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lolololol another Chinese MTL fanfic novel? WHAHAHA that might be the reason why you stop writing(translating) this novel XD
When are you going to update it. i love this novel already so please update it [img=coins][img=In your face][img=proud] safadfnheajksfnaih vea
It's a great Naruto fanfiction!! Love it love it love it!!! 😍😍 It have a great storyline/plot and great english/translation.. I like MC/Mirai personality.. He doesn't afraid to kill Danzo, disagree with Hiruzen, etc.. I also like his solution for Hyuga affair (3rd Hokage is too weak and Kumo will not backoff like Mirai said).. His skill with Magnet release is great (railgun is awesome).. Can't wait to see what he will do next (especially how he will be the next hokage and take down Hiruzen).. Love your story author sama.. Keep up the great work 😁👍👍😍😍😍
I think you should continue. It's progressing very nicely: you already have major plot points to continue towards: upcoming struggle with Kumo, being Hokage, then maybe a time-skip for the beginning of the Uchiha Massacre plot, then time skip to canon, their arcs. It's interesting how would he deal with Suna-Konoha economic tension, with him being the one who dealt with them in the previous ninja war. What's his outlook on them? How would he deal with Gato? How would he deal with Fourth Raikage. Also, I've noticed that you post almost every day. That's a very high tempo, even considering how short some of the chapters are. If you want to contact me personally, write to me on discord: coaldplay/CoaldPlay#4570
Really a great fan fic, fun to read, no grammar mistakes. actually no mistake to point out. Very interesting story. hopefully autuor will will continue it for a long long time 😁
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This is what I like. This is what I want to read. This is what I want Naruto's fanfics to be. Refreshing originality combined with knowledge of the source material, a new adventure in established world, from the point of view of an interesting character.
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Is this a translation, I'm pretty sure that I read this somewhere, the name and abilities of the characters are the same as that one so correct me if I'm wrong.
So far so good. Keep it up please and more more more chapters 😹😹 lezz goo!
I'm liking it so far, it is great the grammar the update stability all is great and I am wondering who will be the romantic interests as there's a romance tag.
Hello hello god I will say yes, this fanfic is divine, if the author stops making this fanfic I swear to God I will find you and lock you in the basement and for now the story is extremely well done and written But I think the MC will need to get some Power Buffs and I'm waiting for it mc x tsunade hahahaha
Pretty good, great quality writing and a smart MC, its only 14 chapters for far but instant 5 stars.............................................
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THE AUTHOR DOES NOT QUIT THIS NOVEL IS FUN. AUTHOR FOR YOUR SECOND NOVEL PLOT THE PRINCESS TSUNADE OR HINATA SUMMON SESSHOMARU INUYASHA BROTHER with all his power of god dog more powerful that Kurama and Madara HERE THE TWIST THE SOUL INSIDE SESSHOMARU IS AN ANIME FAN MODERN EARTH..CMON AUTHOR THEIR NOT MANY INUYASHA NOVEL IN HERE..I HOPE THIS HELP YOU WITH LOVE ..THANK YOU FOR THIS NOVEL AUTHOR.
good story thanks for the chapter that's a totally new path the ninja way all the best
Nice start to the story! I still don't fully understand his abilities, as it wasn't exactly clear on how he used them, but other than that, it good.
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Interesting storyline with good potential [img=recommend][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=exp][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update]
So far, it's engaging & interesting. Keep up the 👍 work & give it's deserving grand completion.
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Hey Guys! If you notice any grammatical errors or potential plot holes, be sure to let me know so i can refine my story. If you have any specific concerns or areas you'd like me to focus on, feel free to mention them as well.
lolololol another Chinese MTL fanfic novel? WHAHAHA that might be the reason why you stop writing(translating) this novel XD
When are you going to update it. i love this novel already so please update it [img=coins][img=In your face][img=proud] safadfnheajksfnaih vea
It's a great Naruto fanfiction!! Love it love it love it!!! 😍😍 It have a great storyline/plot and great english/translation.. I like MC/Mirai personality.. He doesn't afraid to kill Danzo, disagree with Hiruzen, etc.. I also like his solution for Hyuga affair (3rd Hokage is too weak and Kumo will not backoff like Mirai said).. His skill with Magnet release is great (railgun is awesome).. Can't wait to see what he will do next (especially how he will be the next hokage and take down Hiruzen).. Love your story author sama.. Keep up the great work 😁👍👍😍😍😍
I think you should continue. It's progressing very nicely: you already have major plot points to continue towards: upcoming struggle with Kumo, being Hokage, then maybe a time-skip for the beginning of the Uchiha Massacre plot, then time skip to canon, their arcs. It's interesting how would he deal with Suna-Konoha economic tension, with him being the one who dealt with them in the previous ninja war. What's his outlook on them? How would he deal with Gato? How would he deal with Fourth Raikage. Also, I've noticed that you post almost every day. That's a very high tempo, even considering how short some of the chapters are. If you want to contact me personally, write to me on discord: coaldplay/CoaldPlay#4570
Really a great fan fic, fun to read, no grammar mistakes. actually no mistake to point out. Very interesting story. hopefully autuor will will continue it for a long long time 😁
👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
This is what I like. This is what I want to read. This is what I want Naruto's fanfics to be. Refreshing originality combined with knowledge of the source material, a new adventure in established world, from the point of view of an interesting character.
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Is this a translation, I'm pretty sure that I read this somewhere, the name and abilities of the characters are the same as that one so correct me if I'm wrong.
So far so good. Keep it up please and more more more chapters 😹😹 lezz goo!
I'm liking it so far, it is great the grammar the update stability all is great and I am wondering who will be the romantic interests as there's a romance tag.
Hello hello god I will say yes, this fanfic is divine, if the author stops making this fanfic I swear to God I will find you and lock you in the basement and for now the story is extremely well done and written But I think the MC will need to get some Power Buffs and I'm waiting for it mc x tsunade hahahaha
Pretty good, great quality writing and a smart MC, its only 14 chapters for far but instant 5 stars.............................................
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THE AUTHOR DOES NOT QUIT THIS NOVEL IS FUN. AUTHOR FOR YOUR SECOND NOVEL PLOT THE PRINCESS TSUNADE OR HINATA SUMMON SESSHOMARU INUYASHA BROTHER with all his power of god dog more powerful that Kurama and Madara HERE THE TWIST THE SOUL INSIDE SESSHOMARU IS AN ANIME FAN MODERN EARTH..CMON AUTHOR THEIR NOT MANY INUYASHA NOVEL IN HERE..I HOPE THIS HELP YOU WITH LOVE ..THANK YOU FOR THIS NOVEL AUTHOR.
good story thanks for the chapter that's a totally new path the ninja way all the best
Nice start to the story! I still don't fully understand his abilities, as it wasn't exactly clear on how he used them, but other than that, it good.
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Interesting storyline with good potential [img=recommend][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=exp][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update]
So far, it's engaging & interesting. Keep up the 👍 work & give it's deserving grand completion.
more more '''''''' good story [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Hey Guys! If you notice any grammatical errors or potential plot holes, be sure to let me know so i can refine my story. If you have any specific concerns or areas you'd like me to focus on, feel free to mention them as well.