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The main character talks like a robot, and the chapters are so slow and repetitive that they become boring quickly. Additionally, he's over 10,000 years old and consoles his father about cultivation issues.
Pretty mediocre all around. This being tagged as a fast-paced story, the aspect is entirely overblown in the introductory chapters. Everything before chapter 11 is sped through with hardly any proper explanation until after the fact. Especially that friend of his that was just suddenly thrown into the mix. Not to mention the subsequent betrayal of said friend. The entire situation in itself felt forced if I’m being honest. The MC despite having power that’s at the peak of his current “universe”, had it sealed, this leading to his death at the hands of people weaker than him. Reading the synopsis, this sequence of events can of course be seen coming, but the ways it’s written is entirely unnatural. Now reincarnated into his 3rd life, the pace of the story has significantly slowed down where it feels like hardly anything is happening. There also being the issue of his current body that has subpar talent, he struggling to even advance within the initial realms of a supposed lower world, barely eeking out wins in fights against beast. The OP and invincible tags? I’ve seen nothing thus far alluding to such as the MC is shown to be having an annoyingly difficult time with things that should be beneath him. Please don’t include such tags if you can’t deliver on it. Had higher expectations for this novel, and they seem to have failed me.
Hello, Secret_Ethereal here, A supportive readers and a fellow author. Please keep your hard work. I'm a good judge of book and I could see your book has a potential in the future. Cheer up and don't lose your interest in writing just because you still find the right person to appreciate your masterpiece. Someday, the day will come!
why add so much "family support" story is good but adding so much family support is destroying the story
Thos sounds pretty cool but honestly the MC needs to have someone with him or whatever so hes not alone all the time!!! Honestly ots sad to see she the MC go through all that alone even though I havent read the book.... I only read the description!!
Very good story, well I don't have anything much to say cause that's all in my mind? Well whatever it's a great story and would recommend reading
Great novel. It has an interesting concept and read. It's different from the usual generic stuff for the most part. I think the author should work on looking into new, more realistic concepts of physics and other sciences. It'll take quite an interesting turn.
You should describe the side characters more to make the novel more immersive, you didn't introduce the characters of mc mother and father much neither any of his clan mates, and da*m the time skips.
Introduce some fml early in the story to make the harem better and have a decent backstory, and don't make the harem members annoying or useless like 90 percent of other cultivation novels
This has a good start for a new writer but you can upgrade your vocabulary to introduce more concepts and choose better words for many concepts, i like the suffering of the mc the best in this
Just as the others have said, the novel has good world building and a good protagonist, its just that author should give more details about cultivation system and the other profession's details.
I have read the 5 chapters and the start is good so far, the only problem we have is the fast progression and a lot of time skips, the author isn't explaining the cultivation realms as well. Neither he explain the profession levels. The world building and the character of Ling Tian are solid tho
I will be honest here, as a reader and not a friend. I hope you take this as a constructive criticism. The start is generic. Typical mc with miserable past that gets a heavenly opportunity, and is inconceivably talented. The vocabulary is a bit above average and is kind of decent, but still lacking in assertions and descriptions, especially when world building is considered. The story progresses in a 3rd person view that is not bad, but not properly executed and written. It seems like more like a summary rather than a engaging narrative. Some unnecessary points are highlighted while some important references are left hanging. HOWEVER, as a friend and reader, this story is in it's beginning stages, with a lot of potential to be turned around and become better and better as it goes on. Along every chapter, i will try to point of things you can improve. I have hopes for this story. ADIOS, bish
Up until the 3rd Chap It seems Very nice I am very interested to Read More but here Could have been more Details abt Cultivation realms And If the Story were to develop solely on Adventuring than Power and world building Then alas It may not be my cup of Tea I hope its about Developing his Cultivation slowly than Getting Heavenly luck suddenly
The most op mc with the hint of that xianxia generic novel ..I'll recommend all the xianxia readers to read this or atleast give it a try for once
very good novel. it's crazy how powerfull that being is. And golden immortal at the age of 5!!! Can't relate
Bro the starting is really nice and it's getting interesting too, waiting for next chapter fr [img=recommend]...........................................
🎀 it's a good read. i recommend 👍 the writing is good, obviously. the character design and world background.. um sure, it's good. sure. ... i got forced to give a review ☹️ but it's good..
The author saved my cat and bought me candies when I was just a small cultivator. Since he's such a shining beacon of light, the words written by him have to be good as well. 10/10 would recommend reading this series!
I have only read three chapter so far but to me it seems good. grammar isn't bad and it has lot of potential but right now let just wait and see how the story unfolds.
"endless cultivation" saved my life It only has 3 chapters but already this good ? Idk what to expect at 100 When they say "PEAK" if endless cultivation doesn't come to your mind idk what you are reading
The character development of the mc is really great so far ..he dies and then the supreme deing sent him to the divine realm where he was a heavenly genius and becomes extremely powerful ..but alas ...the heavens really does envy who are so talented I'll recommend the xianxia readers to read it and leave there reviews here as well ..so that it can appreciate the author and he works more ...other than lazing around
So far it is a generic xianxia novel start where he becomes orphaned and bitter in his past life but begins anew as a transmitigrator in a new world. His cultivation is amazingly quick already haven achieved the Gold Core realm. The interactions with his parents paint a loving family of cultivators. Again, it only has 3 chapters so far so I cannot make a reliable judgement, but so far it is starting off well.
