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Thats great,I think that this story will be excellent.I don't met a story like this,so Goku in one piece is very interesting and exciting.The change you have been done is cool and the emotions and a narrative and emotions there is Great.
This story is such a thrilling experience, love the relationships, love the story telling maybe the only downside is how little we go into Goku and how he is a combo of a random person (SI), Luffy and obviously Goku tho there are only 13 chapters at the time of this review hopefully in the future we'll go more in depth about the topic. great job author keep the chapters flowing🤗
Thats great,I think that this story will be excellent.I don't met a story like this,so Goku in one piece is very interesting and exciting.The change you have been done is cool and the emotions and a narrative and emotions there is Great.
This story is such a thrilling experience, love the relationships, love the story telling maybe the only downside is how little we go into Goku and how he is a combo of a random person (SI), Luffy and obviously Goku tho there are only 13 chapters at the time of this review hopefully in the future we'll go more in depth about the topic. great job author keep the chapters flowing🤗