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Some chapters are pretty good, but WAY too much stuff about China for it being about an Englishman. Also, do not try to make the numbers add up, THEY WON’T. MC also turns into a huge simp blowing money on anyone that is pretty and shows him the barest interest.
if your going to read this beware company names change a lot. and the money he make I see a lot complaining bc the translator screwed up he converted the money from yuan to pounds but keeps mentioning being a billionaire when he only got like 100 to 200 million. that bc the exchange rate from pounds to yuan at the time. not to sure on the time line I know it's in early 2000s. in 2003 1 pound exchanged for 14.28 yuan 100,000,000 × 14.28 = 1,428,000,000 so technically he is a billionaire just not in England. so he isn't but translator was either lazy or didn't notice
i don't get why western people is so triggered about CN novel's and patriotism in this novel there's not a lot of it it's pretty good translation or work .come on westerners stop the hypocrisy your movies and tv series always portray Russian Chinese or Mexican as bad people or bad guy's while yourself as good or in the right . manipulation and hypocrisy at its finest so why are you so triggered when CN author's or translators do the same on what you westerners are doing on a global scale portraying yourself as upright and just while in reality you just bomb a 3rd world country and take all their resources and you tell the worlds media that they're terrorist and you're just giving the oppress people freedom .false hope if you ask me and manipulation when they're done they just leave like with many countries USA "HELP and FREED" latest would be the talaban they didn't even honor their word against those they promised visa they just left them to die and they have the gall to make a movie 3 months after that portraying that they did their best when in reality they abandoned them . So Hypocrites if you don't like CN novel's and translation then don't come a read it only to comment your hypocrisy fyi: WN itself is owned by Chinese so how about you red necks, cowboys and tea loving hypocrites go somewhere else to read and spread your hypocrisy im getting tired of reading your hypocritical comments and CN patriotism this novel is not even that bad or full of CN patriotism at best mentioning or comparison is what TL or author do
This is so far, the worst story in this website, i have to congratulate the author, you are a special person, i also want to congratulate the chatgpt, it is the co author, 80% of the story is AI crap, 10% bad math and 10% cringe
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yes its very nationalistic but fun to read. your quite fast in to the story and it does sometimes jumps from one end to another end. Even true all that fun to read
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This does not fit my taste even in the slightest. PURE BRAINROT, CHINA SYNDROME, AI TRANSLATION. READ AT YOUR OWN RISK. CHINA NATIONALISM AT PEAK WITHOUT MAKING ANY SENSE.
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It starts out fine and then becomes a mess that gives you scarlet rot. My recommendation would be to not read it at all. It would just be a waste of time.
Chinese BS with Chat GPT doing the writing yet still managing to make the writing screwed.
the overall narrative is cleache. I read every chapter and it makes me want to cringe. Don't get me wrong, I enjoyed reading it, but the character development and story development is just awful, just awful. especially the latest chapters. why the F#@k would tony stark a super genus who created his own AI care about the patent for an MP3 player. Even if he did care, he could just make his own.
Math is not Mathing, it just grind my gears. The story is bad, the dialogues are heavily designed to get a rise out of readers. The Capitalism is pure wish fulfillment, there are just no ounce of realism there. Updates are fast.
It’s a pretty good plot but not the best translation, and you can tell it’s a Chinese translation just by looking at the failed attempts at math and how they say 100 million = a billion
I've read the original mtl with 1589 chapters, and this novel just goes downhill, the protagonist is a super nationalist for china and he does so much stupid stuff so please save your own time by NOT READING this CCP slop.
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it is actually good and well written. its just the mc has magic but he is reluctant to use it and prefer to go rambo. and the mc is supposed to be a reincarnator that knows that he is livingin a move eorld but he doesn't take advantage of his movie knowledge. even his cheat is sometimes forgotten. wouldn't the knowledge from hydra and shield allow him to train death soldiers and agents but somehow he has been struggling to do everything himself. i mean starks ai could have help him.
The way the story is read is pretty much unbearable. There are some random racism bits put into the story that aren’t needed as well. With the continual bits in the story that switch the meaning of sentences in the next paragraph or misquote stuff. Nah.
The protagonist of this novel is literally a Chinese and his biological father is a Chinese (both evidently affiliated with the Chinese Communist Party). However, the author claims that the protagonist and his mother are nobles from the United Kingdom; which is impossible because it goes against the legal and traditional foundations of the nobility of the British Empire. What is written above is an indication that the novel will be propaganda for Chinese supremacy... and it is.
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Low quality Chinese novel + AI Translation = Brain Rot² ............... ................. ...................... .................... .......................... ...... ...... ............... .......................... ..............
The probleme here is that chinese don’t receive education in maths so 1 bilion can change to 100 in next chapter and billionaires are people who has 120 milion of fortune
Well everything was good and all why is so much Chinese shit in every other fanfiction .