The main character talks like a robot, and the chapters are so slow and repetitive that they become boring quickly. Additionally, he's over 10,000 years old and consoles his father about cultivation issues.
Pretty mediocre all around. This being tagged as a fast-paced story, the aspect is entirely overblown in the introductory chapters. Everything before chapter 11 is sped through with hardly any proper explanation until after the fact. Especially that friend of his that was just suddenly thrown into the mix. Not to mention the subsequent betrayal of said friend. The entire situation in itself felt forced if I’m being honest. The MC despite having power that’s at the peak of his current “universe”, had it sealed, this leading to his death at the hands of people weaker than him. Reading the synopsis, this sequence of events can of course be seen coming, but the ways it’s written is entirely unnatural. Now reincarnated into his 3rd life, the pace of the story has significantly slowed down where it feels like hardly anything is happening. There also being the issue of his current body that has subpar talent, he struggling to even advance within the initial realms of a supposed lower world, barely eeking out wins in fights against beast. The OP and invincible tags? I’ve seen nothing thus far alluding to such as the MC is shown to be having an annoyingly difficult time with things that should be beneath him. Please don’t include such tags if you can’t deliver on it. Had higher expectations for this novel, and they seem to have failed me.
Hello, Secret_Ethereal here, A supportive readers and a fellow author. Please keep your hard work. I'm a good judge of book and I could see your book has a potential in the future. Cheer up and don't lose your interest in writing just because you still find the right person to appreciate your masterpiece. Someday, the day will come!
why add so much "family support" story is good but adding so much family support is destroying the story
Thos sounds pretty cool but honestly the MC needs to have someone with him or whatever so hes not alone all the time!!! Honestly ots sad to see she the MC go through all that alone even though I havent read the book.... I only read the description!!
Very good story, well I don't have anything much to say cause that's all in my mind? Well whatever it's a great story and would recommend reading
Great novel. It has an interesting concept and read. It's different from the usual generic stuff for the most part. I think the author should work on looking into new, more realistic concepts of physics and other sciences. It'll take quite an interesting turn.
You should describe the side characters more to make the novel more immersive, you didn't introduce the characters of mc mother and father much neither any of his clan mates, and da*m the time skips.
Introduce some fml early in the story to make the harem better and have a decent backstory, and don't make the harem members annoying or useless like 90 percent of other cultivation novels
This has a good start for a new writer but you can upgrade your vocabulary to introduce more concepts and choose better words for many concepts, i like the suffering of the mc the best in this
Just as the others have said, the novel has good world building and a good protagonist, its just that author should give more details about cultivation system and the other profession's details.
I have read the 5 chapters and the start is good so far, the only problem we have is the fast progression and a lot of time skips, the author isn't explaining the cultivation realms as well. Neither he explain the profession levels. The world building and the character of Ling Tian are solid tho
I will be honest here, as a reader and not a friend. I hope you take this as a constructive criticism. The start is generic. Typical mc with miserable past that gets a heavenly opportunity, and is inconceivably talented. The vocabulary is a bit above average and is kind of decent, but still lacking in assertions and descriptions, especially when world building is considered. The story progresses in a 3rd person view that is not bad, but not properly executed and written. It seems like more like a summary rather than a engaging narrative. Some unnecessary points are highlighted while some important references are left hanging. HOWEVER, as a friend and reader, this story is in it's beginning stages, with a lot of potential to be turned around and become better and better as it goes on. Along every chapter, i will try to point of things you can improve. I have hopes for this story. ADIOS, bish
Up until the 3rd Chap It seems Very nice I am very interested to Read More but here Could have been more Details abt Cultivation realms And If the Story were to develop solely on Adventuring than Power and world building Then alas It may not be my cup of Tea I hope its about Developing his Cultivation slowly than Getting Heavenly luck suddenly
The most op mc with the hint of that xianxia generic novel ..I'll recommend all the xianxia readers to read this or atleast give it a try for once
very good novel. it's crazy how powerfull that being is. And golden immortal at the age of 5!!! Can't relate
Bro the starting is really nice and it's getting interesting too, waiting for next chapter fr [img=recommend]...........................................
🎀 it's a good read. i recommend 👍 the writing is good, obviously. the character design and world background.. um sure, it's good. sure. ... i got forced to give a review ☹️ but it's good..
The author saved my cat and bought me candies when I was just a small cultivator. Since he's such a shining beacon of light, the words written by him have to be good as well. 10/10 would recommend reading this series!
I have only read three chapter so far but to me it seems good. grammar isn't bad and it has lot of potential but right now let just wait and see how the story unfolds.
"endless cultivation" saved my life It only has 3 chapters but already this good ? Idk what to expect at 100 When they say "PEAK" if endless cultivation doesn't come to your mind idk what you are reading
The character development of the mc is really great so far ..he dies and then the supreme deing sent him to the divine realm where he was a heavenly genius and becomes extremely powerful ..but alas ...the heavens really does envy who are so talented I'll recommend the xianxia readers to read it and leave there reviews here as well ..so that it can appreciate the author and he works more ...other than lazing around
So far it is a generic xianxia novel start where he becomes orphaned and bitter in his past life but begins anew as a transmitigrator in a new world. His cultivation is amazingly quick already haven achieved the Gold Core realm. The interactions with his parents paint a loving family of cultivators. Again, it only has 3 chapters so far so I cannot make a reliable judgement, but so far it is starting off well.
Don’t ask me why, it’s just a simple masterpiece