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Overall the story is progressing smoothly as the author shows the story from a different perspective. Hope the author continues posting consistently.
Hmm it's a pretty good fanfic atleast as of now, the only thing is the Mc is progressing too fast...this is something I never thought i would say but it's the truth. People are confused that this Soul land 2, no it's not it's soul land 1 but with the MC having a similar luck to the MC of Soul land 2 so it might be a little confusing in the Synopsis.
Upto 100 chapters this was one of the best douluo fanfics but then it became just another one of those fics very generic no charector devlopment after chapter 100 I gave it up after 126 chapters it became very boaring later on
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The grammar and story is very good. This story deserves 5 star in my opinion. I hope you wont go hiatus
Up to chapter 66, the whole novel was just theory and speculation of author. Hardly 5,6 chapters worth of adventure. It would have been well if you blended adventure, action, comedy together but this is equivalent to studying a school textbook with awkward jokes thrown here and there. The novel concept has potential, I hope there will be more emphasis on other categories from here on out.
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Una historia muy buena y diferente jjjjj. Me gusta especialmente como va desarrollando los personajes poco a poco. Además que el tema de los huesos espirituales externos no se tocan mucho en prácticamente ninguna historia de douluo
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So far it's one of the best douluo fanfics I've ever seen. Até agora foi uma das melhores FanFiction que já vi , mal posso esperar pelos próximos capítulos
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I learned a lot from my previous translation, and I can guarantee the quality is good. The main character will join Spirit Hall. In the original book, Spirit Hall was depicted as an evil organization, but is this really true? Read and find out.
Overall the story is progressing smoothly as the author shows the story from a different perspective. Hope the author continues posting consistently.
Hmm it's a pretty good fanfic atleast as of now, the only thing is the Mc is progressing too fast...this is something I never thought i would say but it's the truth. People are confused that this Soul land 2, no it's not it's soul land 1 but with the MC having a similar luck to the MC of Soul land 2 so it might be a little confusing in the Synopsis.
Upto 100 chapters this was one of the best douluo fanfics but then it became just another one of those fics very generic no charector devlopment after chapter 100 I gave it up after 126 chapters it became very boaring later on
Thanks ...........mxjwowkdnxvwiwowldnfbejowksndbdjeowksndbfhriwowksbdveiwowosksnbdjeowowksbdbrjeiekdjfbbdeiowksjdbdjeowosjdbdbejwoosjdbdheiwowlskdbdbeiwoskdbveuwiwkdbd
The grammar and story is very good. This story deserves 5 star in my opinion. I hope you wont go hiatus
Up to chapter 66, the whole novel was just theory and speculation of author. Hardly 5,6 chapters worth of adventure. It would have been well if you blended adventure, action, comedy together but this is equivalent to studying a school textbook with awkward jokes thrown here and there. The novel concept has potential, I hope there will be more emphasis on other categories from here on out.
I think this is simply a masterpiece.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=recommend][img=strong][img=gift][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I don't have a lot to say just keep on it my brother from another mother....[img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=gift][img=strong]
Membuka SPOILER Una historia muy buena y diferente jjjjj. Me gusta especialmente como va desarrollando los personajes poco a poco. Además que el tema de los huesos espirituales externos no se tocan mucho en prácticamente ninguna historia de douluo
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So far it's one of the best douluo fanfics I've ever seen. Até agora foi uma das melhores FanFiction que já vi , mal posso esperar pelos próximos capítulos
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I learned a lot from my previous translation, and I can guarantee the quality is good. The main character will join Spirit Hall. In the original book, Spirit Hall was depicted as an evil organization, but is this really true? Read and find out.