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Good premise and easy to read book as of now up till the end of the free chapters. Tho not sure I found a book same as this called mythical spin modern by danchez William could be wrong but pretty sure it’s the same book.
Writing quality: excellent, you barely see any mistakes but some stuff is over described if that's even a thing. Story development: horrible, in 30 chapters just about a day have passed. (The exact opposite of tags, it's very slow paced.) Character design: trash, even tho the story have just started but the characters feel 2d (or flat) if yk what i mean. World background: in 40 or so chapters we've been introduced to absolutely nothing. Summary: Don't read it... (the mc seems to have a hero-complex in the latest chapters. Again don't trust the tags.)
This is one of the best stories I've read. It's well-written, it shows the complexity of human emotions, and more. Give this story a chance, and try it.
I remember the story and I love it, but it doesn’t let me read pass chapter 22. I don’t know why it shows that the story is updating, but it doesn’t let me pass it.
ohhh, I've been looking for this book for a long time!! I read it so long ago on royalroad but I forgot the title. just checked and you'd removed all but one chapter from there. hopefully you continue uploads here!! really loved the sibling dynamic and the power system. it's a great book!!
i liked at first but it became tedious to read this book. the mc struggles against slimes first monster he encounters is a lv.5 death slime and panics when he spins for his class or what not which he lands on, (aether the conceptual being who is the embodiment of heaven and light) which is higher than a god class. and has in his abilities a master rank (which is the third rank of six total) light manipulation with a sub skill of controlling heat. and he he starts this rant or whatever toward another slime monster as if can literally understand a word he says because I bet my left nut that it doesn't speak a lick of human language. I could go on and on about the book but I'm not gonna just a waste of time this one
Good premise and easy to read book as of now up till the end of the free chapters. Tho not sure I found a book same as this called mythical spin modern by danchez William could be wrong but pretty sure it’s the same book.
Writing quality: excellent, you barely see any mistakes but some stuff is over described if that's even a thing. Story development: horrible, in 30 chapters just about a day have passed. (The exact opposite of tags, it's very slow paced.) Character design: trash, even tho the story have just started but the characters feel 2d (or flat) if yk what i mean. World background: in 40 or so chapters we've been introduced to absolutely nothing. Summary: Don't read it... (the mc seems to have a hero-complex in the latest chapters. Again don't trust the tags.)
This is one of the best stories I've read. It's well-written, it shows the complexity of human emotions, and more. Give this story a chance, and try it.
I remember the story and I love it, but it doesn’t let me read pass chapter 22. I don’t know why it shows that the story is updating, but it doesn’t let me pass it.
ohhh, I've been looking for this book for a long time!! I read it so long ago on royalroad but I forgot the title. just checked and you'd removed all but one chapter from there. hopefully you continue uploads here!! really loved the sibling dynamic and the power system. it's a great book!!
i liked at first but it became tedious to read this book. the mc struggles against slimes first monster he encounters is a lv.5 death slime and panics when he spins for his class or what not which he lands on, (aether the conceptual being who is the embodiment of heaven and light) which is higher than a god class. and has in his abilities a master rank (which is the third rank of six total) light manipulation with a sub skill of controlling heat. and he he starts this rant or whatever toward another slime monster as if can literally understand a word he says because I bet my left nut that it doesn't speak a lick of human language. I could go on and on about the book but I'm not gonna just a waste of time this one