The Gambler’s Deceit

It's my friend that is writing it ,he is in love with novel ,fiction and tries to live in them ,forgetting about real life and now he is trying to create his own world so others can live in it so support

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Naruto_Uzumaki_9941

Only giving full reviews so that some public can come and chat with me so that we can together criticize this as i alone cant do it as it will me lonely and i dont want feel lonely, Beleive it

Heys been reading for a while , and really not expected to like it much due to realism , as i generally prefer more fiction with magic reincarnation system , you know what I am talking about , but yeah it got me hooked

The way whitmore family status and power is being shown , I am guessing that they have significant say in government status if shown any in the future in novel . Business aspect is already shown , a political will make it more fire .

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Naruto_Uzumaki_9941

Here one more 5 starts review to promote it more some brothers have increased since the lonely me but we have more to go .as such give 5 star so it starts showing the rating

It is well written for a beginner,beginning is good pace is slow but every 2-3 chapter some thing happens which keeps us hooked , first victor checking the mansion ,then his anger ,then his coming for meeting at exact time , then his business proposal , and then the tremors ,it build tension slowly

Some scenes feel like exactly copied and some feel like changed and some scenes original but i want some more focus on james shaw the scion of one of the elite family

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I_wanna_be_lazy

To me this novel/author tries to hard to be "deep" like the writing style, this is supposed to be serious novel but when I'm reading it it comes of as comical. Atleast as far as I've r I've read, that all am gonna say as I did not get far in reading it.