someone trying to put his daydreaming fantasies into simple words. Thank you for your support! :)