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Some chapters are pretty good, but WAY too much stuff about China for it being about an Englishman. Also, do not try to make the numbers add up, THEY WON’T. MC also turns into a huge simp blowing money on anyone that is pretty and shows him the barest interest.
if your going to read this beware company names change a lot. and the money he make I see a lot complaining bc the translator screwed up he converted the money from yuan to pounds but keeps mentioning being a billionaire when he only got like 100 to 200 million. that bc the exchange rate from pounds to yuan at the time. not to sure on the time line I know it's in early 2000s. in 2003 1 pound exchanged for 14.28 yuan 100,000,000 × 14.28 = 1,428,000,000 so technically he is a billionaire just not in England. so he isn't but translator was either lazy or didn't notice
i don't get why western people is so triggered about CN novel's and patriotism in this novel there's not a lot of it it's pretty good translation or work .come on westerners stop the hypocrisy your movies and tv series always portray Russian Chinese or Mexican as bad people or bad guy's while yourself as good or in the right . manipulation and hypocrisy at its finest so why are you so triggered when CN author's or translators do the same on what you westerners are doing on a global scale portraying yourself as upright and just while in reality you just bomb a 3rd world country and take all their resources and you tell the worlds media that they're terrorist and you're just giving the oppress people freedom .false hope if you ask me and manipulation when they're done they just leave like with many countries USA "HELP and FREED" latest would be the talaban they didn't even honor their word against those they promised visa they just left them to die and they have the gall to make a movie 3 months after that portraying that they did their best when in reality they abandoned them . So Hypocrites if you don't like CN novel's and translation then don't come a read it only to comment your hypocrisy fyi: WN itself is owned by Chinese so how about you red necks, cowboys and tea loving hypocrites go somewhere else to read and spread your hypocrisy im getting tired of reading your hypocritical comments and CN patriotism this novel is not even that bad or full of CN patriotism at best mentioning or comparison is what TL or author do
This is so far, the worst story in this website, i have to congratulate the author, you are a special person, i also want to congratulate the chatgpt, it is the co author, 80% of the story is AI crap, 10% bad math and 10% cringe
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yes its very nationalistic but fun to read. your quite fast in to the story and it does sometimes jumps from one end to another end. Even true all that fun to read
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This does not fit my taste even in the slightest. PURE BRAINROT, CHINA SYNDROME, AI TRANSLATION. READ AT YOUR OWN RISK. CHINA NATIONALISM AT PEAK WITHOUT MAKING ANY SENSE.
hey there i have been reading your fanfic and it has such a good story so i would like to know if you are interested in publishing this fanfic to my novel group and worry not we will pay you 4 to 5 dollars per thousand views on every chapter you post and your can bring more views from other platforms and the more views your novel chapters have the more money you have so if you are interested please contact me on instagram My Instagram [yurichi_adrenaline] so please consider my offer one time and maybe this collaboration will change your whole life and if you don't use instagram you can reply here as well thank you
It starts out fine and then becomes a mess that gives you scarlet rot. My recommendation would be to not read it at all. It would just be a waste of time.
Chinese BS with Chat GPT doing the writing yet still managing to make the writing screwed.
the overall narrative is cleache. I read every chapter and it makes me want to cringe. Don't get me wrong, I enjoyed reading it, but the character development and story development is just awful, just awful. especially the latest chapters. why the F#@k would tony stark a super genus who created his own AI care about the patent for an MP3 player. Even if he did care, he could just make his own.
Math is not Mathing, it just grind my gears. The story is bad, the dialogues are heavily designed to get a rise out of readers. The Capitalism is pure wish fulfillment, there are just no ounce of realism there. Updates are fast.
It’s a pretty good plot but not the best translation, and you can tell it’s a Chinese translation just by looking at the failed attempts at math and how they say 100 million = a billion
I've read the original mtl with 1589 chapters, and this novel just goes downhill, the protagonist is a super nationalist for china and he does so much stupid stuff so please save your own time by NOT READING this CCP slop.
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Membuka SPOILER it is actually good and well written. its just the mc has magic but he is reluctant to use it and prefer to go rambo. and the mc is supposed to be a reincarnator that knows that he is livingin a move eorld but he doesn't take advantage of his movie knowledge. even his cheat is sometimes forgotten. wouldn't the knowledge from hydra and shield allow him to train death soldiers and agents but somehow he has been struggling to do everything himself. i mean starks ai could have help him.
The way the story is read is pretty much unbearable. There are some random racism bits put into the story that aren’t needed as well. With the continual bits in the story that switch the meaning of sentences in the next paragraph or misquote stuff. Nah.
The protagonist of this novel is literally a Chinese and his biological father is a Chinese (both evidently affiliated with the Chinese Communist Party). However, the author claims that the protagonist and his mother are nobles from the United Kingdom; which is impossible because it goes against the legal and traditional foundations of the nobility of the British Empire. What is written above is an indication that the novel will be propaganda for Chinese supremacy... and it is.
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Low quality Chinese novel + AI Translation = Brain Rot² ............... ................. ...................... .................... .......................... ...... ...... ............... .......................... ..............
The probleme here is that chinese don’t receive education in maths so 1 bilion can change to 100 in next chapter and billionaires are people who has 120 milion of fortune
Well everything was good and all why is so much Chinese shit in every other fanfiction .
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I can’t even tell this is supposed to be the Kingsman universe